VN Ren'Py Abandoned My Sister's Devious Plot [v0.4] [MacroxssZ]

[Zenithtb]

Yeah, and like... what are the chances that a bunch of girls are going to throw themselves at the MC. We should definitely make this more realistic. Get rid of the harem and like 80% of the other tags. <Snip>

There's realistic in the context of a porn game, and unrealistic even in that. You know there's a difference, right?

Guy can get a lot of girls easily, even their mother, sister, whomever. Realistic in a porn game.

Guy can snap his fingers and the girls change age, height and / or colour to his immediate preferences. Needs a more detailed explanation.

 

[Darkrift411]

There's realistic in the context of a porn game, and unrealistic even in that. You know there's a difference, right?

Guy can get a lot of girls easily, even their mother, sister, whomever. Realistic in a porn game.

Guy can snap his fingers and the girls change age, height and / or colour to his immediate preferences. Needs a more detailed explanation.

Being able to get access to an RPG is likely not as hard as performing magic on yourself. As far as the fathers note, maybe he left it there on purpose so he could see if someone was tailing the son. I would consider both of these more on the unlikely side than on the "impossible without magic or tech from 200+ years in the future".

 

[DoomTanker]

Its a default renpy game. You can take the images/scripts and use the renpy.exe from other games and it would work just fine. Your AV is prob screwed up or you misread (or possible you mis-downloaded.... some of those sites show ads that might look like the download if you are not careful.

Lots of people have already tried this game and you are the first with AV issues.

na it was a full blown flag on my av no mistake there

 

[Zenithtb]

na it was a full blown flag on my av no mistake there

Well, I haven't seen anyone else report it, and not had the issue myself.

Maybe submit the exe to an online virus checker.

 

[ccxvidonaferens]

Ultimately it is not about whether things are realistic or unrealistic. It's whether the internal logic of the world the story takes place in is sufficiently robust to allow for the willing suspension of disbelief from the player. As is true in all works of fiction. What is also true is that the level at which the willing suspension of disbelief is broken is also individual to each particular player, reader, viewer etc depending on the medium.

 

[goulet1995]

Futa Groot is the delusion of a madman. He has been committed and hopefully is getting the help he needs.

And without being too detailed, none of the people working on this are the type that see 2 of your girls having some fun with each other as being sharing/NTR. They are not going to leave the MC for each other just because one of them used a dildo on the other. MC is safe in his position so is not prohibiting them from playing around. MC and one of the girls doing a DP on another? Probably. Hopefully. If hentai has taught us anything, the more horny you keep them, the more they want it right?

perfect reason i always read through threads seems lesbian will play a large role and be unavoidable this ruins the game for me personally but atleast you where clear about it

 

[ctrdyv5yu66t]

Yes maybe this too

 

[Prj3tC]

Ultimately it is not about whether things are realistic or unrealistic. It's whether the internal logic of the world the story takes place in is sufficiently robust to allow for the willing suspension of disbelief from the player. As is true in all works of fiction. What is also true is that the level at which the willing suspension of disbelief is broken is also individual to each particular player, reader, viewer etc depending on the medium.

Beautifully said!

 

[ramvivat]

Ultimately it is not about whether things are realistic or unrealistic. It's whether the internal logic of the world the story takes place in is sufficiently robust to allow for the willing suspension of disbelief from the player. As is true in all works of fiction. What is also true is that the level at which the willing suspension of disbelief is broken is also individual to each particular player, reader, viewer etc depending on the medium.

right, the whole point is the logic of the world, whether it is possible to believe that he lives his own life. I remember in one preface to some of Michael Moorcock's novels it was said that it is very easy to draw a sea where yellow water washes red sand under a green sky - the most difficult thing is to make this picture come to life. yes, if the invented world is logical within itself, then it doesn’t give a damn about the fact that it is illogical with respect to OUR REAL world. it's like on Nintendo there is a game lunar ball - where you can set both gravity and sliding force. but essentially it's all the same billiards. Yes, it's billiards but with a different internal logic.

 

[Zenithtb]

yes, if the invented world is logical within itself, then it doesn’t give a damn about the fact that it is illogical with respect to OUR REAL world.

Which was the point I was trying to make; this type of game has a few 'defaults':

• You're not too ugly, probably above average
• The women around you are all magically single
• " " find you attractive
• And so on and so on.

But if the writer wants to go off-script a little (eg, have MC rob a shop with an elite high-tech device), it needs to be sold a little ahead of time, not just plucked from their arse right at that moment ("Ooh, look, behind this bin - a high-tech device which I magically know how to use with my school education").

Foreshadow, introduce your own game's rules, explain how this situation occurred, not just "He found the device, it was easy to use and if you don't like that it's a p0rn game, ffs".

My 2c.

 

[louisamay]

Its a default renpy game. You can take the images/scripts and use the renpy.exe from other games and it would work just fine. Your AV is prob screwed up or you misread (or possible you mis-downloaded.... some of those sites show ads that might look like the download if you are not careful.

Lots of people have already tried this game and you are the first with AV issues.

Not the first

 

[louisamay]

I have tried downloading the game 3 times, and each time i still get this weird 'static' shot whenever the little sister is 'nude' or close. It's very irritating.
What is that? Is it a comic trope? Or some censorship attempt? I also DL'd the "uncensor' patch. --?? Either way, I have decided to dump the game and maybe try it later.

 

[Freshenstein]

I have tried downloading the game 3 times, and each time i still get this weird 'static' shot whenever the little sister is 'nude' or close. It's very irritating.
What is that? Is it a comic trope? Or some censorship attempt? I also DL'd the "uncensor' patch. --?? Either way, I have decided to dump the game and maybe try it later.

Yes that is the censorship. You need to download the uncensored patch and extract it. Make sure you overwrite the files if it asks you.

And if you're still having issues, feel free to join the discord. Uncensored version links are posted there.

 

[louisamay]

Yes that is the censorship. You need to download the uncensored patch and extract it. Make sure you overwrite the files if it asks you.

And if you're still having issues, feel free to join the discord. Uncensored version links are posted there.

Thank you -- it worked. Appreciated.

 

[TheDick69+]

right, the whole point is the logic of the world, whether it is possible to believe that he lives his own life. I remember in one preface to some of Michael Moorcock's novels it was said that it is very easy to draw a sea where yellow water washes red sand under a green sky - the most difficult thing is to make this picture come to life. yes, if the invented world is logical within itself, then it doesn’t give a damn about the fact that it is illogical with respect to OUR REAL world. it's like on Nintendo there is a game lunar ball - where you can set both gravity and sliding force. but essentially it's all the same billiards. Yes, it's billiards but with a different internal logic.

To see my fave author suddenly mentioned on this pages made me really happy! And it was so right what he said.

 

[ThaDude1977]

Are there any tags that isn't included in there?

Yeah Romance. With all those tags planned doesn't seem to leave much room for a story. Seems like it's going to be another chaotic VN with not much story. Also seems like lesbian content is going to be a big part of the game from what i've read. Not my cup of tea. I'll pass.

 

[Deleted member 2309595]

Yeah Romance. With all those tags planned doesn't seem to leave much room for a story. Seems like it's going to be another chaotic VN with not much story. Also seems like lesbian content is going to be a big part of the game from what i've read. Not my cup of tea. I'll pass.

Lesbian will NOT be a big part of the game, idk where this came from but its not correct. nothing will happen if mc is not present.

 

[ThaDude1977]

Lesbian will NOT be a big part of the game, idk where this came from but its not correct. nothing will happen if mc is not present.

Ok i'll take your word for it since your the Dev. Will this be more on the romantic or just a meet and fuck kinda story?

 

[Deleted member 2309595]

Ok i'll take your word for it since your the Dev. Will this be more on the romantic or just a meet and fuck kinda story?

It will not be a slow burn and there will be enough bonding with the girls but it wont be a meet and fuck. I dont want to give out too much away tho.

 

[Deleted member 4865569]

Lesbian will NOT be a big part of the game, idk where this came from but its not correct. nothing will happen if mc is not present.

ok good news to me ..

so to clear up..

NO GIRLS with fool around with each other without the MC?

OK then I will add this to my watch list.