VN Ren'Py No More Money [v3.5.1 S3 Ep.5 GE] [RoyalCandy]

[royalcandy]

2nd season and still zero sexual contact with main characters is a way too slow-burner for me. Since I'm not interested in any side-characters it makes it a "no sexual content" game for me. And all I left with is a soapy drama, that I never liked to begin with. Maybe dev could add more tension at least? Because it feels like there is not even that much of sexual tension between main character, just a mild curiosity. So while I like the visuals and overall quality, story seems way too slow and somewhat boring. There's almost no sense of progress. But it's just just my humble opinion, don't take it too personal.


P. S. A little advice: To write hotter sex-scenes and add more sexual tension in general read some porn-stories/novels (on literotica, for example), and learn from them what works and what doesn't.

Thank you for the advice, but I've read a lot of stories on literotica. I'm not going to spoil the story by telling what character was inspired from what story, but it's been one of my favorites sites for quite a while now.

Just because it says season 2 doesn't mean it should have progress too much. Season one was just 6 episodes and it was basically the introduction of the characters and options the player will have.

In my opinion incest should take time, because I don't see how in the society we live in, two family members will end up having sex in a few days. What I am trying to make with the game is a better reality for some players who enjoy this fetishes.

 

[BigDigger]

Thank you for the advice, but I've read a lot of stories on literotica. I'm not going to spoil the story by telling what character was inspired from what story, but it's been one of my favorites sites for quite a while now.

Just because it says season 2 doesn't mean it should have progress too much. Season one was just 6 episodes and it was basically the introduction of the characters and options the player will have.

In my opinion incest should take time, because I don't see how in the society we live in, two family members will end up having sex in a few days. What I am trying to make with the game is a better reality for some players who enjoy this fetishes.

Still too slow for me. I mean it is fiction, you can just say something like: "And as years went by they grew closer and closer.", instead of showing every single day. But if you're know what you're doing it is great. It is your story after all, so no one knows better then you how to tell it. Good luck with your game, I'm definitely gonna check on it some time later, when there's more to it.

 

[jetama]

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Hi guys,
How are you? I hope everybody is doing fine.

PROGRESS STATUS

Last week I managed to finish writing the text for the next episode and I already started to prepare the scenes. It was a bit harder than usual because for some reason I kept rewriting a scene which I didn't liked. To me it didn't felt real/natural, but in the end I'm happy with the result.

ABOUT THIS EPISODE

This episode is a bit longer than the previous one and it will have around 400 renders and 18 animations.
RELEASE DATE

You guys already know how things work here, so I can't say a certain date, but I'm positive that by the end of this month I'm sure everybody will have the game.

Best regards,
Jason

Cheers mate can't wait for the next update

 

[milfkiller]

does mc sleep with mom at this update?

 

[HornyyPussy]

does mc sleep with mom at this update?

read a couple of posts before yours......

 

[tubitubler]

can someome share save for bike scene ?

 

[ropershy]

does mc sleep with mom at this update?

NO!!!!! Actually instead of going forward they seem to have taken about 15 steps backwards in their relationship

 

[evilkitty97]

Landlord? Roommate? Why does it have to go like that originally? Why not father and sister? Why is do we need an incest patch? Game is clearly incest, supposedly. Is there some sort of rules against incest here? I dont get it..

 

[Skut100]

Landlord? Roommate? Why does it have to go like that originally? Why not father and sister? Why is do we need an incest patch? Game is clearly incest, supposedly. Is there some sort of rules against incest here? I dont get it..

Not here but it’s against patreon rules

 

[ropershy]

Landlord? Roommate? Why does it have to go like that originally? Why not father and sister? Why is do we need an incest patch? Game is clearly incest, supposedly. Is there some sort of rules against incest here? I dont get it..

Cause in a lot of countries incest is illegal. I do believe they take it a bit far. For example Step-Mother is considered incest but in truth it isn't since she and the MC would not be blood related. Same would be said of a Aunt who is only related to MC cause she Married his Uncle. Again related only by marriage not blood.
I know incest is considered a sin. I can name off 3 times it had to have happened in the bible ....Adam & Eve's children, Noah's grandchildren, and Lot and his two daughters. What I can't find is where any of them were ever punished for that sin. Interesting huh??
For me isn't isn't so much about the incest, but Mom does sound much better then landlady(BORING!!!!). It is more about a young boy and a mature lady. Even better if the Dad is around and the MC and take Mom from dad. but each to their own.

 

[Deleted member 609620]

I don't know about you guys, but the music in the game is just great

 

[Kionashi]

I don't know about you guys, but the music in the game is just great

yeah is one of the highlights of this game...

 

[evilkitty97]

IKR. Im not really into pop music, im more of a acoustic and rock and roll. Basically anything with guitars. But for the first time, im liking pop songs because of this game. And the slideshows got me having Life is Strange vibes to it everytime..

 

[royalcandy]

IKR. Im not really into pop music, im more of a acoustic and rock and roll. Basically anything with guitars. But for the first time, im liking pop songs because of this game. And the slideshows got me having Life is Strange vibes to it everytime..

I loved that game, I didn't realized that it influenced my work, till you mentioned it and I'm thinking maybe to replay the sequence a little bit for some inspiration.

 

[Raziel_8]

I loved that game, I didn't realized that it influenced my work, till you mentioned it and I'm thinking maybe to replay the sequence a little bit for some inspiration.

Yeah very good game (the first one). Really liked the ending, watching over the city and saying, fuck them i stay with Chloe...and i don't even like lesbian relations, but damn those two were such a good couple.
I really need to replay that game.

 

[HerrGrimes]

Image is red-blue shifted as if 3d effect is applied. Is this issue with the file i downloaded or the actual game?

Edit: nvm, i am dumb.

 

[royalcandy]

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Hi guys,
How are you? I hope everybody is doing fine.

PROGRESS STATUS

Last week we started to work on the scenes and the progress is going really nice actually. I've done more than I would hoped this week given how busy I was with my work, but the release date won't move to next month, I'm positive I'll be able to finish the game.

As you know I'm trying to improve my animations and I hope it will be visible in this episode that I put more work into them. Half of the animations are already posed and only need to be rendered, but it takes a lot just to pose them and then around 12 hours to render them, however the +20$ patrons will get soon a sneak peek at one of the animations.

Best regards,
Jason

 

[Sir Crocodile☠️]

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Hi guys,
How are you? I hope everybody is doing fine.

PROGRESS STATUS

Last week we started to work on the scenes and the progress is going really nice actually. I've done more than I would hoped this week given how busy I was with my work, but the release date won't move to next month, I'm positive I'll be able to finish the game.

As you know I'm trying to improve my animations and I hope it will be visible in this episode that I put more work into them. Half of the animations are already posed and only need to be rendered, but it takes a lot just to pose them and then around 12 hours to render them, however the +20$ patrons will get soon a sneak peek at one of the animations.

Best regards,
Jason

Dude how many renders have you processed till now accumulating both no more secrets and no more money and the other game in total?
Just need a rough idea. Somebody's underestimating you and I wanna teach them lesson.

 

[royalcandy]

Dude how many renders have you processed till now accumulating both no more secrets and no more money and the other game in total?
Just need a rough idea. Somebody's underestimating you and I wanna teach them lesson.

I appreciate it. I don't think there is a point in teaching them a lesson, but here are some numbers, however I know only the number of cutscenes:
No More Secrets - 5000 renders
Rejected No More - 2500 renders
No More Money - 3500 renders

 

[Lorenz1]

I think there need to be a clear division. Everyone who are saying "we want progress with Sharlotte" do not say "sex scenes now". They are saying "give us a clear progression in their relationship".

So far the MC isn't even sure if he wants it or not. Make him make a choice, decide for himself and try to actually get her - ask her on a date (seriously, not in a joking matter), make his role as the guy who makes money and pays for her shit more obvious, basically, stop with the "I'm undecided now" thing. If they are flirting, he actually means it.

He either wants it and is trying to get it, or not.

No need in sex scenes, just get the dynamics going already. If there is no dynamics, there is no tension. If he is actively trying to get her, and she isn't having any of it, it is interesting cause it is hard to get. If he doesn't even trying and still mumbling around whether he should even be interested - there is no tension and no hard to get part. There is nothing, there to look for really, other than renders.

Like, if you want her to be a honest repressed housewife it's cool, but you know that repressed housewife's do not show initiative or aggression, right? Until the MC will go for it, nothing will happen. And watching nothing happening is not fun.

Regarding incest - here is a nifty trick, add the "god" part. Godmother and godfather are basically adopted family, it keeps the whole "we raised you" dynamics, but there is no legal definition in hell that will prohibit it, as there is no blood relation whatsoever. As a bonus, anyone can edit the "god" part out of the name and have his incest mod without changing anything.

Landlord and whole land-stuff just do not work plot-wise.