VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[lorkdubo]

Deepest and most tearful and abject apologies....but Dubai is the place for the intense fantasies of debauchery....after Seymour shares Lena with Agnes (usually dominant elderly ladies are into fisting) ...and then takes her to Dubai...well....Gedads....Dubai is a center for sexual slavery. The Emirs love the "no limits" scenarios....I suppose they will fete her elegance...buy her the most beautiful expensive and lavish clothes and adornments...then sit with her...watching movies of steadily increasing depravity while magnifying Seymour's ehibitionist Lovense Egg games...escalating to the metal egg of fearful painful electric shocks....the anal vibrator....and finally bringing in the BDSM elements......first to others for Lena to witness....until finally Lena herself succumbs to the intensity of the Emir's filth..St. Andrew's Cross, of course....you know....the one that turns a girl into..well.. an "X"......Seymour, of course, so tame by comparison, will have vanished by then...and Lena will live in a never ending state of excitement....pain...and panic....never knowing what new ferocious tortures might present themselves at any moment. *sigh* she should have chosen Italy.

That sounds as bland and boring as the 50 Shades of Gray movies. Come on... Seymour's plot is so bland. Give me a twist where Lena doesn't give a fuck anymore and she comes with a knife and stabs the creepy old fuck Seymour to death for being a creepy fucker. That's something new and fresh. All these blackmail plots tend to be so retarded. When a rat is cornered, it's going to bite the fuck out of you.

 

[Marley300]

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Ian is ready for the tournament!

I wanted to finish writing on the 15th, but I'm still working on the tournament scene itself. After hyping it up for so long, I felt I needed to devote some time and effort to make it as interesting, memorable and fun to play as I could. I'm probably over-complicating things more than I should (as is always the case, it seems) and I've been figuring out the narrative-driven fighting minigame as I go, but almost all pieces have fallen together already.

Aside from that, all the art is done on my part and in the hands of my colorist, so now's only a matter of finishing the tournament, playtest, polish and finish off the illustrations once the colorist sends back the images with the base colors. I hope I can release it in time, but either way, this update it's close to being done! I hope you'll have fun with it.

 

[bleachedturtle]

hmm I wonder what's so complicated about the tournament? Are there any actual stakes, narratively speaking?

 

[Xupuzulla]

I was expecting for a release date but is ok,seems like is not going to be delayed.
I wonder if you can make Ian fail and get his ass kicked hard,bruises in his face and all that.

 

[dolfe67]

I wonder if you can make Ian fail and get his ass kicked hard,bruises in his face and all that.

Of course you can, there will be a mini game like with all previous fights

 

[Socrambus]

I was expecting for a release date but is ok,seems like is not going to be delayed.
I wonder if you can make Ian fail and get his ass kicked hard,bruises in his face and all that.

From her words, I would not rule out a small delay, maybe early December. But that's just my feeling, hopefully I'm wrong.

 

[Sethmsf]

Yes, same feeling. Early December alpha and beta and the final prologue version for the middle of the month

 

[Leongen43]

Well perhaps Eva will write a spin-off....one off the Patreon restrictions...but you know as time goes on....and Lena's elegance has melted away....sadly....the Emirs will wind up selling her....*sigh* to the freak Mädchenfleisch market across the Arabian Sea and the Gulf of Aden.

Lena could be for sale, I have to hurry to buy her before a damn reseller beats me to it and when I want to buy her he's going to price her so high that she's going to break my ass like when Ian wanted to penetrate from behind Alison

 

[Andrea9999]

Lena could be for sale, I have to hurry to buy her before a damn reseller beats me to it and when I want to buy her he's going to price her so high that she's going to break my ass like when Ian wanted to penetrate from behind Alison

Good luck trying to find the proper auction room on the dark web.

By now....i guess it is quite obvious to you that I love the dom/sub thing....though I am put off by outright rape. (The people who have attacked my Seymour-Lena preference may not realize that the thread I played involved mutual desire on both parts; I "played" in "skip mode" a different thread where I see what they mean by blackmailed and that route did not interest me.) In my Seymour-Lena route, I was maximizing Lena's intelligence and kept enjoying interactions with Seymour and Eva appropriately has misgivings "canned" into the codes.

So here is a question: I am curious to see Ian "insist" on that from Allison but I think he had too high a charisma rating; I played in mostly skip mode a route minimizing charisma but then he never got to the getaway with Allison. I really do not want to put too much time into this so a spoiler would be fine; just put it in a spoiler envelope. Thank you.

And finally, if your keyboard starts spontaneously typing reverse apostrophes even after you replaced the batteries (wireless) what is the fix?? I have combed through GGGB and curiously this issue is not addressed.

 

[Blurpee69]

hmm I wonder what's so complicated about the tournament? Are there any actual stakes, narratively speaking?

No stakes have been set as of yet. But Eva has been setting this up as an important upcoming event for some time. It could potentially be the starting point for Ian's bad boy turn that has also been hinted at and theorized was going to happen.

 

[Leongen43]

I like that you like dom/sub that differentiates you from the rest and that is what makes me always want to read your posts, I practice dom/sub with some women that I know less with my wife for fear of breaking her identity and she will stop being that beautiful empowered woman that I know, but she saw me when I was doing it to a woman and the dominant way I treated her, you could see in her eyes the envy of not being that woman, the The truth is that I prefer that we remain an equal swinger and not become her a cuckqueen or submissive, so I have to find a solution quickly

And regarding your question about the GGGB, perhaps it is the lack of experience on the subject or perhaps they are not interested in addressing the subject for now because there is not such a large public and they limit themselves to a mild corruption of women.

 

[Andrea9999]

well i need this keyboard fixed!

I know what you mean with your wife. My sig other is dom oriented and I am sub oriented. So the first time we got intimate and tried to act the roles....it could not work...there were already too much love and respect that it was coming out too forced and we immediately abandoned it. We are monogamous and very happy. I used to really be in a wild sub mode...very hot....but it is not something to build your life around for the long term. So I relegate it to fantasy now.

 

[Leongen43]

well i need this keyboard fixed!

I know what you mean with your wife. My sig other is dom oriented and I am sub oriented. So the first time we got intimate and tried to act the roles....it could not work...there was already too much love and respect that it was coming out too forced and we immediately abandoned it. We are monogamous and very happy. I used to really be in a wild sub mode...very hot....but it is not something to build your life around for the long term. So I relegate it to fantasy now.

I am glad that you are happy with your husband, perhaps when you have enough trust to open your relationship to other people where you set rules to avoid getting hurt unnecessarily, because I am going to tell you a secret, no fantasy, no matter how good it is, is going to equal reality. What will it make you feel when you experience all those sensations on your skin and the electricity running through your body, imagine the pleasure and physical and mental exhaustion that you can feel, do you think I'm wrong?

And what concerns me is not failure that makes me go back but the success that I may have and as a consequence break his identity

 

[Andrea9999]

..... What will it make you feel when you experience all those sensations on your skin and the electricity running through your body, imagine the pleasure and physical and mental exhaustion that you can feel, do you think I'm wrong?

I have had it...enjoyed it...and miss it a bit. But it would ruin what I have now which is more precious; that is just how I am wired.

 

[fatpussy123]

I wonder how the fighting minigame is going to work, I thought the tournament would just use the same mechanics as the previous fights in the game. But it sounds like EK is changing it up and adding some sort of narrative elements to it, plus you gotta think about how there has to be payoff for the training Ian has gone through, if you have maxxed out ians jiujutsu, maxxed out his physical stat, or just left him weak. Thats quite a bit to balance for this tournament.

also hope we can invite some of the ladies to the tournament

 

[yuvce]

also hope we can invite some of the ladies to the tournament

That would depend on who he's in a relationship with, if he's in a relationship at all, and what each girl's schedule is like at the time of the tournament.

 

[I-No]

In the end the tournament will be just as much fun as the Ren'Py mandala drug trip we already had earlier in the game. I am not eager at all for this tournament especially if there are any fancy game mechanics involved. IMHO it's about as useful for a porn game as a hole in the head - if I were looking for a fighting game I would fire up Mortal Combat instead of ORS...

 

[robrize2169]

the only fighting i want to see in the game are when Ian stands up for the girls when they are harrassed by Axel etc. oh and Seymour needs to have his face destroyed for harrassing Lena.

 

[Chemish]

I’m not particularly interested in the tournament but am willing to have my mind changed. Seeing Ian triumph over Axel in the octagon would be nice.

 

[Leongen43]

the only fighting i want to see in the game are when Ian stands up for the girls when they are harrassed by Axel etc. oh and Seymour needs to have his face destroyed for harrassing Lena.

What I want is for my bull to beat up Axel's toxic and ride him so hard that he ends up giving him an enema of semen and urine, filling him until his eyes pop out and he explodes like a balloon that looks like a fatality from Mortal Kombat, and for Seymour, a Jeremy brand vibrator connected to a truck battery, I'll leave the rest to your imagination.