VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12 Full] [Eva Kiss]

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coper

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When i start this version my computer locks and i have to rebot. When i rebot and restarts the game it gives me an error.
 
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dontcarewhateverno

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MyUserName1234 said:
I'm having a bit of an issue with Lena's hypocrisy here too. In my case, she just broke it off with Robert after the fight/non-fight, and Ian forgives her, though he still hates the thought of it...

But Lena, damn... she broke it off and called Ian unreliable... uhmm, nobody has made commitments yet..?
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Ugh. Didn't play the Robert route.. cause he's Robert. But you see this with Jeremy and Holly too. At least (arguably) with Robert it's not damaging any other friendships, but you can't say the same about the other too. Really hope Eva does some rewriting on all this between now and the Final chapter 8 release. Most narrative criticisms so far have just been player preferences, but Lena's reaction here is honestly just a glaring plot-hole.
 
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dontcarewhateverno

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Massi89 said:
Woah, what is this new chapter? I haven't even explored all of it yet, but that was amazing.
Not only as a porn game, but also simply as a visual novel to read.
Both the writing and the art are really good, and I felt that the choices in chapter 8 became significantly more drastic, which I thoroughly enjoyed. This new update raised the level of replayability for me, I want to try out various options to see how the story changes. I'm guessing chapter 9 won't be ready before August, so I'll take my time and try various routes.



Dude, you're talking about a girl who is capable of abusively entering her roommate bedroom, sucking her boyfriend's cock and then fucking him with her pussy, then keep it all a secret. I mean, she's not exactly an example of righteousness. And I think it wouldn't make sense otherwise, she's a character with her own weaknesses, not a heroine...
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Those are choices you can make to guide the character as you choose. Not the defined character. Though the only plausible explanation for her train-of-though reactions after some of these scenarios is that she's purposefully written as a sociopath. I'm pretty sure that wasn't Eva's intent, so there are some immersion-breaking writing flaws here. Hopefully it'll be edited after alpha.
 
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dontcarewhateverno said:
Those are choices you can make to guide the character as you choose. Not the defined character. Though the only plausible explanation for her train-of-though reactions after some of these scenarios is that she's purposefully written as a sociopath. I'm pretty sure that wasn't Eva's intent, so there are some immersion-breaking writing flaws here. Hopefully it'll be edited after alpha.
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Yes she's damaged & should visit a therapist in future chapter.
 
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4.60 star(s) 318 Votes