Hm, must have missed or forgot about the scarecrow part. Yes, I agree. More variation for the reward scenes is needed. No hora means no soul.
About the commissions... do you expect that he pays all of them while making no profit? Won't happen and I cant blame the man for that. Saint hour only happens if someone went crazy.
What could work is several people sharing the costs and communicate with the dev what's needed for the game. That would be awesome as hell but I'm already in wishland and this is stronk pirate forum.
Thanks for playing the game. I'm preparing a point by point answer to you review, but since it's too long, I'll post it later.
As for the discussion, I have some things to say. Even if I'm willing to commission art for the game, those commissions would be in US dollar, which is a problem because if I turn all my salary into dollars, I'd have U$ 200 each month. Real is very devaluated to the dollar, so for me to buy dollars to hire commissions is far too expensive. I'd have to look for national artists for that. Your idea, Porn_Jesus, is the most viable one since I'd prefer to not have direct contact with the money, among other reasons to be able to deny I received any profit with this game in case of DMCA (Yeah, I know that non-profiting stuff can also get DMCAed, but at least without involving money it reduces the chances of Torotoro coming after me, he isn't Nintendo after all). I'm just not sure how many people would be willing to do it, but we can try as we go. I didn't yet because at least for now, I didn't have any idea that could use said commissions. But a scene with Marie is totally on the table eventually.
It does get tedious hearing Luka say "Nope, sorry, my not!grandma said I can't snoo-snoo the catgirl" every time he gets propositioned, but at the same time, I can understand why he ultimately doesn't have full-on intercourse with them. "That" scene after that one dude gets "rock hard" wouldn't have as big of an impact if Luka had lost his "virginity" (in the sense he finally got his peen in a poon) to like, 6 other girls beforehand. My advice would be to add more variety to later scenes; some handjobs, some footjobs, some tail/flower jobs, maybe someone who *really* wants to skirt past the prohibition by suggesting anal (I can already imagine Luka's shocked face, lol); the sky's the limit. Oh yeah, and apparently Setouchi does commissions on
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, so if UD felt like it, they could get some commissions from him if they wanted (as long as the remake remains uncommercialized and all).
That's exactly why I decided to not have consensual vaginal sex before that scene, after that it's ok.
As for having variety, I must remind you that to have a new sex scene, besides the sex scene itself (with its variation, of course) I need to have a portrait for the girl and if possible the facesheet (the multiple expressions), and the scenario, which means replacing or adding someone into an existing one, or create one from zero (possibly a sidequest if the main quest don't fit). Handjobs/footjobs/flowerjobs are options, but I sincerely am not a big fan of the genre so the scenes I come up with would probably be subpar.
As for anal... Let's see, if you know a good game with monster girls which have anal, tell me, because I do not. MGQ has two maybe three anal scenes, Violate Hero has none, Desire Dungeon has none, Drain Dungeon has one in each game, which I already intended to use but later, Monster Girl Encyclopedia (from where Ruby and Isis came from) has none. In general, in my experience, monster girl games tend to not have much anal at all. Though I think anal is too close to real sex for me include before that scene, I still think it kills the impact.
I'm trying to vary it as I can though. Ruby and Isis's scene is long tongue licking, the brownies' is a double blowjob, Anastacia's is a titblowjob too. I'm trying to find more options to avoid repetition as I can, but I admit that the idea of consensual scenes is really recent, and I haven't searched for many games to find them. I have already extracted the assets of the games I just mentioned, plus Paradox, of course, and I'm using them for now, but that doesn't mean I wouldn't use assets from other games.
As for games I'd be willing to... "Borrow" assets, I'd prefer they'd be 5+ years old so out the profitable window, or at least not having an official translation, and, as such, not profitable here anyway. Or be called Violated Hero because it's a waste of good art. If you guys have any suggestions, please, tell me. If the game is untranslated, please post a link to it too. My PC is ready to play Japanese games, or just post a link to the CG gallery in the e-hentai or something.
