VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[Socrambus]

Since Eva said that the plan was to scale back the number of characters that will be at the beach house and we know at least 5 are guaranteed I think the breakdown will look something like:

Guys:
Ian
Perry
Wade

Gals:
Lena
Holly
Emma

I then think we'll get up to two more characters and it will largely depend on relationship statuses. The two biggest front runners are are likely to be Jeremy and Ivy, then Allison / Cindy* / Mike / Robert**

*Will depend on Ian's and Wade's flags for Cindy, with a minor influence being Perry's suspecion
**Will depend on Lena's and Holly's flags, and if Robert got into fight(s) with Ian (I do think this would be a long shot regardless)

With those 6 characters there's very little potential for conflict aside from Ian fucking Emma behind Perry's and Lena/Holly's back (and maybe some threesome potential). If you include Ivy, Cindy and Jeremy the possibilities multiply, although maybe it would be a bit too much for the scaling back Eva intends to do.

For example, I can see Ivy taking advantage of a truth or dare game to mess with Cindy by flirting with Wade and/or trying to expose Ian/Cindy if she knows about that.

 

[Xupuzulla]

Cindy NEEDS to go to the beach house,shes the only who can make some good drama happen.
I guess Ian-Emma fucking behind everyone back can be fun too but is not the same,the queen needs to go.

 

[MilesEdgeworth]

Even though they probs wont go but we can also get drama from axel and cherry as well. That could be fun

 

[MinkoSvk]

(and still I couldn't add all the ideas I had...)

This is good sign for writter's block going away

 

[SerHawkes]

Ivy....... I want her to go so badly that its definitely clouding my judgement. I can see a world where she goes depending on your choices with Lena OR if Ian has max points with her and straight up invites her through peoplegram for example.

Ivy not going to the beach episode, even after picking up the swimsuit earlier, would be grounds for an arrest warrant on EK. Borderline war crime.

 

[Blurpee69]

With those 6 characters there's very little potential for conflict aside from Ian fucking Emma behind Perry's and Lena/Holly's back (and maybe some threesome potential). If you include Ivy, Cindy and Jeremy the possibilities multiply, although maybe it would be a bit too much for the scaling back Eva intends to do.

For example, I can see Ivy taking advantage of a truth or dare game to mess with Cindy by flirting with Wade and/or trying to expose Ian/Cindy if she knows about that.

Ok, but we know that Ian, Perry, Wade, Lena, and Emma were all invited by Perry directly. There is basically a zero percent chance that Holly isn't going to be there in some capacity as she's the 3rd lead character at this point. And there can be plenty of drama between those six depending on choices made.

Lena or Ian partnering up with Seymour will cause tension with Emma.

Cindy drama with Ian and Wade, and possibly even Lena, regardless of if she's cheating on Wade with Ian.

Relationships between the Holly / Ian / Lena triangle, especially if Holly has been more strongly influenced by Lena and Ivy and was rejected by Ian.

Emma and Perry can have an interesting dynamic, especially if Ian has fucked Emma and Perry wasn't pushed towards Cherry.

There are a lot of small plot points that can be drawn upon to create drama between those six, and it can get even spicier if an Allison, Ivy, or Jeremy are present.

 

[bleachedturtle]

I thought the epilogue only contains Lena's Friday? Must be a very long day

 

[ffive]

But Cindy? 1000% coming AND having sex with Ian while Wade is there.

I suspect Cindy won't be there, because she'll be busy with her Wildcats contract. So for Ian who is having affair with her it will be a period of time where he sits there wondering if what Ivy told him about Cindy and Axel dating is true.

 

[rj677]

I suspect Cindy won't be there, because she'll be busy with her Wildcats contract. So for Ian who is having affair with her it will be a period of time where he sits there wondering if what Ivy told him about Cindy and Axel dating is true.

Even having Axels help, I didnt get the impression that Cindys modelling career was so "advanced" already to be talking with a modeling agency as big as Wildcats is supposed to be ... Maybe I missed something on the dialogues perhaps .

Also, something about a Chad Ian getting worried about what Cindy might or might not be doing with Axel never sits right with me ... Maybe my idea of being Chad is wrong, but in my mind a Chad Ian shouldnt worry about that because he is supposed to be confident . With other Ians I can see what you said happening if the modelling career is indeed that advanced though .

I have a question for the patreons of Eva that are here in F95: Since we are talking about the beach house part, can anyone tell us what were the options for the bikinis on the polls? I understand if you cant post them, but can you explain at least if its 1 bikini for every player or if its like the normal clothes where it depends on the stats? And if there were different designs for how they look outside of the different colors... Thank you for your service in advance

 

[ffive]

Even having Axels help, I didnt get the impression that Cindys modelling career was so "advanced" already to be talking with a modeling agency as big as Wildcats is supposed to be ... Maybe I missed something on the dialogues perhaps .

Err.. did you miss somehow that Cindy was the model who was awarded with Wildcats' summer contract, which is what Ivy was so pissed off about, because Axel was supposed to get her that work..?

I suppose it's possible if you have Lena cut all contact with Axel early, i haven't tried that route.

 

[Blurpee69]

Err.. did you miss somehow that Cindy was the model who was awarded with Wildcats' summer contract, which is what Ivy was so pissed off about, because Axel was supposed to get her that work..?

I suppose it's possible if you have Lena cut all contact with Axel early, i haven't tried that route.

Ivy still mentions something to Lena about it, and it's still ruminated on by Lena at the start of this episode.

 

[fatpussy123]

I thought the epilogue only contains Lena's Friday? Must be a very long day

The epilogue seems to only contain Lena's Friday which involves her most likely clothes shopping, since the weekly post showed Lena buying a bikini. It might also include her buying the dancer outfit found in the files. And Lena may also be going to the club to fill in for Ivy. If that's the case there might be a scene with Jeremy since he works there too.

 

[rj677]

Err.. did you miss somehow that Cindy was the model who was awarded with Wildcats' summer contract, which is what Ivy was so pissed off about, because Axel was supposed to get her that work..?

I suppose it's possible if you have Lena cut all contact with Axel early, i haven't tried that route.

After replaying TONS AND TONS of dialogue... Yes, I found it. Wow, I just missed it apparently. Also, that wasnt the easiest thing to find by the way . Its well hidden and its mentioned once in an Axel message thats easily skipable.

When Ivy mentions it she never says what she lost either, just that Axel "didnt deliver"...

But good eye man, respect .

I guess I can blame that on how detached I get while playing the Lena parts . I just play it because Im forced too, so Im basically just using Lena to set everything I can for Ian

 

[DaMeltz69]

I just hope Lena finally goes to bed with Seymour in the epilogue.

It doesn't have to be a full sex scene, have the chapter end with another "private modeling session."

Lena gets so horny she begs Seymour to touch her. Seymour asks if she understands what that means. Lena affirms, and the chapter ends with Seymour guiding her to his bedroom ...

On the non-Seymour path, Lena reluctantly goes to bed with Seymour to pay her mom's medical bills.

Open Chapter 12 with the actual sex scene between the two.

 

[ArcherHades46]

I wonder if Eva will arrange a demonstration meeting with two unknown men - her subscribers in the porn network. I think the idea is at least interesting, the very process of the game and the creator of the temptation of the following news... it just puts you in a stupor.

 

[jduk]

If Jeremy gets Louise pregnant I hope Ian will have a path to help her raise it and make a family, that would be beautiful

cuck ian route

 

[Cezzard]

Seymour tease should've come to a closure, i've been waiting a proper sex scene since first photoshoot..

 

[GokutheG]

I´m lookink forward to do that, my Lena has fucked Ian some times, nothing about Louis yet ( a kiss in the game and that´s it), i suposse i need to advance more in the story for become dominant as Lena, or is it necessary do something for get this?

After coming home from the club in chapter 7 you will find Louise masturbating. You either need to have taught Louise how to have sex with women your first time together, took drugs at the club with Ivy or have lust/charisma at level 5. I believe she can't be seeing Jeremy as well.

 

[mommysboiii]

So, in the Q&A Eva says that the game will probably only go to 15 or 16 chapters, instead of the 20 she predicted around chapters 9-10.

Then in the recent status update, Eva says the chapter 11 epilogue, which is supposed to cover one Friday just from Lena's perspective, is "almost as long as Lena's previous part in Chapter 11 (and still I couldn't add all the ideas I had...)"

Maybe it's just me, but taking these statements together would seem to indicate that Eva may be getting tired of ORS going on this long and taking the time it does... until she gets into writing and drawing it and then it balloons in terms of size and scope and she keeps having more ideas for it.

In the long run I wouldn't be surprised if we get only 3-4 more chapters... all of which are huge in size and get released in sections because they all have a lot of content. For example, we get a prologue, then Ian or Lena (whoever is first up that chapter), then the other one, then the first one again, the second again, then an epilogue. All in sections (12.1, 12.2, 12.3...), released irregularly over the course of, say, 9-12 months total. So the number of chapters is less than expected but the length of play time in total is just as long as if there had been several more chapters.

Don't get me wrong, I'm not complaining about this if it happens, it's just interesting to me to see that Eva herself seems to be pulled back and forth between moving ORS towards a conclusion and continuing to tack on more ideas and more choices, spinning out the game into longer paths. It already happened with chapter 11; Eva herself said she had planned for various events and crucial decisions to happen in 11 but ended up focusing on some of the available relationships just continuing along instead. And I do think she'll stick with the plan to have big plot points happen in 12, but after that... I would bet the story starts spreading out and slowing down a little again...

I hope that its not getting rushed the corrupten barley started with some girls

I really hope for at leaast 1-2 relationshipt routes (ian) with downfall/corrupten cindy,alison,gillian,holly....

 

[mommysboiii]

Im dropping my 2 cents about this: Cindy is 1000% going IF the cheating path is on . Now if youre on the "true love" path with her I dont think shes coming.

Jeremy is difficult to gauge because hes always busy with his work, so its tough to predict him coming. Same thing for Alison. Louise isnt coming because shes going out of town in August.

Ivy....... I want her to go so badly that its definitely clouding my judgement. I can see a world where she goes depending on your choices with Lena OR if Ian has max points with her and straight up invites her through peoplegram for example.

But Cindy? 1000% coming AND having sex with Ian while Wade is there. For me, yuvce countered is own argument : We all know that Evas writing tends to be on the kinky side even in ORS. Then you account for the fact that theres an active flag for "Perry suspicion". Maybe you get cockblocked by Perry if his suspicion is too high

But HELL YEAH Ian will be balls deep in Cindys pussy in the beach house. Hell, Im even predicting a scene where we are fucking her while we can see or ear Wade in the distance . Why have a cheating path if youre not using one of your best chances to spice it up and play into the whole risk of it? Maybe its only for players with a certain level of charisma to convince Cindy, but Im definitely predicting it to happen

so you are saying ian is 1000% getting cucked at beach party?? thats music in my ears ket the kinky games begin