Ren'Py Abandoned My Happy Family [Ch. 2 Intro Part 1] [SayWhatProdutions]

[The_Rascal]

The first impression of this game doesn't engage or impress. The "Happy" should definitely be in quotes because no one is. The characters aren't 'likeable,' especially the MC. Do I really want tons of angst (and unresolved issues from the past) in a fantasy porn game? It's early so maybe this turns around, but I have doubts.

The story line does open the door for the family to pull together against outsiders, so perhaps things will improve. That said, the game feels pretty bad to me at this point. My reasoning goes like this...when everybody needs therapy, porn doesn't fit well from a fantasy perspective. Sex in this context begins to feel like a (symptom of)/(response to) problems that are a bit too 'real life' to be comfortable. Suffering characters may be sympathetic, but sex needs a context where it fits. This is not a corruption story (yet?) and the whole family starts in a downward spiral (IMHO). I'll give this a bit more time but it may not be worth the effort for me. YMMV.

 

[Alkemides]

Dude, if you wanted a place with many black guys you should not have chosen Greece XD. Barely any blacks over there. I suggest you either change the place or replace the black guys with Leonidas style daddies.

 

[Antger]

I’m certainly enjoying the game so far, maybe think of making the tits a bit smaller on the sisters SayWhatProductions ? But you continue to make the game how you want pal. Thank you for the time and effort that you’ve put in so far, it really pisses me off when folks complain about something that’s ...free? Looking forward to when the “Big Daddy” boyfriend of mum comes onto the scene.

 

[Liam the Handyman]

Needs a big disclaimer that NTR is NOT avoidable.

The spoilers sounded too open ended and might be giving the impression that MC can do something about the erm... blackening situation.

 

[NewTricks]

As to the girlfriend cheating on MC it is kind of cleverly done that the only reason she isn't is that the black guy in Greece is gay. There isn't much hope that she is going to be loyal going forward if her story about how she acted at the gay bar is to be believed and there is no hope that MC is going to be able to win his family back given how he has completely ruined those relationships just fine without a black guy with a magic dick being in the picture. The renders in this update have improved by leaps and bounds over the demo and surprisingly this VN is more story driven than I thought it would be. Even so, the outcome of said story isn't in doubt and probably needs the kinetic novel tag. There are two choices to either be decent or be a creep but I don't think that either action toward the sisters is going to have any impact whatsoever on the relationships once he returns and they are already corrupted.

 

[Satarial]

Damn, you're saying there's no NTR?

While there's obvious signs of it. His gf cheating on him... Damn...
A stranger picksup your girl, your girl doesn't react/ say shit to him, throws her in the pool, still she doesn't say much.
A fking stranger clicks photos of her and she sends them to you.

And then you say the girl's not cheating


Is this what you are saying?

this is how we know you didn't actually check out the game. mc's girlfriend is straight up cheating on him and she isn't even remotely subtle about it.

black guy in Greece is gay

 

[magicscientist]

The last version I played seemed promising, so i was interested to see this one... but... i dunno, its a little strange. These updates are always so short as it is, and I feel like there is a lot of filler that goes on a bit too long. I didn't really find this interesting at all, feels like a rom com.... and oh, i just thought i'd ask, but whats up with the characters in these games always being black? I always get so distracted and taken out of the experience, because just feels so like...racist? toi be honest?

 

[marlonmyers]

Have the prota sex interaction with the mom? or all is ntr in this game.

 

[gilgamesh9]

Well if anyone hasn't noticed this is about bbc fucking all the women. If you think this isn't about full blown NTR your delusional. But I'm all for it, there really aren't many high quality NTR games that have gone anywhere yet.

 

[longjohngold]

This is better than the earlier demo thing made it look, there's actually some plot and build up and whatnot, abd should be interesting to see the family get corrupted, I definitely want to see this progress.

 

[LewdLife]

black guy in Greece is gay

How do you know that

 

[Satarial]

How do you know that

I carefully read the dialogues, despite the fact that I do not know English well

 

[Lefty Southpaw]

I stopped playing to come here for this: Chapter one - MC is going to Europe with his friend Billy's family, and even says how excited he is to be in Paris the next day. Chapter two - MC is shown staring out the window of a plane. Next to him is a dude named Chester in what looks like onesie tanuki pajamas, who says they are going to Japan.

What? Is MC asleep? Is he dreaming? Did he get on the wrong plane? I wouldn't be here now if it weren't for other continuity errors I found between the two chapters. I started a new game because it's been so long since I played chapter one, so it was easy to spot something, and go "wait, what?" Some of it I could dismiss as the ages I set the characters, and the dialog not being dynamic enough to allow for those changes, but anything else is just poor writing. It reveals a dev who can't be bothered to pay attention to what he has already done.

I haven't found anything beyond fixing yet, an update could clear all of it, but it just pulls you out of the story. That's annoying.

 

[SayWhatProductions]

I stopped playing to come here for this: Chapter one - MC is going to Europe with his friend Billy's family, and even says how excited he is to be in Paris the next day. Chapter two - MC is shown staring out the window of a plane. Next to him is a dude named Chester in what looks like onesie tanuki pajamas, who says they are going to Japan.

What? Is MC asleep? Is he dreaming? Did he get on the wrong plane? I wouldn't be here now if it weren't for other continuity errors I found between the two chapters. I started a new game because it's been so long since I played chapter one, so it was easy to spot something, and go "wait, what?" Some of it I could dismiss as the ages I set the characters, and the dialog not being dynamic enough to allow for those changes, but anything else is just poor writing. It reveals a dev who can't be bothered to pay attention to what he has already done.

I haven't found anything beyond fixing yet, an update could clear all of it, but it just pulls you out of the story. That's annoying.

Hey, yea I had to change the location for Chesters character and forgot to replace the earlier dialogue. I realized the error after I released the update, but I believe it's already been changed, unless I missed another one. But that'll be changed when the full chapter 1 is released.

 

[SayWhatProductions]

Damn, you're saying there's no NTR?

While there's obvious signs of it. His gf cheating on him... Damn...
A stranger picksup your girl, your girl doesn't react/ say shit to him, throws her in the pool, still she doesn't say much.
A fking stranger clicks photos of her and she sends them to you.

And then you say the girl's not cheating


Is this what you are saying?

I carefully read the dialogues, despite the fact that I do not know English well

Hey, thanks for reading my VN story. This game isn't all about sex and lewd acts. This is a game about story. Sure when the time comes you can skip through it all and just jump to the action but you'll miss the story which myself and every other dev out there does their best to weave.

And yes, because of the dialogue. That is exactly what has been said. Kyla did not cheat, but while in a drunken state she was tempted. This scene is meant as the catalyst that propels Prim and Kyla into their BBC curiosity. You'd know that if you read

 

[disaster007]

Hey, thanks for reading my VN story. This game isn't all about sex and lewd acts. This is a game about story. Sure when the time comes you can skip through it all and just jump to the action but you'll miss the story which myself and every other dev out there does their best to weave.

And yes, because of the dialogue. That is exactly what has been said. Kyla did not cheat, but while in a drunken state she was tempted. This scene is meant as the catalyst that propels Prim and Kyla into their BBC curiosity. You'd know that if you read

bro i understood ur intention of showing them bbc ur story is perfect

 

[brata]

so nothing yet with main character and his mom?

 

[Old Man From Scene 24]

One of those games I wish I found later on/near completion.

 

[NewTricks]

so nothing yet with main character and his mom?

Nothing yet with anyone really. I don't forsee the MC getting any action at all. He is only in the game to get humiliated and maybe even raped himself by the invincible black guy who doesn't have anything better to do than torment this random white boy by turning his family into mindless fuck sleeves.

 

[demonslender]

black guy in Greece is gay

there is not a chance in hell any of us are supposed to believe that when he was groping her at the pool. that's just a lie to cover up her cheating. women in real life do this shit all the time.