Opinions.... This is mine, it's ok to not agree with it. Just some people might find my point of view helpful.
- Player named protagonist... generally a sign of a blank slate for people to attach themselves onto. Normally a gimmick to make up for poor storytelling... Lets see if this is an exception.
- Really rough start on the world building. Great concept, but really messed up on the execution. Game should start before the apocalypse, and you try to figure out what to do. Think of Tell Tales Walking dead, would it be as good if you skipped the first episode where the apcolyse happens? This is the same thing imo, feels like they are skipping some of the best world building part to the game.
- OK why are the main characters the first one to visit this planet via prize raffle? How is this habitable planet not settled??? Doesn't make sense!!! I know I may seem to be picking on this but if they screw up the easy stuff , how are we to expect things in the future? OK last I talk about failure in plot and world building.
- How are there plant life but no bug or animal life??? SHIT I said no more commenting about stuff not making sense.
- OK onto characters. I appreciate that there are different ethnicites but weren't these people from an orphanage? Shouldn't they look teenagerish? They look 25 to 30ish. Two Bald men look the same with different skin color... I know hair on men is hard but you need to do better than that.
- English is ok... While things seem to be spelling correctly they are phrased very oddly. "She accepted to become my girlfriend just before we won this trip." Isn't that odd? Shouldn't it be more like - She became my girlfriend just before we won this trip.
- For people who are cut off from the universe they seem really calm... Also how are they talking about a new TV show when they are cut off from the universe???
- Just so you know the incest doesn't cause birth defects. That is just what people say because they don't know any better. Incest allows recessive traits that can be harmful to be dominate. Having one copy of sickle cell anemia doesn't affect you much, but having two is devastation bad. Note plenty of species exist that reproduce with incest or self fertilization. What you should probably say is that following Earth law 14778 "Incest is prohibited by law". So there you have it the AI will not allow them to do incest.
- Wait the ship will kill anyone who doesn't want to be a baby factory? LOL. So the AI has no ethics and is evil LOL. OK that is interesting.
- Images quality is iffy, lighting is really rough. Can't tell if the women all have the same body but different heights.
- Black man is a rapist... That's the NTR. Game is missing the Rape tag. Why is it always have to be the black man be the rapist. /sigh
- Animations are ok, crude bet better than 3 frame animations.
I'm going to be honest and say I like exploitation in my fantasy, as long as it's not real I'm fine with it, but this just doesn't feel right with me. Dude rapes your girl, where is my option to get a weapon and beat him to fucking death in this sleep? At least have an option for people. As for the NTR, I think it needs work. Why would the other men and women put up with it? There needs to be some set up for it to happen and the player allows it to go on. This doesn't feel thought out.
I'm going to be honest and say it's a 2/5 for me, the writing really holds it back.