- Nov 16, 2017
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I agree, this new update was shit, the story went at a steady pace and now this crap out of nowhere. Just feels so out of place
heavy jaw lines large eyebrows set back cheek bones are male attributes making the cheeks hollow tends to make a woman look manly. that's why women tend to use blush to make the cheeks stand up because the face is fuller than a mans even with pronounced cheek bones
BDSM is not the problem but the impending NTR
- Jun 6, 2017
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I played V.01 version time ago and seemed to me a bad copy of Dating my Daughter, so I forgot about it, but I have seen now so many bad reviews of this game that I´m starting to feel like playing it again, to know what is all this fuss about. It seems that this one is the MASS EFFECT: ANDROMEDA of the porn games. Even women look like transsexuals, like in ME:A :coldsweat::coldsweat::coldsweat::coldsweat:
You put the woman (daughter) who is the main goal of the game to blowjob another man and act like a whore letting this guy pass his cock on her and thought someone would like it?
NTR is crap.
This game died.
- Aug 5, 2017
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I agree, very poor update , I mean this update is like a death sentence for the game itself , is just terrible
- May 10, 2017
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Ok people... Time to explain some shit.
When I took over as the writer for this part, Vander already wrote half the update. The scene with Maria and Daughter confused me also, so I asked what Vanders plan was... I have completely changed it. Vander told me that this was the plan for Maria/the game:
Maria would turn out to be the true daughter, but the girl we know as the daughter would tie up Maria and convince Father to rape her, then she'd hand him a gun and you'd commit suicide at the end of the game. I felt like that was not going to work well so I have different plans for Maria and the daughter. Hopefully they'll make sense and be satisfying.
The final scene... If you're not into the images I can't do anything about that, but if you feel like I'm introducing NTR, you're mistaken. This scene will leave daughter extra horny and more likely to start hooking up with you.
I understand everyone's reactions. I really do. I didn't think of the scene as an issue because I already know where I want it to lead, but everyone's feedback has been of course very important to me.
If you have played the game in English, you've been reading my words. I completely rewrote the English scripts, if you recall. This update was weird because of the Maria twist that I am not going with. It was weird because of the bdsm scene. It was weird because the father somehow gets a blowjob at the cafe out of nowhere. I didn't write any of these scenes' plots. I simply scripted what I had. I'm plotting the rest of the game now, though.
Some of you have stuff you'll avoid FF because of my work in part 5 here, but I believe that to be a bit disingenuous; I worked with the materials I had to get the game out and avoid further delays. Check out FF if you want to see what I can do when I am plotting and writing the entire story.
You may or may not trust me with this game, but I hope you give me one more chance; one more update to reign the story.
When I took over as the writer for this part, Vander already wrote half the update. The scene with Maria and Daughter confused me also, so I asked what Vanders plan was... I have completely changed it. Vander told me that this was the plan for Maria/the game:
Maria would turn out to be the true daughter, but the girl we know as the daughter would tie up Maria and convince Father to rape her, then she'd hand him a gun and you'd commit suicide at the end of the game. I felt like that was not going to work well so I have different plans for Maria and the daughter. Hopefully they'll make sense and be satisfying.
The final scene... If you're not into the images I can't do anything about that, but if you feel like I'm introducing NTR, you're mistaken. This scene will leave daughter extra horny and more likely to start hooking up with you.
I understand everyone's reactions. I really do. I didn't think of the scene as an issue because I already know where I want it to lead, but everyone's feedback has been of course very important to me.
If you have played the game in English, you've been reading my words. I completely rewrote the English scripts, if you recall. This update was weird because of the Maria twist that I am not going with. It was weird because of the bdsm scene. It was weird because the father somehow gets a blowjob at the cafe out of nowhere. I didn't write any of these scenes' plots. I simply scripted what I had. I'm plotting the rest of the game now, though.
Some of you have stuff you'll avoid FF because of my work in part 5 here, but I believe that to be a bit disingenuous; I worked with the materials I had to get the game out and avoid further delays. Check out FF if you want to see what I can do when I am plotting and writing the entire story.
You may or may not trust me with this game, but I hope you give me one more chance; one more update to reign the story.
Maria being the true daughter wouldn't even be that bad of a twist, but in that case a long flashback with Maria and the impostor daughter would be needed.
i also don't think the BDSM and the bar scenes were the problem in themselves but the fact that they came out of nowhere. you have a shy MC that can't talk to women at all, who couldn't get it up at home with a woman in one of the paths but he somehow get a BJ from a stranger in a bar the next day, that made no sense. Same thing with the daughter, you had a dialogue where she said she wanted to be properly fucked but going from that to portray her as a BDSM sub it's a long step.
i'd suggest for the future to make sure that the script is coherent in going from a point A to a point B.
After reading furore thought i'd see what game was about....
lol, that's a surefire way to utterly kill a character and completely alter the demographics of your customer base.
Who cares if it makes her hot for father, she's just run off and blown some other guy out of the blue.
Only thing more amusing is if story was originally heading on a rape/suicide route.
lol, that's a surefire way to utterly kill a character and completely alter the demographics of your customer base.
Who cares if it makes her hot for father, she's just run off and blown some other guy out of the blue.
Only thing more amusing is if story was originally heading on a rape/suicide route.
I agree. Again, the images are provided to me to write around, instead of the writing dictating the images. You won't see issues of inconsistency with characters moving forward.
- May 4, 2017
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Moving forward won't be an issue. Having the daughter blow some random fucktard has driven a good chunk of your players away. Unless you change that it'll still all be fucked...
- Jul 29, 2017
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So are you sayin that this was the plan from the begining? But when Maria meet the dad, she don't have any reaction.. like (meeting a father for the first time) ??? is she emotionless? All that scene go all casual, not a single reaction, not a single thought from part of Maria... nah.... It sound all maked up in day five.
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- Jun 3, 2017
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Uhh, what the fuck? I guess I'm glad you changed that, because that's fucked and not at all what I'm looking for when I play these games. I think you would have been better served and just uploading the BDSM scene like you said, as just an example of what the dev is doing render-wise now instead of just shoehorning it into the story. That being said, I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and check out the next update, but I'm definitely going to avoid any other games written by Vander, so I appreciate the heads up on that.
- May 4, 2017
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i think vander is talented. he did start the story after all. i wouldn't write him off yet personally.