- Jul 3, 2017
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I don't know what to think of this to be honest, but here's a few points to take in.
1. Hard NTR. No option to deter it. The game is set from the son's point of view where he essentially just watches a guy who looks about 10 years older than him (but is also apparently his school bully) screw his mum.
2. No animations. Character model for Mum is great, but no animations honestly is a waste.
3. It's very basic. There's not really a story, a goal, paths to go down. It's more like a visual novel, but even then, it's an extremely basic one.
In my honest and wholehearted opinion I say there's a lot that needs to change to make this a good game. Flesh out the story, learn how to animate, and add in different paths to help grow your support for the game, otherwise it will die and if it stays like this I expect to see an "Abandoned" tag next to it very soon. There are a few parts I do like but there's more that I personally dislike about the "game" than anything else. Maybe try making it so the son tries to seduce the Mother and has a rivalry going on with this bully to make it a bit more interesting. Have a bit more backstory, a few other characters and interests for the MC to pursue because otherwise I have to say it's a pretty boring game.
Likewise, to the dev(s), don't take any of this as harsh criticism, but more constructive criticism. I like to see games with potential succeed. I've seen many games with decent potential fail for one reason or an other so I'd much rather see the advice taken on board and used well than have another thread with abandoned tag to it. Keep working and you'll get there.
1. Hard NTR. No option to deter it. The game is set from the son's point of view where he essentially just watches a guy who looks about 10 years older than him (but is also apparently his school bully) screw his mum.
2. No animations. Character model for Mum is great, but no animations honestly is a waste.
3. It's very basic. There's not really a story, a goal, paths to go down. It's more like a visual novel, but even then, it's an extremely basic one.
In my honest and wholehearted opinion I say there's a lot that needs to change to make this a good game. Flesh out the story, learn how to animate, and add in different paths to help grow your support for the game, otherwise it will die and if it stays like this I expect to see an "Abandoned" tag next to it very soon. There are a few parts I do like but there's more that I personally dislike about the "game" than anything else. Maybe try making it so the son tries to seduce the Mother and has a rivalry going on with this bully to make it a bit more interesting. Have a bit more backstory, a few other characters and interests for the MC to pursue because otherwise I have to say it's a pretty boring game.
Likewise, to the dev(s), don't take any of this as harsh criticism, but more constructive criticism. I like to see games with potential succeed. I've seen many games with decent potential fail for one reason or an other so I'd much rather see the advice taken on board and used well than have another thread with abandoned tag to it. Keep working and you'll get there.
