Ah, alright. I was just curious is all.
Whoops! I forgot to say what I think about this one, didn't I?
Well, both the renders and the progression of the story were pretty well on-point in my opinion. I really liked that you decided to add the mechanic of having different routes to the story to appease your audience and add more variety to your game despite it being more work for you. It's things like that which really make people appreciate your efforts that much more, so thanks for doing that. Out of respect for your effort, I will of course play through all available routes just to see the work you've put in with each one even though I'm honestly just here for the daughter as I keep saying. :winkytongue:
If you want specifics, I particularly enjoyed the shower scene (as I'm sure most did). It's really sexy how she can be so bold and meek at the same time. I made another GIF for this one as well:
Still, it felt pretty short, and I don't recall if I made it clear what I meant about that when I commented about your last update (what I also think most everybody means when they say it), so I'm gonna go ahead and do that here: People aren't referring to the renders or the amount of renders when they talk about your updates being short (they are many and gratuitous and we love that about your updates); what they're referring to is the amount of writing (the text itself). I wanted clarify that because I recall some back-and-forth here from members when bringing it up. "Good but short update!" "Short? There were over 400 renders" and so on... :coldsweat:
As someone with an extensive writing background, though, I can personally understand how hard it can be to add substance and properly put to text your characters expressing themselves in ways that add meaning to the story while also better fleshing them out as individuals. A good example of a missed opportunity to add more to the writing was skipping the buffet. Even without anything sexy or romantic going on there, you could've used that to add more to the characters (like showing us more about the mother, daughter, or both) with just some simple conversation points and possibly use that to build the groundwork for further storyline(s) in the future too.
I do hope that once the relationship progresses along with the daughter that she'll have a lot of intimate scenes as well (since she's getting to that point much later in the story than the mother I mean). A lot of game-creators and even big story-writers really stretch out relationships like that too out of fear I've noticed. It's like they don't know what to do once their characters get together or "get down" if you know what I mean. I don't see why, though. With a good foundation, there's always room for more story and all kinds of sexy situations for characters to get into. :firstimekiss:
I think you've got it really good with that. You've got this really hot and taboo power-dynamic between the main character and the daughter with him being her boss. There's all kinds of naughty and risque scenarios for you to write with them just fooling around at work before you even have to think about adding more to the story. Even once you get to the point where they're actually having sex, there's other kinds of ways to keep it fresh without getting overly kinky or straying away from vanilla like experimenting with light bondage (things like blindfolds and fluffy handcuffs come to mind) and other light fetishes that a general audience can appreciate without getting weirded out over.
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I''d be more worried about what to write for the mother (trying to think from your position) as there's no real dynamic that I myself can see there right now. I mean I guess if you want an angle there you could do something about the main character working with her company to spice things up there as well for her route or the mother+daughter route (him and daughter go over, sexy threesome stuff ensues), but of course good writing doesn't really need any plot devices anyway; I'm just thinking out-loud here since I have no idea what your plan is at this point story-wise. :happyblush
You've got so much working for you here with what you've already built and so many different places you can take it. I definitely think you can build this into a very long and extensive story lasting you (and us) years to come. Once again, thank you for your hard work! :extremelyhappy:
