VN Ren'Py Origin Story [v0.3.1] [JDOR]

[Joratox]

Potential game, anyway, still waiting for the incest patch, I hope Sam would be MC's mom.

From the dev notes

Incest Patch
For the love of all that is holy, if one ever becomes available, please do not incest patch Origin Story. It is vital to the plot that the MC is NOT related by blood to Parker and Riley. If you do this you will completely ruin the story, and you won’t know why for a long time. But then finally a chapter release will come, and you will think “shit – well this incest patch makes no sense anymore.”
Even the very basic premise of the game renders an incest patch nonsense. The MC is awaiting the manifestation of his power. Parker does not have powers because she was vaccinated.

Also, who the hell is Sam ? Maybe I'm hallucinating here, but I did not see any character named Sam.

 

[WICKEDp4th]

From the dev notes

Also, who the hell is Sam ? Maybe I'm hallucinating here, but I did not see any character named Sam.

They don't care, they just want to read Mom/son during the sex scenes...

 

[PunkHooligan]

Holy shit. The amount of cool different assets + overall quality and lighting. Will keep an eye on this.

 

[HornyyPussy]

whats MC ability power ?

Play and find out.........

 

[Joratox]

Just tried this game and got to say in fair terms

1) Voyeurism on a potential LI will never go well, even if "optional/skippable" but meaning it still happens... anyone with even a crush before IRL especially during teenage years/early adult will know what i mean when you see your crush hanging out with another dude/girl... you can pretend to be ok but you don't feel good ultimately...

2) The premise in which landlady was erm.. found having some fun just makes it worse... she was banging a waiter she just met and mc kinda wants to fap one out then... idk man... idk how it doesn't sound like being a cuck lol...

1. If you opt out of it, it doesn't happen. The scene is totally solo, u even get to peek.

2. The length some people will go to motivate their insecurities. You could have just opted out of voyeurism and see the alternate solo scene, but you did not..so I guess you wanted to be "cucked"...Even though that is taking the definition to an extreme, you do you. I don't kink shame people. I don't like it when people talk bullshit though, because it gives false info to other people, so I'm gonna call you on that.

 

[WICKEDp4th]

And I see the whiners have come out of their holes again and complaining about things that are made clear in the OP......

And again you're assuming, that reading is a requirement to download stuff from anywhere...

 

[HornyyPussy]

And again you're assuming, that reading is a requirement to download stuff from anywhere...

i can't help my self, you know that!

 

[BarbarrossaNA]

The comprehensive and succinct writing and explanations in the DEV NOTES are something I wish every DEV would strive for. It gives new meaning to the word transparency. For that reason alone I would give this one a try.. I tip my hat to JDOR!

 

[AlexMpog]

Jeez, I mean, Dev made it all pretty clear about what happens and why in OP.
I get it - soooo many letters are a bit scary for some people to read, but guys, you might save a lot of time for yourself and others by reading the fucking OP before playing the game, seriously.

I could have understood if it hadn't been explained, but common.

 

[WICKEDp4th]

i can't help my self, you know that!

That I do, that I do.

 

[HornyyPussy]

While the dev notes are nice, the tags still should be updated to reflect what is in the game currently, avoidable or not. The tags are important for searching something that the notes dont help with.

There currently is a path in the game where a LI has sex with another character. Call it NTR, Sharing, whatever it exists even if its avoidable.

There also is absolutely sandbox elements. If you need to navigate around a house, clicking on people or objects to continue thats a sandbox.

No, sandbox and freeroam are different things.

If you don't agree with the tags at the top, contact a mod........

 

[Raziel_8]

I find it funny how Evelyn is getting pissed if the MC fucks Moonsong, considering she is/was using her ability for months, specifically choosing hoes, to get expirience in getting fucked
Well not that i see her much as virgin, really.

Curious about the other members of the sisterhood and if they are...less getting arround the block than Moonsong/Emerald, i really wanted answear 'yes' as Moonsong was asking about getting checked
Just hope the MC stops being a cringe fanboy.

 

[HornyyPussy]

I find it funny how Evelyn is getting pissed if the MC fucks Moonsong, considering she is/was using her ability for months, specifically choosing hoes, to get expirience in getting fucked
Well not that i see her much as virgin, really.

Curious about the other members of the sisterhood and if they are...less getting arround the block than Moonsong/Emerald, i really wanted answear 'yes' as Moonsong was asking about getting checked
Just hope the MC stops being a cringe fanboy.

Have you tried to say no to Moonsong?

 

[Crowangel]

nice update.. took me a bit to pass the end of episode 1 screen and even closed down thinking it was just a chapter 1 rework till saw the change log.. really liking this one and the characters so far

 

[Kalléo]

Is the mother fully avoidable? Is she one of those mandatory Li's? Cause she seems like a terrible one. Also love the justification of 'I gotta see her fuck someone else so I can MAYBE be interested in her' from the dev atleast make her avoidable though

 

[Raziel_8]

Have you tried to say no to Moonsong?

Yes i tried both paths (actually hoping to reject Moonsong in that path), i just found her hypocrisy amusing.

 

[HornyyPussy]

Is the mother fully avoidable? Is she one of those mandatory Li's? Cause she seems like a terrible one. Also love the justification of 'I gotta see her fuck someone else so I can MAYBE be interested in her' from the dev atleast make her avoidable though

No necrophilia in this so no, no mom fucking.......

 

[Jacquesdor]

I find it funny how Evelyn is getting pissed if the MC fucks Moonsong, considering she is/was using her ability for months, specifically choosing hoes, to get expirience in getting fucked
Well not that i see her much as virgin, really.

Curious about the other members of the sisterhood and if they are...less getting arround the block than Moonsong/Emerald, i really wanted answear 'yes' as Moonsong was asking about getting checked
Just hope the MC stops being a cringe fanboy.

The next chapter should hopefully clear up the Evelyn thing... if you go on the don't decline Moonsong route anyways. And yeah, she's only a virgin physically, mentally... not so much.

As for sex lives of the other sisters... It's already mentioned that one of them is an actual virgin, the other two... not so much, but not as bad as Emerald or Moonsong

Is the mother fully avoidable? Is she one of those mandatory Li's?

Pursuing the "mother figure" will not be mandatory.

 

[HornyyPussy]

Pursuing the "mother figure" will not be mandatory.

It should be......

 

[Kalenz123]

Put sandbox tag on it so people don't waste their time.