VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[DDDIsReal]

Well, do you volunteer or have any volunteers? Because I don't think there are thousands of men willing to contribute to the game but Eva is pushing everyone away. I tried to direct volunteers to help Eva with writing at least character bios, can you guess what happened to them? They lost interest or became inactive or personal life happened to them. And if they bailed at the simplest short-term tasks, how would one find help for more substantial long-term tasks?

And the problem isn't even with finding people eager to help, the problem is with keeping them around. I think Eva is well aware that she needs help and is actually low-key asking for it, but one needs to be careful about selecting the talents who'd stick around and not just leave mid-development. Just look at what happened with Lust Campus, all because the artist didn't feel like drawing porn anymore, dooming the project single-handedly. I remember when there was initial hype around that game, being a spiritual successor to GGGB, but now hardly anyone cares about it.

i never said it was easy(and yes if i could i would help even with only bug testing) but it's possible that in one year without updates she haven't found the right help? C'mon leave the boat and your queen's side for a moment and be objective

 

[bauman]

Lena is not your character. These "maybes" have nothing to do with who Lena is as a person, at the very start of the game. I somehow doubt that you could rewrite your personality into something you're not. Your personality is consistent. Same thing with ORS characters. Lena finds connection with Ian, Holly, Emma, and Ivy. This is her people, because Eva decided so. And that means that whatever happens between them will depend not on Lena's random whims but on series of events that shape their relationship. Lena can mess with others because they're simply not as important to her. She has reasons to hate Stan by trusting Louise, she has reasons to dismiss and treat Louise badly because she's stupid and clingy, she can make Mike cheat on his girlfriend because for her that girlfriend is a nobody. There are objective reasons for Lena to act within her character. She can steal money from Ed and Molly because she can be desperate about money thinking it's no harm if they're about to close anyway. This kind of internal logic guides EVERY decision in this game. NOTHING suggests that Lena likes to be a cheating slut, in fact she DISLIKES cheaters based on her past experience. For something to apply to Ian / Lena, there has to be an established pattern of similar behavior or some form of predisposition towards it.

If she didn't care about others' feelings, she wouldn't hate Ian for sleeping with Holly, which happens by default if Ian ends up kissing her. Holly and Ivy are two people in Lena's life that she trusts and protects. Just because you want to play Lena like a psychopath doesn't mean that she IS a psychopath.

The way I see it, the problem with Lena is that her personality is not consistent if the player puts her on the 'corruption' path. The character quickly becomes illogical and perhaps even unpleasant. Her behavior contradicts her basic 'canon' personality at the start of the game and turns her into a massive fucking hypocrite. Not only because of her actions but also how she goes about them. At times, it almost feels like the writer wants the player to know that they've made the 'wrong' choice, which I find very odd for a porn game.

 

[dobzzz]

The way I see it, the problem with Lena is that her personality is not consistent if the player puts her on the 'corruption' path. The character quickly becomes illogical and perhaps even unpleasant. Her behavior contradicts her basic 'canon' personality at the start of the game and turns her into a massive fucking hypocrite. Not only because of her actions but also how she goes about them. At times, it almost feels like the writer wants the player to know that they've made the 'wrong' choice, which I find very odd for a porn game.

Well I think it's not that bad cuz a lot of cheater don't like getting cheated on

 

[DS1Q]

The way I see it, the problem with Lena is that her personality is not consistent if the player puts her on the 'corruption' path. The character quickly becomes illogical and perhaps even unpleasant. Her behavior contradicts her basic 'canon' personality at the start of the game and turns her into a massive fucking hypocrite. Not only because of her actions but also how she goes about them. At times, it almost feels like the writer wants the player to know that they've made the 'wrong' choice, which I find very odd for a porn game.

Considering I have met few such hypocrites before who still hold on to hypocrisy but have 0 self awareness to know they are being hypocritical. I think that is pretty realistic even if it feels inconsistent lol.

 

[Gicoo]

Regarding Lena hating cheating: The moment she invited Mike, all her resentment toward Cherry, Axel and so on is hypocritical. Out of character, unless we accept that Ian and Lena can develop extremely radical like GGGB Ashley.



Complaining about the slow developement overall is agreeable.
Complaining that chapter 10 wasn't released during the weekend is not, since it was stated that it will be done between the weekend and the first december. The weekend was merly the earliest possible time, nothing guaranted.

Unless chapter 10 isn't released until 1st december 11:59 pm, complaining that Eva made a false promise is faulty.


So no broken promise for the next ~80 hours. But if there is nothing on 00:00 am on the 2nd december, then every complaint these days becomes magically valid.

 

[Kalenz123]

Ok. To distract from the white noise of "lasy milking dev milkr" as we await the update, I've confirmed a little noticed but not so hidden truth that'll make some cringe, some cheer, and most say "why the fuck did you post this?"

But based on general female preference: *Drumroll*

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That would just mean that Ian should stay away from that loose slut Lena and innocent, tight, cute, little Holly is the girl for him.

 

[mommysboiii]

The way I see it, the problem with Lena is that her personality is not consistent if the player puts her on the 'corruption' path. The character quickly becomes illogical and perhaps even unpleasant. Her behavior contradicts her basic 'canon' personality at the start of the game and turns her into a massive fucking hypocrite. Not only because of her actions but also how she goes about them. At times, it almost feels like the writer wants the player to know that they've made the 'wrong' choice, which I find very odd for a porn game.

true finally someone with a brain

Well I think it's not that bad cuz a lot of cheater don't like getting cheated on

but than lena would never suck jeremys cock or fuck him or mark or anyone in the first place(which would be pretty boring so I love that we can do it but also like play sweet inoccent lena sometimes)

 

[mommysboiii]

That would just mean that Ian should stay away from that loose slut Lena and innocent, tight, cute, little Holly is the girl for him.

nah mate i will date her with ian and hope eva dont does the decission that all the sudden(because ntr crybabys) holly(cindy and all women too) cant get corrupted anymore just because she is together with ian even if you push her with ivy and lena in that direction with future partys and drugs and so on

I corrupt the shit out of holly even if together with ian

 

[Samuel Hidayat]

Regarding Lena hating cheating: The moment she invited Mike, all her resentment toward Cherry, Axel and so on is hypocritical. Out of character, unless we accept that Ian and Lena can develop extremely radical like GGGB Ashley.

Being a hypocrite is fine if the character gets called out for it, realizes their mistake, and either learn to be a better person or keep doing it since they're on the corruption path anyway.

 

[dobzzz]

true finally someone with a brain

but than lena would never suck jeremys cock or fuck him or mark or anyone in the first place(which would be pretty boring so I love that we can do it but also like play sweet inoccent lena sometimes)

Who is mark thou ik Robert , Mike and ian and his friends but who is mark ,is it the same Mark from gggb

 

[mommysboiii]

Who is mark thou ik Robert , Mike and ian and his friends but who is mark ,is it the same Mark from gggb

no I always mistake this two guys

 

[Gicoo]

Being a hypocrite is fine if the character gets called out for it, realizes their mistake, and either learn to be a better person or keep doing it since they're on the corruption path anyway.

Hopefully this happens. It is done decently with Ian: He is aware that he isn't better than Axel and feels genuine guilty, rather than gloating about how he is better than Wade.

It's ironic that Ian comes off better, even though he betrays one of his best friends, while Lena merely sabotages someones relationship she doesn't know and relate to.

 

[Deleted member 5204482]

Hopefully this happens. It is done decently with Ian: He is aware that he isn't better than Axel and feels genuine guilty, rather than gloating about how he is better than Wade.

It's ironic that Ian comes off better, even though he betrays one of his best friends, while Lena merely sabotages someones relationship she doesn't know and relate to.

Maybe that's a result of the creative divide between what the two protagonists each represent to Eva Kiss:

Ian's half has more consistent development and balancing for Ian and his love interests in their respective routes, the focus on writing and meta aspects might also be indicative of Eva's desire to evolve and move forward as a creator.

Lena represents more of a holdover from GGGB: less consistent and less realistic characters and development to keep in line with the "GGGB 2.0" model that will be more appealing to old fans and keep patrons onboard with the typical porn-before-plot and corruption routes.

 

[bauman]

Hopefully this happens. It is done decently with Ian: He is aware that he isn't better than Axel and feels genuine guilty, rather than gloating about how he is better than Wade.

It's ironic that Ian comes off better, even though he betrays one of his best friends, while Lena merely sabotages someones relationship she doesn't know and relate to.

It feels like Ian's cheating scenarios are more thought out. On Lena's path, you have her getting raw dogged by Mike - a total stranger to her and Jeremy - another stranger with whom she develops her initial interest mainly because of the size of his dick. So he's more of a fetish device so far.

It's a shame Eva Kiss put Ed & Molly on the back burner because Ed could've been a believable option for a well-developed cheating scenario for Lena early on.

 

[BloodyMares]

Regarding Lena hating cheating: The moment she invited Mike, all her resentment toward Cherry, Axel and so on is hypocritical. Out of character, unless we accept that Ian and Lena can develop extremely radical like GGGB Ashley.

Hypocritical yes, not necessarily out of character. Everyone has dark thought or impulses, the ones we usually suppress to appear nice and avoid judgment. She might not be overly empathetic towards strangers, only the people she cares about. So Mike's girlfriend in her mind might not even exist and he just plays hard to get. Lena can be very selfish and biased. Even when she seemingly cares about others' well-being, her worry for them is based on selfish reasons. She attacked Ian for kissing Holly not because Holly was in pain but because she stopped talking to her.

So with that in mind I think it makes sense that she feels very strongly about Cherry and Axel, because they hurt her. Likewise she can snitch on Jeremy to Louise to protect her from heartbreak and be overly protective of Holly (unless Ivy is involved). But she doesn't have a reason to hate Gillian for example because she doesn't know her, and likewise might not feel guilty about stealing Mike from his girlfriend, since to her she's of no consequence, and it's not like she's responsible for Mike being a cheater. I think her main hatred towards Cherry has to do not even for being involved with Axel, but for having a threesome without being aware of their affair. It was a very humiliating experience, and she believes Cherry wanted to humiliate her by playing this twisted game, instead of confessing and warning Lena that Axel shouldn't be trusted.

Personally, I think Lena's affair with Jeremy is much more evil and hypocritical in relation to Louise than her hookup with Mike. Unlike with Mike's girlfriend, she knows how hurt Louise would be if she realized what Lena was doing. That contrasts with her earlier concerns about Jeremy's behavior. Which once again proves my theory that Lena is very selfish, willing to set her morals aside if she ends up benefiting from someone else's misbehavior. No harm done if the victim doesn't know anything, right?... She seems to like to be the seductress, that's why Seymour's words end up working so well on her.

 

[Samuel Hidayat]

It feels like Ian's cheating scenarios are more thought out. On Lena's path, you have her getting raw dogged by Mike - a total stranger to her and Jeremy - another stranger with whom she develops her initial interest mainly because of the size of his dick. So he's more of a fetish device so far.

It's a shame Eva Kiss put Ed & Molly on the back burner because Ed could've been a believable option for a well-developed cheating scenario for Lena early on.

I haven't played Mike route yet. Is he still dating his OG girlfriend despite fucking Lena on the side?

 

[BloodyMares]

I haven't played Mike route yet. Is he still dating his OG girlfriend despite fucking Lena on the side?

Yes, though Lena can progress their relationship from casual booty-calls to semi-romantic affair where he openly admits that she makes him feel something he hasn't felt even with his girlfriend.

 

[bauman]

I haven't played Mike route yet. Is he still dating his OG girlfriend despite fucking Lena on the side?

Yeah, Mike is basically Pauly D from Jersey Shore. He gets the benefits of smashing Lena without putting in the work to get there as Ian does.

 

[Sheet420]

ian loser/holly corrupted by ivy and lena (hope they go on party with mike or mark or how he is called for some practice)
or
ian loser/cindy relationship route hope axel trys something with her
or alison/ian loser love route I cant decide all 3 are good dont know which i play first

What are the specifics of Ian loser route?

 

[fatpussy123]

Waiting for Eva Kiss to post an update is AGONY