VN Ren'Py Abandoned Off the Pitch [v0.9 Extra] [Maks]

[cxx]

bit slow start and epilogue was very predictable but still nice start for game.

some daz assets get used quite a much i see like in screenshot that asian girl is in 3 games on my playlist and might seen leftmost girl too in some game.

 

[cib64]

Nice start of the story really looking forward to it.

Small insignificant problems/inconsistencies that i don't care much about: (or improvements)

• like why is Geena bald now,
• what does Tilly looks like,
• Where is the Mom , Why there is no Mom
• Transitions between renders could be a little smoother
• Dialogues feels little stiffer or crude or very "to the point", maybe a little more explaining of the situation, stretching out the dialogues kinda thing. I am not a writer so i don't know much about fixing it.

Good luck for the future game development Maksb

 

[cxx]

what for do you need mommy? whole football team of girls to be fucked and maybe even whole school so no mommy needed.

 

[MaksB]

Mac 0.2

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[cxx]

pc later?

 

[MaksB]

I hope this is my last game

 

[cxx]

I hope this is my last game

why?

 

[yamcha]

is version .2 coming out for PC?

 

[Deckmaster]

I hope this is my last game

The most important reason should be you enjoying to create the game. If that's not the case then quit now..

 

[MaksB]

The most important reason should be you enjoying to create the game. If that's not the case then quit now..

The most important reason should be you enjoying to create the game. If that's not the case then quit now..

I like making games. But I'm going to make other games that will bring me more money.

 

[cxx]

well we'll miss you.

 

[MaksB]

Another wonderful, MaksB game! Yay!

My favorite game is Second Chance. Because I came up with it myself. Revenga and Off The Pitch wrote bonghits420

 

[MaksB]

And eventually I will make a game about Nicole. But it will not be soon.

 

[J0K3RXXX]

It's a very promising game. Considering the previous Maks games, Off the Pitch will be great as the previous ones.

 

[cxx]

scrshots from 0.2:

1. - 3. sure you do and i'll be there
4. he won't
5. good to know when in need of bj/sex
6. how nice
7. she's sexmaniac
8. fine looking asses
9. me neither (especially in bed)
10. oh triplets sex coming up, oh boy
11. can i watch?
12. that's a big ball
13. i can guarantee that she won't
14. easy choice
15. oh we will

 

[MaksB]

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[Deleted member 1571716]

PC 0.2

Missing the extras images. Oh well. I'll wait.

 

[Canto Forte]

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mc "May I offer you something to drink?"
anne "No thank you. I won't take too much of your time."
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