i wanted to spend some time to tell the developer what i honestly think about the game, keep in mind that my english can become engrish for "pasta pizza mandolino" reasons.
I'm liking the game so far, it makes me feel some of the struggle the characters went through, it is a balanced game, you have the love, the strong women, the problematic ones and i like it.
For this very reason i wanna lend my help and make some constructive critique so that you can improve as an artist (i often help my gf, an illustrator, to search for mistakes or things to improve in her art, i'm a bit of a perfectionist and that's why i can't put my mind to start doing my own art)
The characters are a bit similar in shapes, clothes ect, they are a bit "plain" making the artwork feel a bit old, i still like them don't get me wrong.
The environment it's simple making it look unfinished, in the house almost everything is grey, you can change some color of detail to make it look happier and more colorful.
I didn't get the ages of the characters, i don't know if i missed something but it feels much more clear to know the age/age difference.
Sometimes the poses looks unnatural or stiff, making the scene less alive or believable
The biggest problem for me are some anatomical issues and you can notice it the most when mary gives MC a titjob at her house, he is laying on the ground and no girl can do that pose, half of her body is underground; in the beginning of the game lucy turns and the tail remains still without adapting to the new pose.
I think that if you can get better on these aspects of the game and with your art in general as the game goes on, many more people will enjoy your game.
Good job for now, i'll keep playing the game, i hope this won't make you sad or angry, i mean no harm and felt like helping a good fap provider
Edit: i'm an ass man, and i feel a lack of booty shots (for example when Sandra leaves the room in the morning you can show her leaving so we see dat ass)