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Freeloading family - I'm writing that also

But I wanted to say that I'm going to be off this site for a bit. Need to focus on the game, not these comments. Hopefully everyone is at the very least curious about what is to come, and I want to make sure it's something enjoyable.

I'll pop in at some point in the future, so keep the debates and feedback coming!
I am looking forward to see the next installment, I really like the change of pace, I like to be surpirised (both good and bad surprises GoT -Red Wedding -> awesome).

Also curious about the secrets, what is the connection between maria and daughter?

p.s. good job "feminizing" the old tranny models.
 

Hyromanic

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I don't get why people feel the need to insult others that do not like NTR/seeing a person they are in a relationship with or want to be in a relationship with, be fucked by someone else. They constantly make it sound like people that don't like NTR are the weird ones and are "insecure bitches" *quoted from someone*. Please explain how secure you are about yourself, knowing someone you are invested in is being fucked by someone else.
 
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svnhddbst

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so, was it on purpose or a happy accident that the daughter looks like Kate Mara?

like, if it was on purpose, extremely well done.

was everyone watching the same story i was?

what ntr? how was "going to play in an sm club" out of left field? she herself has all but confessed to being a total pervert out to have a good time, so how has any of her behavior been unexpected?

so otherwise, good story, decent character renders, keep going.
 
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dbp5ca

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I must admit I am really confused by the really venomous comments being directed at this game based on version 0.5. While I agree that the whole BDSM roleplay things came out of left field I really don't view it as being massively destructive to the story. Actually I think that the collusion between the daughter and the maid, the strange way the daughter is interacting with the "father" and the BDSM thing all changed up the story in an interesting way. As soon as it became clear that the daughter and maid had some secret deal going, it made things that much more interesting. It shows that the daughter is not who she seems and that there may be some dark doings going on. AT least that's what it seemed like until the dev and writer tried explaining it and it seemed much more pedestrian and honestly slightly more disappointing. I was kindof hoping for it to veer into some sort of noir vibe where the daughter is playing some wider game on the father, maybe she's trying to con him, maybe she's trying to seek revenge for something long forgotten who knows, just something different. Honestly it is much more interesting than yet another incest game or harem game. There are literally dozens of those, it would be nice to have something different for a change.
One last note for the dev, your original story design was really kindof wierd. As someone already pointed out, forced suicide in a game, especially a porn game, is neither innovative nor fun. You'll want to curb those kinds of story lines as you proceed on this and into other games. Noone wants to play a game that ends up with you shooting yourself, this is supposed to be a porn fantasy and I'm not sure that anyone has a fantasy like that.
 

svnhddbst

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bit late now, but about the animation for the heart filling, what are your thoughts on it being a progressive "filling layer by layer" so each completed loop makes that outer pink part thicker instead of the puzzle pieces?
 
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V.A. Laurie

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I must admit I am really confused by the really venomous comments being directed at this game based on version 0.5. While I agree that the whole BDSM roleplay things came out of left field I really don't view it as being massively destructive to the story. Actually I think that the collusion between the daughter and the maid, the strange way the daughter is interacting with the "father" and the BDSM thing all changed up the story in an interesting way. As soon as it became clear that the daughter and maid had some secret deal going, it made things that much more interesting. It shows that the daughter is not who she seems and that there may be some dark doings going on. AT least that's what it seemed like until the dev and writer tried explaining it and it seemed much more pedestrian and honestly slightly more disappointing. I was kindof hoping for it to veer into some sort of noir vibe where the daughter is playing some wider game on the father, maybe she's trying to con him, maybe she's trying to seek revenge for something long forgotten who knows, just something different. Honestly it is much more interesting than yet another incest game or harem game. There are literally dozens of those, it would be nice to have something different for a change.
One last note for the dev, your original story design was really kindof wierd. As someone already pointed out, forced suicide in a game, especially a porn game, is neither innovative nor fun. You'll want to curb those kinds of story lines as you proceed on this and into other games. Noone wants to play a game that ends up with you shooting yourself, this is supposed to be a porn fantasy and I'm not sure that anyone has a fantasy like that.
this is some great feedback, and I appreciate it. I have to agree that the feedback on the update was a bit of a surprise to me also, but I get why some people were upset. The next update gets the game back on track with what people expect but I did notice you mention I may be taking the story in a bit more of a "pedestrian" route. I think you will be interested to see what happens. I don't want to say things that are spoiler-y, obviously, but the maid and the daughter knowing each other will eventually be an interesting story line to observe. We'll get there eventually; Maria (the maid) isn't going to be a big focus just yet until I can get my footing into the main plot.

i do hope everyone has calmed down just a bit so you're excited to see what is coming. The scripts and images are both coming along great and we should have a release date for the next update soon.
 

BigBabs69

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That bondage outfit she was wearing was pretty damn sexy.I personally don't see a problem with this scene,She got horny and went to a BDSM club and paid for some service to get some release and ended up more horny and disapointed then she was going in.After that im assuming she's ganna go home,where she will sleep in the same bed as the dad possible causing her to do something or making her want to more then she already did,This is more like a push towards her being sexually frustrated and needing release and seeing her dad as a solution to that.And hopefully we see more of that outfit :D
 

svnhddbst

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That bondage outfit she was wearing was pretty damn sexy.I personally don't see a problem with this scene,She got horny and went to a BDSM club and paid for some service to get some release and ended up more horny and disapointed then she was going in.After that im assuming she's ganna go home,where she will sleep in the same bed as the dad possible causing her to do something or making her want to more then she already did,This is more like a push towards her being sexually frustrated and needing release and seeing her dad as a solution to that.And hopefully we see more of that outfit :D
this is precisely what my thoughts were as well, and it lined up well within what the rest of the story was hinting at; "she's not a goody-goody, she's not a horrible person, she's just a mischievous pervert, who's sights are on her dad currently".

my prediction, is that she's basically just training her "entirely too innocent dad" to be the kind of dad she can "play" with regularly.
 

fsap1

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The daughter being a crazy sex maniac was kind of expected, I mean, masturbating on your dad's bed the first night you meet him? Then all the teasing, flashing and her interactions with Alice... I remember one of her lines being "I must pretend to be a good girl for daddy" or something like that, she even said her step-father used to see her naked all the time, you can't expect her to be a virgin saint, I don't understand some of the comments here surprised by her being a cock hungry slut.

I think the bottom line is people here are too obsessed with NTR so the only way to not receive backlash is to have a single dick in the game: the MC's. People probably wouldn't be bitching so much if the BDSM scene was with a girl.

I didn't like her getting some random dick, but it was a good scene that set her up to some sexual frustration, which could be a gateway to something more with the dad.
 
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jonrage39

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The daughter being a crazy sex maniac was kind of expected, I mean, masturbating on your dad's bed the first night you meet him? Then all the teasing, flashing and her interactions with Alice... I remember one of her lines being "I must pretend to be a good girl for daddy" or something like that, she even said her step-father used to see her naked all the time, you can't expect her to be a virgin saint, I don't understand some of the comments here surprised by her being a cock hungry slut.

I think the bottom line is people here are too obsessed with NTR so the only way to not receive backlash is to have a single dick in the game: the MC's. People probably wouldn't be bitching so much if the BDSM scene was with a girl.

I didn't like her getting some random dick, but it was a good scene that set her up to some sexual frustration, which could be a gateway to something more with the dad.
The issue, for me at least, want that she isn't a virgin, but that the scene; 1) took control from the player, and 2) came out of nowhere. I get that a 20 something woman fucks, that's expected, but I didn't like that she is fucking some strange, and that I didn't have any say in it. As the character I'm trying to fuck in the game, I'd prefer it if, through choices I make, I could prevent her from fucking others. I'm not saying scenes like this don't belong in games, it's just not the stuff I look for, and actively choose to avoid. If that's what you are into, then have at it, but if the storyline doesn't change in upcoming releases I'll move on and wish for the dev's success with more like-minded fans.
 

fsap1

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The issue, for me at least, want that she isn't a virgin, but that the scene; 1) took control from the player, and 2) came out of nowhere. I get that a 20 something woman fucks, that's expected, but I didn't like that she is fucking some strange, and that I didn't have any say in it. As the character I'm trying to fuck in the game, I'd prefer it if, through choices I make, I could prevent her from fucking others. I'm not saying scenes like this don't belong in games, it's just not the stuff I look for, and actively choose to avoid. If that's what you are into, then have at it, but if the storyline doesn't change in upcoming releases I'll move on and wish for the dev's success with more like-minded fans.
If that's the point then I agree, I'm up for anything as long as it's optional.

When she said she was going to find some dick to fuck it was a big NO for me and I was hoping for some way to avoid that, but I can't say I wasn't expecting something like that by the way the game was going:

1. You're this socially awkward almost 40yo guy looked down by everyone
2. There's no real choice, only a fixed path, and that's to be submissive, everything else causes game over
3. The daughter is a huge slut that admitted to have kissed and stripped for her step-father.
4. The daughter thinks you're an inexperienced little boy with a nice dick, not a real man
5. The game suggests you should date Margarita, what happens is you can't get it up and is humiliated, being called an impotent faggot

It would not surprise me if this was supposed to be a cuck game all along. The new writer is taking the blame, but this has been going on from day 1.
 

uncejay

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Honestly, the first time I played it through, I thought the BDSM scene was a dream sequence. There had been no mention of that in any of her dialogue indicating she was into that stuff (hints, maybe, but nothing specific), and there was no indication that's what she was going to do while the MC was out. It was just silly, really. And to me it shows that the dev (or writer/both) really have no idea what they're going to do from update to update.
 

sansusername

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Honestly, the first time I played it through, I thought the BDSM scene was a dream sequence. There had been no mention of that in any of her dialogue indicating she was into that stuff (hints, maybe, but nothing specific), and there was no indication that's what she was going to do while the MC was out. It was just silly, really. And to me it shows that the dev (or writer/both) really have no idea what they're going to do from update to update.
Eh, i think that because this person took over as the writer, it's just a matter of giving it an update or two to see how they start to write the game. The last update was half written by the dev, half written by the "writer" from what they said, so we just have to wait and see what happens now
 
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jonrage39

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Eh, i think that because this person took over as the writer, it's just a matter of giving it an update or two to see how they start to write the game. The last update was half written by the dev, half written by the "writer" from what they said, so we just have to wait and see what happens now
That's why I'm giving it another update or 2 before I bail. I'm not mad about the situation like some people might be, I just like to know what I'm playing and whether or not it suits my tastes.

It doesn't make sense to get mad about these games, there are more games than I have time to play, so I either play it and enjoy it, support if I can, or just move on and wish the dev luck. Just because I don't like it doesn't mean others don't, everyone deserves a porn game that they can enjoy.
 
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N1K17Y

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characters are lame and cliches. maybe when h scenes are added might be worth playing for that, but with such atrocious story, game has nothing good to offer
 
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