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V.A. Laurie

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Sure, throw in anything as long as it does not interfere with the protagonist too much.
That last scene was totally uncalled for.

Also, those fucking ugly models don't make it easy to get excited for any girl in this game.
It took quite a while that people who are still following this games development, overcame that, just to be shocked by something else that brings them out of the fantasy completely.
I know where you and everyone is coming from, but honestly, the scene will have an impact on the story in a good way!
 

Iggybousse

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Those complaining about the huge tits, never had them in their hands haha.
As long as they are natural, they're really fun to play with :evilsmile:.
Don't get me wrong though, I'm a fan of all sizes.
 
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Benn Swagger

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Lol ... Is my eyes seeing right ? A story flow direction as following the cash flow direction ... x'D
I'm expecting so much before, not so sure about right now, I hate fake writer, but I'm not accusing though.
I'm gonna follow this development more closely. :FeelsGoodMan:
 

KeinBa

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WTF was that ending.Hope , you gonna remove that bdsm shit on next update or im done with this game.And my opinion , earlier on the game it seems we need to corrupt daughter.She seemed like a innocent girl.But on later versions se becomes a more like bitchy girl.I do not know how she has gotten so bad girl over time or was she always that I did not understand at all?
 
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Shardoom

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I know, I know... but sometimes throwing in different (and unexpected) scenes can be fun. Incest is certainly going to be something that you guys get to enjoy in the future updates. Like I said, I have a plan for the updates to come, so now that I am leading the writing for the game, you can trust that we'll get some real winning scenes soon. :)
Bit late when you've already killed the fucking game huh...
 

Mondoblasto

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The end scene for 0.5 was certainly different, but the dialogue beforehand made it pretty clear: she was just looking to get her rocks off, there wasn't any cock blocking of any kind (well, unless you include the fact she didn't get her jollys).
 

xhoni spica

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you have a lot of work to do brothers are 2.jpg the same only diference with hair and bold, some girls im sorry to say you this but look more like Trans even if you reworked some images.
 
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VanderGames

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you have a lot of work to do brothers are View attachment 53522 the same only diference with hair and bold, some girls im sorry to say you this but look more like Trans even if you reworked some images.
The first image was not edited. It's hard for me since I don't have those moments in which were made renders. Therefore, changes occur with each update. Here are the changes from 1 to 5 version.
 

john_jones21

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Wow I have to say I'm surprised by the reaction to the final scene of the update. Spoilering my long response here for those who haven't played to the end yet.
Adding a twist to the story is fine but unless it makes sense relative to what's gone before it's going to fall flat. You could also have one of the characters get abducted by a UFO and obviously that opens up a lot of story potential but you really need to ease into something like that.
 
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myuhinny

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When I first started the game I named the daughter weirdo but it looks like I should of named her whore or slut not that it matters as this is the last one I'll be playing. Game seemed fun and I was fine with her having girlfriends but it looks like she's nothing more then a whore that's going to be fucking every Tom Dick and ugly fat bastard in the game. So I'm out as I'm no longer interested in her.
 

sansusername

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x'D all these sour people upset that the dev actually added in some exciting shit.

All I'm reading is "I didn't expect something so now I'm angry." First it was the graphics, which look much better, now it's this.

I like what I see here. I didn't see it coming, but I'm fine with it. I'm not turned off by seeing someone in leather, and seeing her suck come dick was exactly what I've wanted.

So, keep it up guys, you still have me entertained!
 

verzauberung

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I know, I know... but sometimes throwing in different (and unexpected) scenes can be fun. Incest is certainly going to be something that you guys get to enjoy in the future updates. Like I said, I have a plan for the updates to come, so now that I am leading the writing for the game, you can trust that we'll get some real winning scenes soon. :)

>so now that I am leading the writing for the game, you can trust that we'll get some real winning scenes soon. :)

the first update you pushed out as leading writer was a total FAIL and killed the game for most People here. you decided to put in that Scene in that way. and now you say that we should trust you...

>but sometimes throwing in different (and unexpected) scenes can be fun.

and this right here should be the biggest red flag. a writer who likes to throw in rdm and unexpected Scenes just because they are "fun". why write a Logical Story with clear to understand Progression if you can just LOL SWERVE.

wanted to test out " , but seeing as you are involved with that game too, i will have to avoid that. just cant stand this type of writing.
 

V.A. Laurie

Game Writer & Editor
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Oct 9, 2017
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>so now that I am leading the writing for the game, you can trust that we'll get some real winning scenes soon. :)

the first update you pushed out as leading writer was a total FAIL and killed the game for most People here. you decided to put in that Scene in that way. and now you say that we should trust you...

>but sometimes throwing in different (and unexpected) scenes can be fun.

and this right here should be the biggest red flag. a writer who likes to throw in rdm and unexpected Scenes just because they are "fun". why write a Logical Story with clear to understand Progression if you can just LOL SWERVE.

wanted to test out " , but seeing as you are involved with that game too, i will have to avoid that. just cant stand this type of writing.
Sorry to hear that. I don't mean to write a game that people dislike, nor do I mean to cause the anger that I'm seeing. This is a porn game, so it shouldn't be taken so seriously.

I can take the blame for the story not being entertaining, but I just tried to use what I was given. I didn't think people would hate it so much just because it had bdsm. If I had known that, I'd have left the renders out.

Trust me or don't, I can only hope that what I write is enjoyed. If I can't make that happen, than I can only try to change that opinion later.

And I do appreciate any feedback, even if it is negative. I'll keep reading the comments and considering everyone's thoughts, so please keep them rolling in.

Happy New Year everyone lol
 

thelonelyjoker

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After the final scene my face be like ...

I'm ok with the cafe and bdsm scenes but the story be like a whole new universe.
How a nerd dad saves a corrupt daughter *facepalm
 
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jonrage39

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Sorry to hear that. I don't mean to write a game that people dislike, nor do I mean to cause the anger that I'm seeing. This is a porn game, so it shouldn't be taken so seriously.

I can take the blame for the story not being entertaining, but I just tried to use what I was given. I didn't think people would hate it so much just because it had bdsm. If I had known that, I'd have left the renders out.

Trust me or don't, I can only hope that what I write is enjoyed. If I can't make that happen, than I can only try to change that opinion later.

And I do appreciate any feedback, even if it is negative. I'll keep reading the comments and considering everyone's thoughts, so please keep them rolling in.

Happy New Year everyone lol
So, I just played through it, and although I'm not angry like some of the people here, I think I understand why they are upset.

While I don't care for BDSM (I don't really have feelings one way or the other, I'm fairly indifferent to it as it doesn't turn me on or disgust me), that's not what was disappointing for me. For me, it was the fact that she's blowing some strange dude. Now, don't get me wrong, I'm not calling her a slut, and I don't think it's realistic to expect a woman of her age to not be sexually active, let alone a virgin. The thing is though, in the context of the game, she is the MC's primary 'love interest', and while I am pursuing her, I've no desire to see her with other guys, ESPECIALLY, if that isn't a path that I put her on.

I don't expect her to jump into bed with her father a few days into the game, I appreciate a game that does a good job of employing appropriate build-up, but personally, and I don't want to speak for others, I would rather her go without sex and let the sexual frustration build to a point where she starts to see her father as a sexual option.

TL : DR
I'm not angry, I hope you make the game you all want to make, and I genuinely hope you are successful at it. But this game just isn't for me, so I'll wish you luck and move on to something else.
 

Shardoom

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Sorry to hear that. I don't mean to write a game that people dislike, nor do I mean to cause the anger that I'm seeing. This is a porn game, so it shouldn't be taken so seriously.

I can take the blame for the story not being entertaining, but I just tried to use what I was given. I didn't think people would hate it so much just because it had bdsm. If I had known that, I'd have left the renders out.

Trust me or don't, I can only hope that what I write is enjoyed. If I can't make that happen, than I can only try to change that opinion later.

And I do appreciate any feedback, even if it is negative. I'll keep reading the comments and considering everyone's thoughts, so please keep them rolling in.

Happy New Year everyone lol
You didn't expect what you did to cause this hate??? What, are you serious? The kind of shit you've just done to this game has been met with fierce hatred and game killing animousity every time it's happened in a game on this forum. I simply don't believe you, and certainly DON'T trust your 'vision" for this or ANY game.
 
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jonrage39

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Also, unrelated side note, that living room is fucking weird. It took me a bit to figure out the walls were mirrored with a door to another room and not that there wasn't some weird mirror just set up in the middle of the room.
 
2.30 star(s) 26 Votes