I finally checked this out, I could swear there was another game with a similar set up. Man this was long and I figured there'd be more action after all this time. It took me a while to realize who Jennifer's model reminded me of, she was making me think of an older version of Emily from Cure My Addiction. There's grammar, spelling and at least one error where you're called by a label name and another "Cole" and a pet peeve of calling genitalia "sex" gets used way too much. Another pet peeve is going into the thoughts of NPCs, I know it's easier than doing more rendering but I'd prefer thoughts being transmitted through expressions and body language. Also not a fan showing conversations the MC isn't listening to, unless the MC has mind reading powers, super hearing or eavesdropping, I'm not a fan. Also weird "open world" segment early on that seems like it was tested, had negative feed back and dropped.
I'm not sure how much these variables really matter but if your "scores" are tied you should be getting an option of which route to take but it seems like they cancel each other out. I hope the ball is actually starting to roll on this, I'll give it another look after a couple updates.
