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Hi,
Game updated!
Hey, just to let you know but contractions, such as "I'll" or "I'm" or "We're" and so on are not totally interchangeable with the non-contracted forms.
Here is an example;
This isn't correct, typically a contraction is not proceeded by punctuation, such as a period or comma, so in this case it should be;
"Yes, I am."
I hope this helps.
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Contractions preceded by commas are not that uncommon. Whether to use contracted forms or non-contracted is mostly a matter of personal choice, unless the writing is meant to be formal (in which case contractions are never acceptable), OR, as in this case, one is incorrectly ending a sentence with a contraction (again, never acceptable.) Had there been anything after the contraction (such as "Yes, I'm Bob," etc.,) it would have been just fine. I find that when correcting someone's English grammar, it does help to be specific about exactly how their grammar is incorrect so that they actually learn from the experience and enrich their knowledge of a language that is exceedingly difficult for foreign speakers to master.
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Yeah, I typed proceeded, as in comma after the contraction. I'm not saying it'd never happen, but most times you'd not have a comma after something like "I'll" and it'd probably be easier for a non-native speaker to just avoid those situations unless they have a good understanding of it.
Also I'm not trying to be some sort of grammar police or anything, I'm not going to get into punctuation and conjunctions or something like that, I'm just trying to help someone make their writing acceptable to general reader.
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Thank you!
My native language is portuguese.
I spend more time writing than rendering.
So much so that sometimes I can't find a sentence in English that fits the feeling of my thinking.
But one thing this project showed me is that it's never too late to learn new things or improve what we already know.
Hi,
Yes. Giving the player the chance to choose whether or not to get the character pregnant is something I plan on.
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Dude, I was literally gonna post the same thing, just looking first to see if someone had already posted it, and there it is.
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Hey, Just started playing on the accept the dream route. The music during the Arielle sex scene doesn't quite fit haha. I think the nature of the scene makes a better fit for a more surreal atmospheric music than that upbeat country song lol. Actually, the music that plays just prior to the scene when explaining time fits pretty well with the scene. Probably better to just continue to use that music as it goes into the scene. Just my 2 cents.
Hey, Just started playing on the accept the dream route. The music during the Arielle sex scene doesn't quite fit haha. I think the nature of the scene makes a better fit for a more surreal atmospheric music than that upbeat country song lol. Actually, the music that plays just prior to the scene when explaining time fits pretty well with the scene. Probably better to just continue to use that music as it goes into the scene. Just my 2 cents.
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Am I the only one really creeped out by the weird bumpy dick the dev gave the MC?
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Haven't played this, but that puts me in mind of another game where the dick model looks like a rat chewed on the rim of the glans, that then got infected and looks 'bubbly'. Is that what this is? If so, I'm not weirded out by that particular dick model. I'm repulsed/horrified by it and wish it would never appear again anywhere.
Edit: Yup. Seen the dick now. It's revolting. Better be a temporary thing cause of the parasite, cause I ain't looking at that for an entire game. Nothing is worth looking at that pustulent thing for an entire game, or even a significant minority of it.
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