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The following review is based off my personal experience with playing this Game/Visual Novel... I try to be as brutally honest and detailed as I can, and these are my own opinions and thoughts, from one or more play throughs... The version this review is based on is v0.5... To read other reviews I've done, please visit my thread in the General Discussions forum section -You must be registered to see the links... This review may contain spoiler details, so please be aware of that...
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heavy jaw lines large eyebrows set back cheek bones are male attributes making the cheeks hollow tends to make a woman look manly. that's why women tend to use blush to make the cheeks stand up because the face is fuller than a mans even with pronounced cheek bonesNatalia look like a man?
BDSM is not the problem but the impending NTRWow I have to say I'm surprised by the reaction to the final scene of the update. Spoilering my long response here for those who haven't played to the end yet.
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Also, Vander has created fix version 0.5.1, which I believe is now available - that has full translations in it now!
You put the woman (daughter) who is the main goal of the game to blowjob another man and act like a whore letting this guy pass his cock on her and thought someone would like it?Wow I have to say I'm surprised by the reaction to the final scene of the update. Spoilering my long response here for those who haven't played to the end yet.
I agree, very poor update , I mean this update is like a death sentence for the game itself , is just terribleYou put the woman (daughter) who is the main goal of the game to blowjob another man and act like a whore letting this guy pass his cock on her and thought someone would like it?
NTR is crap.
This game died.
Android version is not working. App is looking to download some files.NLWMD 5.1
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Maria being the true daughter wouldn't even be that bad of a twist, but in that case a long flashback with Maria and the impostor daughter would be needed.Ok people... Time to explain some shit.
Maria would turn out to be the true daughter, but the girl we know as the daughter would tie up Maria and convince Father to rape her, then she'd hand him a gun and you'd commit suicide at the end of the game. I felt like that was not going to work well so I have different plans for Maria and the daughter. Hopefully they'll make sense and be satisfying.
I agree. Again, the images are provided to me to write around, instead of the writing dictating the images. You won't see issues of inconsistency with characters moving forward.Maria being the true daughter wouldn't even be that bad of a twist, but in that case a long flashback with Maria and the impostor daughter would be needed.
i also don't think the BDSM and the bar scenes were the problem in themselves but the fact that they came out of nowhere. you have a shy MC that can't talk to women at all, who couldn't get it up at home with a woman in one of the paths but he somehow get a BJ from a stranger in a bar the next day, that made no sense. Same thing with the daughter, you had a dialogue where she said she wanted to be properly fucked but going from that to portray her as a BDSM sub it's a long step.
i'd suggest for the future to make sure that the script is coherent in going from a point A to a point B.
So are you sayin that this was the plan from the begining? But when Maria meet the dad, she don't have any reaction.. like (meeting a father for the first time) ??? is she emotionless? All that scene go all casual, not a single reaction, not a single thought from part of Maria... nah.... It sound all maked up in day five.Maria would turn out to be the true daughter, but the girl we know as the daughter would tie up Maria and convince Father to rape her, then she'd hand him a gun and you'd commit suicide at the end of the game. I felt like that was not going to work well so I have different plans for Maria and the daughter. Hopefully they'll make sense and be satisfying.
Uhh, what the fuck? I guess I'm glad you changed that, because that's fucked and not at all what I'm looking for when I play these games. I think you would have been better served and just uploading the BDSM scene like you said, as just an example of what the dev is doing render-wise now instead of just shoehorning it into the story. That being said, I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and check out the next update, but I'm definitely going to avoid any other games written by Vander, so I appreciate the heads up on that.Maria would turn out to be the true daughter, but the girl we know as the daughter would tie up Maria and convince Father to rape her, then she'd hand him a gun and you'd commit suicide at the end of the game.
i think vander is talented. he did start the story after all. i wouldn't write him off yet personally.Uhh, what the fuck? I guess I'm glad you changed that, because that's fucked and not at all what I'm looking for when I play these games. I think you would have been better served and just uploading the BDSM scene like you said, as just an example of what the dev is doing render-wise now instead of just shoehorning it into the story. That being said, I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and check out the next update, but I'm definitely going to avoid any other games written by Vander, so I appreciate the heads up on that.