Ren'Py Mother's Devotion [v0.12] [FluffyStudio]

[FeropsisFenarue]

Thank you.

Regarding your Gif...You are Angry at the Sandbox aspect?

You can't please everyone. Sandbox games are fine. They tend to be slower, require more thought, and patience on the part of the person playing the game. Not everyone wanting to fap to porn has that patience.

That said, some devs idea of sandbox is a barren landscape of places to click with little guidance to new players on what they should be doing, or how they are impacting the game.

 

[klon35]

I'm open for anyone who can offer a Translation. I myself, do not have the time to also translate the Game, as I Render and Code. I have barley time to do the other two.

I asked because I thought you would write this game in German and then translate it into English.

 

[Jonah Arkon]

Just another version 0.1 that will never change as this theme has been done more times that can be counted. With most remaining at v0.1 or less, though there are a few rare ones that make it higher but lack any real substance. All fail to pull the reader in or even make it a challenge. There is never any real clues or hits as to what or where to go your just left to hang in the wind. With images or animation that have no emotional facial expressions of joy, pleasure or happiness.
Though not all is lost, as this could be a contender but only time will tell. As of right now, I will pass based on the above postes as this game is not ready for a review at this time. Maybe in a year or two if it ever gets an update. Will good luck anyways.

 

[ntrvip]

Watching this! The story looks promising as f*ck

 

[Trasher2018]

2. Nothing I can really add to this. That is your opinion formed from the environment you have lived in and grew up in. I grew up in an environment where living with your Family is so normal, you have multiple Generations in one Household.

Oh - dont misunderstand me. I know how that works. But my mother would cancel my rent contract in her house if I would treat her like that. I live in the same house so, she is my mom AND landlady

But maybe in "the environment you have lived in and grew up in" it is common to be an asshole to your mom and she wont kick you out of HER house. The big brother (as far as i can say from that first scene) is a dick and scumbag and should be disposed asap.

 

[SCORPION.SKY]

This looks very good

 

[FluffyStudio]

Just another version 0.1 that will never change as this theme has been done more times that can be counted. With most remaining at v0.1 or less, though there are a few rare ones that make it higher but lack any real substance. All fail to pull the reader in or even make it a challenge. There is never any real clues or hits as to what or where to go your just left to hang in the wind. With images or animation that have no emotional facial expressions of joy, pleasure or happiness.
Though not all is lost, as this could be a contender but only time will tell. As of right now, I will pass based on the above postes as this game is not ready for a review at this time. Maybe in a year or two if it ever gets an update. Will good luck anyways.

Hey there. The Developer of the Game. I'm not gonna fucking abandon ship! To make it very clear. I'm doing this because I love it. I fucking Love it. Its a Passion. I'm not after Money! I felt its important to make that clear! I'm gonna listen to the people who have geniuen Criticism and will make improvements or changes accordingly. Updates will come our every 2 Months, with I believe a fair amount of content added.

 

[Vrijgeest]

Sandboxes are not popular as every survey taken has shown. Sandboxes dont have a story just a grind. You missed the sandbox tag otherwise I would never see it. These days you can exclude up to 10 tags in your selection (TG!).
BTW get yourself a good proofreader as you need one.

 

[FluffyStudio]

Oh - dont misunderstand me. I know how that works. But my mother would cancel my rent contract in her house if I would treat her like that. I live in the same house so, she is my mom AND landlady

But maybe in "the environment you have lived in and grew up in" it is common to be an asshole to your mom and she wont kick you out of HER house. The big brother (as far as i can say from that first scene) is a dick and scumbag and should be disposed asap.

Yeah, it's pure fantasy that a Mother treated like that would let it slide. My Mom would beat me down to hell personally and then make sure the Devil personally takes care of me ( I love my mother, she is my best friend, but she means business)
I achieved my goal in making you not like the Character so I'm happy. He is for those who want to choose a route to Humiliate and Submissed the Mother. Everyone who is not into it, will be able to avoid that ofcourse.

 

[ludobico]

i'm devote to this game!

 

[coffeeaddicted]

My advice as a avid female protagonist enjoyer (played almost everyone on the site except some japanese ones)
If you want the game to stand out add some dynamic with the relationships, and avoid turning the mother into a mattress that gets done by every ugly bastard in the vicinity.
0)Most importantly, dont bring in too many characters, more scenes/development with a handful of characters is better than half a blowjob with a hundred
1)Dynamic relationship with the sons with one being hot for the mom while the other one has to be seduced
2)Sister or the daughter being the corrupting influence who dominates her to fulfill her own fantasies including incest and more
4)Make pregnancy an in game mechanic not game over or ending
5)Sons friend or bully whom the mom strongly dislikes/hates but has sex with for personal gain not because of blackmail to show her agency
6)Femme Fatale path where the mc uses sex, corruption and manipulation to achieve a position of power and or wealth

File Structure and hierarchy of the game looks great, very clean and solid, good foundation for long development and expansion.
Might want to move scripts into a subfolder structure too like images and add a debug feature.

Bonus) "Forced"/unable to resist mechanic, for example the MC can acquire a trait "likes big dick", scene with e.g. her daughters boyfriend who has a big dick, if MC does not have the trait she can resist the temptation, if she has the trait the option to resist is greyed out thus forcing the player

7) I definitely could see a bondage path with the two sons dominating her. On the picture they look already "notgeil" and would love to get some stress relieve.

I think it really depends on how the character is. What is she like? How is she aligned?
Anyway, i would love me some bondage.
Hopefully they wank at least sometimes.

 

[FluffyStudio]

Sandboxes are not popular as every survey taken has shown. Sandboxes dont have a story just a grind. You missed the sandbox tag otherwise I would never see it. These days you can exclude up to 10 tags in your selection (TG!).
BTW get yourself a good proofreader as you need one.

I don't care about how popular a tag is. I'm creating a Game I would like to Play and if others enjoy that, that makes me happy. I'm uploading the Game to honestly receive validation and share my work, not to make any money out of it.

If anyone would like to proof read, I would love to send them a copy of the Text files I receive from Renpy.

 

[FluffyStudio]

7) I definitely could see a bondage path with the two sons dominating her. On the picture they look already "notgeil" and would love to get some stress relieve.

I think it really depends on how the character is. What is she like? How is she aligned?
Anyway, i would love me some bondage.
Hopefully they wank at least sometimes.

A Bondage path is definitely something that can be added to the Older son. He is something of a Antagonist Character. He is the Character most players are meant to hate. I planned to have a some kind of Submission route, where is getting dominated by her Older Son. Definitely can the Younger one be a part.

 

[Vrijgeest]

I don't care about how popular a tag is. I'm creating a Game I would like to Play and if others enjoy that, that makes me happy. I'm uploading the Game to honestly receive validation and share my work, not to make any money out of it.

If anyone would like to proof read, I would love to send them a copy of the Text files I receive from Renpy.

Just saying but a good proofreader is not cheap.

 

[coffeeaddicted]

I don't care about how popular a tag is. I'm creating a Game I would like to Play and if others enjoy that, that makes me happy. I'm uploading the Game to honestly receive validation and share my work, not to make any money out of it.

If anyone would like to proof read, I would love to send them a copy of the Text files I receive from Renpy.

I will follow your game. Seems interesting.
Since the game is early in development i do not expect to much yet.
All i can say is ich folge dir.

 

[FluffyStudio]

Just saying but a good proofreader is not cheap.

I guess will get a bad one xD Haha....

 

[McZoy]

People do like freedom. Don't be surprised by haters, they don't even play the game and just complain about what they don't like.

Just keep working on your game the way you envisioned it, let those people that are complaining create their own mods instead of convincing you to change the entire game just to appeal to them, it is impossible to make everyone happy.

We like the freedom, mate and I don't belong to any haters group. The thing that I don't like is meaningless grinding without the proper guidance. I do not try to convince anyone, I am just mentioning that sandbox tag can lead many players to avoid a project. You can easily notice that the most successful games have an easy game play and are usually based in an intrigued story.

 

[Meaning Less]

I am just mentioning that sandbox tag can lead many players to avoid a project.

When many games in the first page of more viewed threads have the sandbox tag or have rpgm navigation, your argument makes no sense at all.

Personally I prefer sandbox games, nothing worse than the kinetic novel tag.

 

[McZoy]

When many games in the first page of more viewed threads have the sandbox tag or have rpgm navigation, your argument makes no sense at all.

Personally I prefer sandbox games, nothing worse than the kinetic novel tag.

Maybe I am right, maybe I am wrong. Maybe I don't have enough spare time. KR

 

[jackkane]

Oh - dont misunderstand me. I know how that works. But my mother would cancel my rent contract in her house if I would treat her like that. I live in the same house so, she is my mom AND landlady

But maybe in "the environment you have lived in and grew up in" it is common to be an asshole to your mom and she wont kick you out of HER house. The big brother (as far as i can say from that first scene) is a dick and scumbag and should be disposed asap.

hell if my brothers or dad treated my mom like this asshat they wouldn't be able to walk.