- Dec 23, 2019
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I got to start this all over again since I lost the folder to my saves.
ANYway, so we have someone dying on our couch, and instead of making ONE TRIP (since you can only MAKE one trip per DAY) no we go in for an item..return with ONE item, do something at home that we could have done THERE and saved the WEEKS worth of time, where anyone who isn't superhuman would have easily died by then.
BUT we are given a pat on the back for how QUICKLY...lol we were getting everything together.
We were looking for a solid path and were going to grab an item to put together at home then come back into progress...we went HOME to tell someone about it and spent ANOTHER day going to the SAME DAMN place we were JUST at to grab that item!
We go in and find a box we need to open..with the SAME item we carry around with us, and can do RIGHT THERE, but NOPE, gotsta bring this back and try to figure out a way to open it!
Just ridiculous, if you want to reader to have to draw out the time, or to make choices, how about giving them a proper roadblock rather than these redundant ones??
OH NO I can't make it past here without the item that's twenty feet to my right...what-EVER will I DO, well, guess I gotsta go on back and DISCUSS this conundrum to find a GOOD solution...WHAT I should go BACK to the same area I was JUST in ....THATS BRILLIANT, you are SO smart, I would have NEVER thought about this myself because the MC is retarded and BLIND.
PLEASE think for me, I can't BEAR to, it's FAR too difficult when I have to remember important things like breathing...and walking oh at the same TIME even...and blinking, yeah I hear that's important too...uuhh OH, and emptying my bladder...I am still working on that which gets messy since I can't find my adult diapers with the cute bunnies on them!
ANYway, so we have someone dying on our couch, and instead of making ONE TRIP (since you can only MAKE one trip per DAY) no we go in for an item..return with ONE item, do something at home that we could have done THERE and saved the WEEKS worth of time, where anyone who isn't superhuman would have easily died by then.
BUT we are given a pat on the back for how QUICKLY...lol we were getting everything together.
We were looking for a solid path and were going to grab an item to put together at home then come back into progress...we went HOME to tell someone about it and spent ANOTHER day going to the SAME DAMN place we were JUST at to grab that item!
We go in and find a box we need to open..with the SAME item we carry around with us, and can do RIGHT THERE, but NOPE, gotsta bring this back and try to figure out a way to open it!
Just ridiculous, if you want to reader to have to draw out the time, or to make choices, how about giving them a proper roadblock rather than these redundant ones??
OH NO I can't make it past here without the item that's twenty feet to my right...what-EVER will I DO, well, guess I gotsta go on back and DISCUSS this conundrum to find a GOOD solution...WHAT I should go BACK to the same area I was JUST in ....THATS BRILLIANT, you are SO smart, I would have NEVER thought about this myself because the MC is retarded and BLIND.
PLEASE think for me, I can't BEAR to, it's FAR too difficult when I have to remember important things like breathing...and walking oh at the same TIME even...and blinking, yeah I hear that's important too...uuhh OH, and emptying my bladder...I am still working on that which gets messy since I can't find my adult diapers with the cute bunnies on them!
