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Yea, I think you can submit a ticket as the dev to fix that. I decided to stop waiting and try them out after posting; really enjoy your work.
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For a standard 'porno movie scene' I found the writing kind of nice and cute. I like how the scene explores the spice of having secret sex as well as voyeuristic sex.
Is there a way to get around having to click twice to progress most of the time? It's mildly infuriating.
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Thank dog. I wish more game girls had smaller tits.
I turn 20 this month and am a B-Cup.
I turn 20 this month and am a B-Cup.
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Thank you so much for the super detailed criticism. As ever limitations of time and resources dictate the story. I try and release content at least once a week onYou want to know, here you get!
I watched the other VNs of your power team. Will relax with this one too.
I like the concepts of your VNs.
I can live with the lenght of them. A lower stage amount, without the need to stretch it too long, just to have a bigger thing.
Writing:
Personally i like the thought texts of your characters, Koala. They aren't just "Me, Ape, wanna bang this chick now!" style. They are more personal and believable in many points and yeah don't we forget, they are hot and naughty and can bring players into the right mood. Maybe i would have raised the inner conflicts in your special releationship themes. They are a bit too short handled for my taste and for the situations.
Examples, thought in a minute:
For Betflix maybe Holly would have slaped her sister at first touch, ran away ashamed and her sister followed her, hugged her and confessed her feelings or urge. Sister asks to forgive her curiosity. Holly conflicts with her sisterly love and her strange lust, finally kiss her sister and in the following heat sister or Holly drag the other girl back to main scene. Start to touch each other, but when sister asked Holly to lick her, Holly at first is unsure, until her sister licked her first (nipples or vag)...
Or Vickys dad, who could have sent Vicky loudly/ angry to her room, when she begins to seduce him or when she presented her lower stuff. He sits on his bed with some dad conflicted, but also confused sexual thoughts of Vicky, his growing daughter. Begins to walk the room, staring at his notebook with the memory about his little girl doing things. Sits back on bed and decide to forget the seen things. But then bad girl Vicky sneaks back to parents bedroom fully naked and tries to seduce the dad more agressively and starts forcefully sexual to drag him into the blackmail role or or or...
Artwork:
I'm a big fan of virtual girls who don't have these odd no graviity DD (gimme milk) boobs, especially if they are in these VNs 18-20 years or below. As i know, in my world there are much more A / B sized girls and woman, than C / D or bigger. Thank you for the "realism"! I appreciate it. I think i can count the games i've seen, who don't use baloons, by two hands.
You also decided to generate remarkable faces, not just copied plastic surgery victims. Thanks again, a big plus.
And i really like the settings around the characters with your chosen stages. Also the lighting is on it's own level. Most games don't care about lighting, but it's important for the scene atmosphere. You hit the spot. Thanks!!!!
Conclussion:
Short, but high quality stuff. Thanks to all the people who worked on your projects!
Much better as some of these "active" games where you have to repeat things forever, see many times the same to have at some later point an effect/ unlock and where you destroy your mouse with a million clicks to repeat the procederes.
Short also means, lower chance of abandomware, because the project was thought too big.
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, so comics need to get to the point quickly but believably. Lain takes those completed comics and turns them into VNs. I wish I could have a little more character growth, but I need to be able to tell a full (naughty) story in about 100 pages, so there just isn't time to flesh them out (pun intended). As for the characters, art and the situations, the lack of porn that has any real plot other than "aggressive man bangs two balloons with sloppy holes" is the reason I started this. I wanted cute, beautiful girls that fit my preferred slim, small boobied aesthetic. I wanted them to be in control of the situations. I wanted the situations to be real life (ish). And most importantly, I wanted the girls to have a good time! We girls get horny too, you know. And we have fantasies a little more nuanced than being raped over and over after getting plastic surgery.
So I made Betflix about a year and a half ago! Lots of people seemed to enjoy it, so I kept making content. Now I have nearly 20 complete comic series within the
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, 3 ongoing comics, dozens of photo sets, videos and 4 VNs starring over 30 girls! I plan on doing this full time, so when I don't have a job getting in the way I can dictate a bit more time to making something a little more long form and dedicated to the VN format.
Thanks again!
When I see games like this with models like that, I immediately begin downloading before looking at reviews or anything. Guaranteed, I'm not the only one.
Thanks for the kind comments everyone.
HoboCop86
You probably have a bad antivirus installed that is disabling or deleting the exe. Try turning off your antivirus.
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If only there had been some more movement during the sex, then it would have been GREAT! The little story was really good tho
The little story was really good tho 
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