RPGM Completed One Girl's Adventure in Another World [v1.0] [Green Tea]

[Mommysbuttslut]

If you don't mind me asking, what exactly do you think were the things that were done very well? I'm genuinely curious because I've had so many people disagree with what I wrote but no one listed any other thing than that the scenes look nice (which I already said myself and explained why that really isn't enough). I genuinely don't see any redeeming qualities in the structure of this game so I would love to learn about what did you think was done good.

Spoiler: long drivel

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I think the biggest problem with your review is that it doesn't talk about the game at all other than saying it has nice artwork and that there's only two enemy types per screen.
You say nothing matters but then only vaguely talk about gameplay elements, that I'd wager most people don't actually care about. What matters to people is usually moving the story along, seeing the characters develop and getting them into erotic situations. Not whether or not you can one shot 99% of the map 5 minutes into the game, or how ambitious the gameplay and level making is.

 

[ChaozEnigma]

For those who wants a walkthrough of the game. I got it from a japanese site and just google translate them.

Spoiler: Walkthrough

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[TTsuyuki]

Spoiler: long drivel

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I think the biggest problem with your review is that it doesn't talk about the game at all other than saying it has nice artwork and that there's only two enemy types per screen.
You say nothing matters but then only vaguely talk about gameplay elements, that I'd wager most people don't actually care about. What matters to people is usually moving the story along, seeing the characters develop and getting them into erotic situations. Not whether or not you can one shot 99% of the map 5 minutes into the game, or how ambitious the gameplay and level making is.

Ok so let me address the spoiler part first. I don't really wanna argue what classifies as a good game since that's really subjective (but i sure as hell wouldn't agree that all they need to do is the things you listed) so let me just answer your questions and you can maybe understand why this game shouldn't be good even according to YOUR rules. Are the scenes hot? Yes. Are the characters likeable? Not at all, in fact they are extremely stupid and not believable. Is the writing serviceable? No, it isn't. The sentence structure is really dry and the things they talk about aren't interesting. Is there any unavoidable and frustrating aspects? Yeah, the ENTIRE GAME which is there just to waste your time walking around huge confusing maps with nothing to do there and characters spouting nonsense that isn't interesting in any way.

Now for what you said about Lona. You can like it or dislike it as much as you want, but what isn't a subjective opinion but an objective fact is that the amount of effort put into its gameplay system is astronomically higher than this game. If you think that all this effort was wasted then go ahead. But at least you have to acknowledge the effort before saying that you dislike it. Meanwhile in this game there is nothing to acknowledge at all. It's all just default premade assets slapped together without even an attempt at piecing together something enjoyable.

Now for the non spoiler part. "I think the biggest problem with your review is that it doesn't talk about the game at all" That's because there is no game. It doesn't exist. You're just walking an empty map to the next trigger and that's it. I wasn't exaggerating when i said that nothing matters. It really doesn't. I "only vaguely talk about gameplay elements" because there are no gameplay elements.

 

[TTsuyuki]

I don't think I've ever come across someone who is as passionate about ''bad'' porn games he doesn't enjoy as this guy.

He's also just being disingenuous.

Is that supposed to be an insult? Yeah, i don't enjoy games that aren't games, how is that bad? Why are you on this forum if you don't want a good game but just good CG? If you just wanted to beat your dick to anything then watch a hentai, read a doujinshi or look at pixiv of your artist of choice. Why bother with a game?

Also how am i being disingenuous? It's really interesting how you are like the fifth person that seems to have a problem with my opinion and none of you so far managed to disagree with anything i said. Quite the opposite in fact, one guy agreed with me but just said that he can lower his expectations better than me, which is fair enough. I would love to hear your reasoning about how we are being disingenuous.

 

[TTsuyuki]

Please do keep passionately commenting about how bad some of the games on this website are mate. It is quality entertainment

Imagine making fun of me for being passionate about game design when you passion seems to be insulting people online for no reason.

 

[ChaozEnigma]

Imagine making fun of me for being passionate about game design when you passion seems to be insulting people online for no reason.

To be honest i personally think its good to have your opinion. I get your point on the gameplay. Still I enjoy the game so far and kinda get your points on the weakness of your game. I jsut think the other posters in the thread are abit overreacting on your review, after all you are free to make a review. Anyways, any game that you enjoy that also can receommend to me?

 

[TTsuyuki]

To be honest i personally think its good to have your opinion. I get your point on the gameplay. Still I enjoy the game so far and kinda get your points on the weakness of your game. I jsut think the other posters in the thread are abit overreacting on your review, after all you are free to make a review. Anyways, any game that you enjoy that also can receommend to me?

If we're talking about just RPG games then all of the ones that i already mentioned in one of my previous posts. And since so many people seem to think that i expect something unreal from the gameplay, i might as well recommend Sylphy and the Sleepless Island which is a great example of how you can make a good H Game without it being anything spectacular in terms of combat. But the thing is that the author actually cared about connecting those scenes properly and not just slapped some scenes into a premade RPGM tile. And if you wanna go even further than that then you have Horny Bunny Hana which is basically just a gallery with how simple it is, but that's the thing. If you aren't going to put effort into the RPG side of the gameplay then just make a game like that and put all your effort into that. Noelle Will Give her All is also another excellent example of that. The author doesn't waste your time with huge empty zones and shitty plot that you don't care about. All of it is really condensed into what matters. And it's also the first game from the author so there is no excuse that they had more experience than this one.

 

[takilung]

Yes

 

[Paril]

Does anyone know what's wrong with my game?

Nvm, restarting the game was all I needed.

 

[M7G]

The game is boring as hell in the begining, I recommend you to continue the story till you get to the city on the giant damaged bridge, after enter in that city, explore as you wish.
You don´t need to grind in this game, just kill one enemy sometimes.

The art is really, really good, it has differents CGI for the same events.

I reccomend this to pass the time, was regular, above average bc of the art.

 

[Strathie]

uhm is it only me or is there a bug with the translation? because my questlog is only in japanese/chinese? how can i get it at least in english?

 

[traplover19]

I don't think I've ever come across someone who is as passionate about ''bad'' porn games he doesn't enjoy as this guy.

He's also just being disingenuous.

there are so many of those and they are all for free available here
if i where too pay for those then i could see a point but its just free rpgm games
this is basically eroge junk food and i dont mind that one bit
my standarts would be allot higher too if i have to pay for it but given what this provides me
and that i dont have to pay for it at all i dont mind playing somewhat generic games
so yes i dont get getting this passionate about bad eroge ether

 

[pussyreaperxxx]

I really think this game is being review-bombed here as are most 2dcg games, something against the translator? Sorry, not in on the scoop. Because worse games have 4.5 stars all the time, maybe just a small sample size.

 

[Mommysbuttslut]

I really think this game is being review-bombed here as are most 2dcg games, something against the translator? Sorry, not in on the scoop. Because worse games have 4.5 stars all the time, maybe just a small sample size.

There's some damn silly "opinions" about why this game sucks.
" 6-tile wide corridors are extremely common... "
Oh no, somebody save us from those extra wide hallways
Some people just aren't happy unless they have something stupid to complain about. Good reminder why I stay tf away from reviews on this site

 

[smithsmithsmith]

I really think this game is being review-bombed here as are most 2dcg games, something against the translator? Sorry, not in on the scoop. Because worse games have 4.5 stars all the time, maybe just a small sample size.

Nah the translation is good (aside from the quest menu), it's just the game itself is very basic. As for worse games having better scores, yeah for a lot of people all a game needs for a 5 star review is some good porn (or better yet, the POTENTIAL for good porn, god the number of 5 stars I've seen on alpha releases with a single daz3d animation). Don't pay attention to the overall score, read what the reviews say and decide if the issues raised are important to you.

 

[pussyreaperxxx]

So people don't like it because it's just a good hentai game and not the successor to GTA V or something? Got it.

 

[fountain]

If you don't mind me asking, what exactly do you think were the things that were done very well? I'm genuinely curious because I've had so many people disagree with what I wrote but no one listed any other thing than that the scenes look nice (which I already said myself and explained why that really isn't enough). I genuinely don't see any redeeming qualities in the structure of this game so I would love to learn about what did you think was done good.

Sure. No actual spoilers below, I'm just collapsing my wall of text into it's own TL;DR

Spoiler: The main character is well written and well characterized.

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Spoiler: The plot is actually quite well executed.

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Spoiler: The art is high in both quality and quantity.

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Spoiler: The worldbuilding is impressive for a game of this genre. By that I mean that there's not much of it.

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Looks like the conversation got heated after this post so I'll just keep my distance.

Quests are not english how can ı solve this?

uhm is it only me or is there a bug with the translation? because my questlog is only in japanese/chinese? how can i get it at least in english?

Nah the translation is good (aside from the quest menu),

Yowza, This is my mistake. There are several systems that are only partially implemented in the code and I thought the quest system was vestigial so I never used it and never translated it. I played through this game three times in the playe

I'll take care of that and post an update. Sorry for the oversight folks!

UPDATE: I finished translating the quest log. (and fixing a couple minor bugs again)

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Important Note: Because of how the quest log works, the quests you have already collected in your existing save file won't be translated. However, any new quests you pick up after updating will be in English. Sorry for the inconvenience!

I've also attached the one file you need to update an existing game so you don't have to re-download all the art. Unzip it and put Quests.json into your www/data folder.

 

[neontiger]

Where can you check libido, and how to increase it?

 

[fountain]

Where can you check libido, and how to increase it?

You can check it in your inventory > Key Items and the easiest way to increase it in the early game is the Maid job in the northern district of Valejo.

 

[xort]

Where can you check libido, and how to increase it?

Find a lewd activity you can do and spam it. You can check your lewdness in the important items.
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Anyway the game would be much better with no, or different combat. Some of the spells are using pure damage + offset so it does something like 500 + 1-100 damage. While other spells are using the magic attack as the base and are doing damage like MATK ^ 2.3 and hits for like 40,000.
I was able to sneak by a win on the bandits by pure luck after missing a bunch of my magic spells and tech attacks.

In short I hate the combat and the mechanics of the combat. I finished the game at level 70.