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User #19006

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Have you tried the new update?
NO not at all
but, reading all the coments, guess I'll don't really know what to think (at least i'll try by myself)
Also read that the Writer has changed, is that true ?
I like his style (and his humor) also in Freeloading Family I think he could make the difference
not sure if i should better wait one or two updates more to play At least some good comentraies from old gamers
Sorry just a question @V.A. Laurie since when are u writing this game ?
Keep up the good work you will make it !!
 
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V.A. Laurie

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i did, thats why i said that, is not criticism to the game or to you, i dont really get those people being rude to writers and devs, there is always better manners to say what is in your mind and your taste in a game, what i did write was my point of how i see this game and that other game you have writed.

for me seeing the main heroine in any kind of "relationship" kills the flow and is something i find myself not fun to read or play, there are people that like vns and porn games also for theyr story. (even if is the minority lol)
well i have to thank you for at least being polite in your criticism; I try to write the characters and stories in a fairly realistic manner, meaning they may or may not have desires outside of being the main characters candy. I get that some people simply want you to be the only person allowed to engage with the girls, but I find that to be more "porn" and less "storytelling."

Either way, i thank you for playing. @Vanderbor puts a lot of work into making sure the game is looking better and better every month, and I am doing my best to write a story that is exciting, sexy, and good to read. Hopefully you'll be back around to check out the next game he does, or I do, (or we do, if that be the case) -- or i just hope you enjoy the rest of this game if you come back to check it out down the line!
 

V.A. Laurie

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NO not at all
but, reading all the coments, guess I'll don't really know what to think (at least i'll try by myself)
Also read that the Writer has changed, is that true ?
I like his style (and his humor) also in Freeloading Family I think he could make the difference
not sure if i should better wait one or two updates more to play At least some good comentraies from old gamers
Sorry just a question @V.A. Laurie since when are u writing this game ?
Keep up the good work you will make it !!
I started writing with the previous update and am continuing as the writer currently. @Vanderbor , the game dev was the original writer, but I have taken over for him to help him focus on the other aspects of the game's creation.

Glad that you enjoy some of my stuff, and I do hope you enjoy this one also! The previous update, when I took over writing, is the one that got a lot of people upset -- Due to the sudden shift, I didn't have a plot outline to work from, and I was also given images without context that I needed to find a way to utilize. That led to me finding a way to use the BDSM images that are in that scene - I thought I had a pretty good idea as a way to tie them into the future of the game (and this update shows that). It's only up to you to decide for yourself what you think of it all. Come on back once you've played and let me know. Good or bad, I do love seeing what people say so I can write better stories in the future.
 
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yoyomistro

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i'm just messing around. I see comments all the time on my games and the games of others with issues that people have that just seem more personal taste than criticism, and just wanted to be a dick for a moment. I am sorry you don't enjoy the characters, but I do think that Daughter has been the aggressor and more promiscuous character through the entire game, so everything you've seen of her is in line with that.

If you come on back for more, I hope you enjoy it. If not, I hope maybe in the future one of my games strikes your fancy. :)
I don't think that dude has ever talked to real women before... Either that or he lives somewhere they have to get permission from their husband to go outside.
 

User #19006

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Well To late im downloading already,x'Dx'Dx'D
What I don't understand (but i respect) is the fact that these games are mere fantasy and you can try out things,
and do stuff,what u never would dare to do in the real live. For example i don't get a kink with impregnation but the mayority does, ok just go on with that part, because sure there were other parts wich hit my kinks i have to be more tolerant to other peoples interest.
This is a fantasy novel, no need to be so passionate about , it is ok to express ur dislike, but to being a way to negative or even on the edge of insulting the other in my eyes isn't ok,
An other thing is that all these BDSM stuff is a roleplaying thing and u need a lot of trust in ur partner to do it either in the submisive rol or in de dominative rol, as well that just the sex is in a relationship the main reason to break of or to keep going on.
Ok download is ready and let's see what this is all about ;)
 
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I started writing with the previous update and am continuing as the writer currently. @Vanderbor , the game dev was the original writer, but I have taken over for him to help him focus on the other aspects of the game's creation.

Glad that you enjoy some of my stuff, and I do hope you enjoy this one also! The previous update, when I took over writing, is the one that got a lot of people upset -- Due to the sudden shift, I didn't have a plot outline to work from, and I was also given images without context that I needed to find a way to utilize. That led to me finding a way to use the BDSM images that are in that scene - I thought I had a pretty good idea as a way to tie them into the future of the game (and this update shows that). It's only up to you to decide for yourself what you think of it all. Come on back once you've played and let me know. Good or bad, I do love seeing what people say so I can write better stories in the future.
as a + this update is better than the previous one
as a - daughter is a huge slut who probably wants to bang every character in the game
 
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Fuck! Now I wish I never tried this fucking game. I'm so god dam tired of seeing this shit. At least have the courtesy of warning people. I guess I'll have to screen the comments better since so many devs are putting this bullshit it their games now.
Well atleast you recognize it's due to your own inability to read, I hope you can recover from this great blow to your manhood, good luck!

I enjoyed Freeloading, gonna try this one now :)
 

SexyFeetLover

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This game is a satire and must of been made as a joke. The only positive i could find in this game was the renders of the females genitalia, and the 2 drunk girls.

You are better off just playing or re-playing Dating My Daughter.
 

User #19006

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Really the game wasn't that bad , the BDSM scene :closedeyesmile::closedeyesmile: was funny as Hell ! (dont understand how to made a big fuss about they were harmless in comparasion with other games around ) I enjoyed the game, have to say the story became more interesting in the last gamedays 3 big bombs built in, cool solid work @V.A. Laurie , in my opinion the style change was clear to see and 4 good,
what made me wonder the renders, the faces and the expresions of the caracteres in the textbox, were better than those on the picture and the characters the females mainly, look a bit stiff like dolls, but that im shure the dev will overcome actually they got better with the doggy role play and the first planes of the genitalia had a solid quality so dear dev u can do it keep up!
Ok about the slutiness of the girls in the game well I like it so :eek:penedeyewink::eek:penedeyewink::eek:penedeyewink::eek:penedeyewink: no problemo on that side (for me at least)
I mean in all the games of this genre, were used that the MC is a Maleteen and acts like a douchebag or is absolutly an asshole,
cool waitig for the next update although it is anouced las free version so hopefully i see more !
 
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One criticism, there was too much infodump in the beginning (about the past of the girls together).

I know you need to get it out of the way, but it feels forced.

If you want to put much backstory together in one scene, it's more immersive to use flashbacks (They are nostalgic talking about the past,after not seeing eachother for a long time etc.)
 
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