VN Ren'Py Abandoned My Little Katelyn [Ch. 3] [Ellaraia]

[Ellaraia]

and that is why you "poker face" the useless twat after all..we are only here for Little Katelyn right? Lucy is yesterday's news..didnt like her after the first couple lines of dialogue..so if the dev wanted us to not like her..the dev succeeded..lol...focus on the title character..a couple other games that are titled after the dame have other dames you love(A,HS,LwM)(HAHAAA!!) who the majority of the other dames you want more..this game makes sure you want nothing to do with the "other" dames cause they suck donkey anus

While I wouldn't say I want you to hate Lucy, I definitely don't want you to want to stay with her rather than being with Katelyn. Katelyn is, as you say, the point of the game.

 

[Ellaraia]

Tested the VN finally ... What i dislike for now are both parents (seems little brainfucked, Dad more then Mom) ... What i ultimatly hate is this fucking Girlfriend Bitch, but hey many people do the same and run after idiotic gals/boys ... First Option i wish for is to dump the fucking Girlfriend

The game was like 10 minutes if you chose to dump Lucy, so I removed the option. It will be added back in Chapter 4.

 

[Sural Argonus]

Death to Lucy!

Or at least mindbreak her and use her as a cockslave. (heheh)

 

[Ellaraia]

Tested the VN finally ... What i dislike for now are both parents (seems little brainfucked, Dad more then Mom) ... What i ultimatly hate is this fucking Girlfriend Bitch, but hey many people do the same and run after idiotic gals/boys ... First Option i wish for is to dump the fucking Girlfriend

And the parents won't be involved much going forward. I don't thick either are in Chapter 3.

 

[Sural Argonus]

Actually I like the character of Lucy, but if I ever had a GF act like that...She'd be dumped rather quickly and harshly.

Wouldn't mind taming Sophie tho.

 

[Nachtvogel]

Mmh nice little game so far.

I didnt like that i had to kiss Katelyn while im still in a relationship with Lucy. I would rather dump her first before i try my luck with Katelyn.

 

[TripleZ]

I had my suspicions before, but now i'm pretty sure Lucy and Sophie are rubbing vaginas

 

[Ellaraia]

Mmh nice little game so far.

I didnt like that i had to kiss Katelyn while im still in a relationship with Lucy. I would rather dump her first before i try my luck with Katelyn.

You'll be able to dump Lucy when she misses your date, but I disabled it because it cut the play time too much.

 

[Ellaraia]

I had my suspicions before, but now i'm pretty sure Lucy and Sophie are rubbing vaginas

I don't actually think real lesbians ever scissor. I think it's a porn-only thing.

I'm not one though, so I may be wrong.

 

[Safetydummy]

Wow, that was a pretty awesome update... I almost feel bad about predicting the reluctant HJ, but to her credit she at least finished- I figured she'd have some excuse to run away and avoid it OR it was just going to be a dream sequence (and she still wouldn't have finished, because the MC just can't catch a break- you know you're a loser when you're blue-balled in your own fantasies). Lol

I have read through the comments and did (initially) have the thought about a past trauma preventing the consummation of the Lucy and the MC's relationship, but I don't think the Dev wants to rehash the previous game by hitting the same plot points/beats.
If they're in a relationship- they should...oh, I don't know- communicate? If she could at least tell the MC what the problem is- maybe he'd be more understanding and patient. They're at the point in the their relationship where they're touching and licking each other- maybe they should have had a conversation first? Lucy just comes off as really unlikable and so does her friend- you're almost rooting for the MC to cheat on her (regardless of the name of the game).

Maybe Lucy is secretly a shape shifter and Sophie is her bodyguard/security,and Lucy is hiding from the Space Mob and she's in the Universal Witness Protection Program because she witnessed an abduction gone wrong and Katelyn was sent from Jupiter to eliminate the evidence and the witness.

Also, I do have one serious question. We've been "in" game for what, 3-4 days now? Just HOW much laundry does this family generate? Katelyn's done laundry everyday after school each time- do they all have just 2 sets of clothes or have they just been saving it up for years, waiting for a foreign exchange student that they could go all "Cinderella" on? Lol The Mum was already intolerable- the father seems even worse... Are Katelyn, Jessica, and the MC the only decent people in the game? OR are we supposed to wish "render cancer" on the rest of the characters?

Seriously though, this update has raised more questions than it answered and that's what going to keep me coming back for more. Can't wait for the next one.

P.S. As I learned from Lady Gaga- I went with the P-P-P-P-P-P-P-P-oker Face. You could say, "She had it, 'cumming'..." YEEEEEEEEAAAAaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!! (*The Who's "Won't Get Fooled Again" starts playing.*)

 

[Ellaraia]

Wow, that was a pretty awesome update... I almost feel bad about predicting the reluctant HJ, but to her credit she at least finished- I figured she'd have some excuse to run away and avoid it OR it was just going to be a dream sequence (and she still wouldn't have finished, because the MC just can't catch a break- you know you're a loser when you're blue-balled in your own fantasies). Lol

I have read through the comments and did (initially) have the thought about a past trauma preventing the consummation of the Lucy and the MC's relationship, but I don't think the Dev wants to rehash the previous game by hitting the same plot points/beats.
If they're in a relationship- they should...oh, I don't know- communicate? If she could at least tell the MC what the problem is- maybe he'd be more understanding and patient. They're at the point in the their relationship where they're touching and licking each other- maybe they should have had a conversation first? Lucy just comes off as really unlikable and so does her friend- you're almost rooting for the MC to cheat on her (regardless of the name of the game).

Maybe Lucy is secretly a shape shifter and Sophie is her bodyguard/security,and Lucy is hiding from the Space Mob and she's in the Universal Witness Protection Program because she witnessed an abduction gone wrong and Katelyn was sent from Jupiter to eliminate the evidence and the witness.

Also, I do have one serious question. We've been "in" game for what, 3-4 days now? Just HOW much laundry does this family generate? Katelyn's done laundry everyday after school each time- do they all have just 2 sets of clothes or have they just been saving it up for years, waiting for a foreign exchange student that they could go all "Cinderella" on? Lol The Mum was already intolerable- the father seems even worse... Are Katelyn, Jessica, and the MC the only decent people in the game? OR are we supposed to wish "render cancer" on the rest of the characters?

Seriously though, this update has raised more questions than it answered and that's what going to keep me coming back for more. Can't wait for the next one.

P.S. As I learned from Lady Gaga- I went with the P-P-P-P-P-P-P-P-oker Face. You could say, "She had it, 'cumming'..." YEEEEEEEEAAAAaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!! (*The Who's "Won't Get Fooled Again" starts playing.*)

Fuck dream sequences. In games on here, a dream and reality is all just renders, yet still I hate them.

I think Lucy/Sophie will become more likeable when they start talking more. Wanting to leave Lucy for Katelyn is sort of the point though.

Katelyn wears 2 sets of clothes each day, plus what she sleeps in. Player's clothes all look very similar, so I have no idea how much he wears. Katelyn is washing her, your and Jessica's laundry. I don't think 1 basket is reasonable.

 

[ThunderRob]

I don't actually think real lesbians ever scissor. I think it's a porn-only thing.

I'm not one though, so I may be wrong.

@Avaron1974 confirm or deny please

 

[Sural Argonus]

I don't have any lesbian friends that I am close enough with to feel comfortable asking if scissoring is a real thing or not...hehe

but yeah...I get the feeling that Sophie is the reason Lucy keeps breaking dates. Just have to wait and see how things play out.

 

[Safetydummy]

@Ellaraia
Fuck dream sequences. In games on here, a dream and reality is all just renders, yet still I hate them.
###Well said. Lol

I think Lucy/Sophie will become more likeable when they start talking more. Wanting to leave Lucy for Katelyn is sort of the point though.
###That's a mighty big "IF". I did have another thought (it does happen from time to time), maybe whatever factor [X] there is for Lucy being the way she is- perhaps she shouldn't be in/isn't ready for a relationship until she comes to terms/deals with it. It's a tad unfair to the other person to be "in" and "not in" the relationship- especially if they won't communicate.

Katelyn wears 2 sets of clothes each day, plus what she sleeps in. Player's clothes all look very similar, so I have no idea how much he wears. Katelyn is washing her, your and Jessica's laundry. I don't think 1 basket is reasonable.
###I suppose so- I was under the impression that she was doing the parent's laundry also. It just seemed a bit excessive, that's all. I'm sure it's not a huge plot point. Lol

 

[Ellaraia]

I don't have any lesbian friends that I am close enough with to feel comfortable asking if scissoring is a real thing or not...hehe

but yeah...I get the feeling that Sophie is the reason Lucy keeps breaking dates. Just have to wait and see how things play out.

My Theory:

Lucy wears a wig. Before both of the dates she missed, she was making cooking and her wig fell in the food and got messy. She didn't have time to wash it and so had to cancel.
It's not mentioned where the first date was, so I assume it was a picnic and she made sandwiches. For the second, Lucy wanted something to eat so they didn't have to pay for cinema snacks.


Edit: This explains why she's so secretive. It also explains why no sex. sex would mean a high probability of her wig falling off and her secret being uncovered. I kinda want to change the story now. haha

Edit 2: I now realise that the only reason she'd need a wig would be cancer, which would make it very sad.

 

[Safetydummy]

I don't actually think real lesbians ever scissor. I think it's a porn-only thing.

I'm not one though, so I may be wrong.

QUOTE="ThunderRob, post: 1839209, member: 607078"]
@Avaron1974 confirm or deny please
[/QUOTE]

You could watch the South Park episode "D-Yikes" where Ms. Garrison defends the Lesbian bar a la "300" style.

 

[Ellaraia]

@Ellaraia
Fuck dream sequences. In games on here, a dream and reality is all just renders, yet still I hate them.
###Well said. Lol

I think Lucy/Sophie will become more likeable when they start talking more. Wanting to leave Lucy for Katelyn is sort of the point though.
###That's a mighty big "IF". I did have another thought (it does happen from time to time), maybe whatever factor [X] there is for Lucy being the way she is- perhaps she shouldn't be in/isn't ready for a relationship until she comes to terms/deals with it. It's a tad unfair to the other person to be "in" and "not in" the relationship- especially if they won't communicate.

Katelyn wears 2 sets of clothes each day, plus what she sleeps in. Player's clothes all look very similar, so I have no idea how much he wears. Katelyn is washing her, your and Jessica's laundry. I don't think 1 basket is reasonable.
###I suppose so- I was under the impression that she was doing the parent's laundry also. It just seemed a bit excessive, that's all. I'm sure it's not a huge plot point. Lol

The relationship could be Lucy trying to move on. She's trying out having a boyfriend. For him, it's rather risk reward. If she gets through her issues, she'll probably love him a lot. If she doesn't then he gets dumped without much fun.

In the plans, the laundry part is more fleshed out. The scene in the bathroom, was actually in the laundry room and you walk in on Katelyn when she's taken her clothes off to wash them. She was changing there rather than in her bedroom because it's quicker that way. but the laundry room asset was crap so i had to replace it. In the plans, it's explained more that you, Katelyn and Jessica all do their own laundry usually, but now Katelyn does all three's.

 

[ThunderRob]

You could watch the South Park episode "D-Yikes" where Ms. Garrison defends the Lesbian bar a la "300" style.

no no nooooo..i keep a lesbian on retainer for just these situations!! better than google!!!

 

[Deleted member 15555]

im sorry to say this but im not liking the game at all after playing the 2chapter, it seems we are forced on a relationship just to be punched in the face with no content at all with her (and i dont mean sex at all) ,just stupid and incoherents acts of a girlfriend that will rather be with sophie than us ( and if she is cheating on the mc with that girl, thats even more points to not like this)
the parents act as fucking assholes to both the mc and kate (atleast the dad).
Dunno what updates you will make in the future to keep me interested in lucy since all you are doing is making us hate her, i dont really see the point to have her and is more annoying than likeable.
Guess i will wait for 2 more chapter before ignoring this game since i loved your 1st game.

 

[Safetydummy]

@Ellaraia
The relationship could be Lucy trying to move on. She's trying out having a boyfriend. For him, it's rather risk reward. If she gets through her issues, she'll probably love him a lot. If she doesn't then he gets dumped without much fun.
###You're kind of a bastard- ye know that, don't ye. I like how, you as the Dev, use words/phrases like you "don't" know what's going to happen... Lol You actually give both sides of the issue/conflict as if it may somehow change from what you've written. Lol

In the plans, the laundry part is more fleshed out. The scene in the bathroom, was actually in the laundry room and you walk in on Katelyn when she's taken her clothes off to wash them. She was changing there rather than in her bedroom because it's quicker that way. but the laundry room asset was crap so i had to replace it. In the plans, it's explained more that you, Katelyn and Jessica all do their own laundry usually, but now Katelyn does all three's.
###Hmmm, this again brings me back to my original point- I wasn't aware they were called "foreign ex-slave students". I have no doubt there's a reason for it, but it still doesn't seem particularly justified. If Katelyn can do it- then it's a pretty safe bet that Jessica and the MC could do their own as well...or at least take turns doing it in rotation. Also, the father's treatment/comments towards Katelyn were just so wrong and unwarranted- why didn't she kick him in the stones, at the very least? The parents just treat her like a SCC, and I'm sure there a mystery there- yet to be unraveled, but damn...they both really suck. The mother seems overbearing and abusive- the father is just a straight...up...prick. I certainly hope that Katelyn-ella get a Fairy Godmother, so that she can go the MC's ball(s). Lol

Forgot to mention- really like the new sig.