Ren'Py Completed Milfy City [v1.0e] [ICSTOR]

[E-Dog]

Credit for 95% of those goes to ICSTOR, I only put words to the images and outline that he gives me

Could we ask Linda whats her wildest sexual experience? (Leaves plenty of room for creative writing!) :angel:

 

[picardthesecond]

I'm a writer working for ICSTOR. He hired me about a year and a half ago. I've worked on three or four other adult games as well as their writer, prior to being employed by ICSTOR.

Before that I ran erotic choose your own adventure stories on /b/ back in 2012, and currently write erotic fiction on Anonkun. I've been writing erotica for about 6 years now.

no wonder. I have to say, after giving this game a try, the writing, besides small grammar errors, is pretty decent and not over the top silly so to speak for an erotica game.

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for questions to ask chars, i don't know what qualifies or if its already covered or not

Bob - If he is aware of his Secretary attempting to get insider info (after MC finds out about it)? Does he approve of Sara's grounding? How did he and Linda/MC's Mom meet?
Linda - What was she like when younger? Ask her about the book he found/fantasies/etc. Ask Linda later if she might be too harsh on Sara's groundings (can he help get her grades up)? Is she cool with MC taking pics/vids on his phone, ahem, during their 'encounters' ?

 

[picardthesecond]

Also, just some comments on the game overall.

I just recently discovered this game after Dreams of Desire so I am bit late and trying it at maybe the right time if a new update is close. I have to say it's actually pretty decent over all for being WIP, the story setup itself and writing definitely sets it apart. But what seemed really impressive compared with a lot of other renpy games of this type is the inclusion of animation which sets it even further apart (more unique in that way?). The positioning in some of the scenes looked realistic enough too, not overly awkward or "let's show this, I saw it in a porno once". The 3d models used for all the chars are also pretty refreshing, not extreme over the top designs and they actually look semi-related (linda and caroline for example).

that last event though with Linda/Mom char made me lol more than anything for being a huge blue balling scene. Some of the previous comments were requesting anal with Linda, but man that original scene needs a resolution to that interruption for teasing Linda wanting the D real bad without protection "screw the condoms!" *oh hey Bob's/Dad person is back!* - and cue me laughing, sucks for the MC! (pretty much a tease for, whooops we got carried away oh well, i.e. internal shot/cream pie - if this becomes a scene it would nice if it were a choice if MC doesn't want to).

will be interesting to see future updates, would definitely consider donating if development continues

 

[Ennoch]

I just recently discovered this game after Dreams of Desire so I am bit late

So just recently. Hmm hmm, have to evaluate whether this shall be deemed as heresy or not.

Welcome aboard regardless. Yes, a new update is inbound soonish. Relatively speaking. And it will be about Linda so picking her to form an opinion through her is fitting

will be interesting to see future updates, would definitely consider donating if development continues

It does.

 

[Xumeey]

What does the Y in milfy stand for if you don't mind me asking?

 

[Petrarka]

do not count %! Did you forgot about the beta testing?! long-long faptest T_T

 

[HathgarNiche]

What does the Y in milfy stand for if you don't mind me asking?

I think it's meant to pluralize milf, kind of. I forget what the term is, but its used her to explain that the city is full of milf... it's milfy.

 

[Elinan]

What does the Y in milfy stand for if you don't mind me asking?

It doesn't stand for anything. It's like an adjective to describe how the city is. "The city is milfy".

 

[Volta]

Question for Linda, if there is still room for more, presumably from MC to Mom:

MC: do big boobs run in the family?
Mom: Excuse me?
MC: I've noticed that you, Caroline and Aunt all have curvy bodies but Sara ...

I may be way off but Sara, while she is my favourite character, is quite distinct from the rest of the family, hair colour, skin tone and body shape are different, she's got freckles where no one else has (aftermarket) freckles, i understand this is for variety and because she is younger than the rest of the women in the family but i can't help wondering if Linda hasn't strayed a little before. I suppose Linda could get out of the question easily by saying she's not done growing yet but it seems interesting to me the disparity between her and the rest.

PS i know Linda has a few freckles on her nose but not even close to Sara in terms of volume.

 

[Gandalf78]

Sorry to ask , but when comes the next Update ?

 

[shiama]

Sorry to ask , but when comes the next Update ?

From what I can read of the last few pages, the next update should be very close (next day or two? Although I do not know what follows when the writing is completed.)

 

[voldybuff]

Sorry to ask , but when comes the next Update ?

Probably second week of november if all goes well.

You could've just looked a page or two back

 

[Gandalf78]

Probably second week of november if all goes well.

You could've just looked a page or two back

Their where to many Comments about how the Story should continue.

 

[Walg]

Their where to many Comments about how the Story should continue.

When you're asking about updates in this thread, it's almost guaranteed that if you go back between 1 - 5 pages, you'll have someone ask about it. Probably something to keep in mind for next time.

 

[Xumeey]

It doesn't stand for anything. It's like an adjective to describe how the city is. "The city is milfy".

I see, thanks for the explanation.

 

[Onyxdime]

88% writing done.

I'm working on the last sex scene - and then will be writing all of the requested conversation topics.

 

[VOLAJU]

88% writing done.

I'm working on the last sex scene - and then will be writing all of the requested conversation topics.

requested by who? i hope by patreons or f95 have such power in the game?

 

[Onyxdime]

requested by who? i hope by patreons or f95 have such power in the game?

Both I asked on the Patreon's discord last night, and then on here too.

Edit: It's not too late if you still have a suggested question to ask Bob/Linda. Feel free to shoot it across now!

 

[Ennoch]

I'm still waiting when we can finally have a chat with Judy and discuss her relation with mom and her shady moves instilling the notion of incestual intercourse! She needs to be punished for leading us down the path of such corruption, for abusing her skills inp psychology, her authority over us at school! ..and because she is so damn gorgeous and teasing us so badly! Serious lewding is the only way!

 

[Teaber]

Both I asked on the Patreon's discord last night, and then on here too.

Edit: It's not too late if you still have a suggested question to ask Bob/Linda. Feel free to shoot it across now!

Bob is obviously earning a considerable amount of cash—at least up to the point when the twins begin sinking his boat—, but, while he has a nice house and drives an expensive car, he shows almost all the worst disadvantages of middle age: He is bald, fat, wears a ridiculous moustache, and painfully lacks style. Is he so confident regarding his socioeconomic status that he does not care what everyone else thinks (including his wife)? Is he really doing this to himself on purpose (another form of self-humiliation)? Or is he thinking about improving his physical appearance? A trip to Turkey in order to get some hair implants, perhaps?

P.S. Too long, I know. Just something I have been thinking about this character, whom I find strangely funny and intriguing.