VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[MyStupidPornAccount]

Ian described his friendship with Jeremy in Chapter 1. He was his childhood friend and was in the same group of geeks, with Perry and Wade. Then, he started hitting the gym and changed a lot (according to Ian), so we can assume he was feeling a bit pathetic in his younger years and decided to play more into a "player" archetype and distanced himself from all the geek stuff he used to enjoy in order to be more successful with girls.

That is what makes me interested in him, I hope lena can unlock that side of him and it can be expanded upon but if it's just a throwaway line and jeremy is just unromancable it will be a shame.

But it's true that almost every interaction ian has with him so far is just high fiving over women they have each fucked, he tends to avoid social gatherings with the guys unless there is a girl there he can fuck or they are coincidentally at his workplace. Maybe jeremy will do well in the mma tournament and he will want to go pro and he will have some kind of story progression but i'd be happy if wade perry ian and emma had a jam session and he came to come and see it and hang out or something.

 

[Cabot]

Are you even listening? It should be an option but not turned on by default.

Sound like a hassle, for programmers and players, for literally no reason at all. So nah.

The feature is optional. There's a switch in the settings screen that enable or disable it.

 

[slightchance]

The feature is optional. There's a switch in the settings screen that enable or disable it.

To hide greyed-out options? Where?

 

[MyStupidPornAccount]

To hide greyed-out options? Where?

in the settings in the main menu there is "greyed out options" enabled or disabled

 

[slightchance]

That explains why I've never seen that option before. It's is not visible via the ingame (phone) settings.

 

[MyUserName1234]

That is what makes me interested in him, I hope lena can unlock that side of him and it can be expanded upon but if it's just a throwaway line and jeremy is just unromancable it will be a shame.

But it's true that almost every interaction ian has with him so far is just high fiving over women they have each fucked, he tends to avoid social gatherings with the guys unless there is a girl there he can fuck or they are coincidentally at his workplace. Maybe jeremy will do well in the mma tournament and he will want to go pro and he will have some kind of story progression but i'd be happy if wade perry ian and emma had a jam session and he came to come and see it and hang out or something.

Doesn’t he come over to watch a fight or game at some point?

 

[MyStupidPornAccount]

Doesn’t he come over to watch a fight or game at some point?

Once but it's purely a vehicle to have him show you and thus send you nudes of his gf and also his dick. It's almost like when he's not got a girl to fuck or nudes to share he just morphs out of reality until its his time again

 

[MyUserName1234]

Once but it's purely a vehicle to have him show you and thus send you nudes of his gf and also his dick. It's almost like when he's not got a girl to fuck or nudes to share he just morphs out of reality until its his time again

He is a side character, not a main one. That is what side characters are for.

 

[RC-1138 Boss]

What is his complexity? What is his goals, what does he want? Why is the way he is? We know nothing about Jeremy. All we know is that he has a big cock and trains MMA, (all melinated men have 12" dicks in Evas Universe). Other than this, he hangs out in what is supposed to be a somewhat upper-tier nightclub, bartendering in a t-shirt, torn jeans and sneakers. His only interaction with Lena is his big dick, and with Ian it's sending him pictures of said dick and occationally spar. To me he's a racial stereotype that fills some of f95s boys bbc fetish. And that's ok and all, but he's not a complex character. He along with Mike is ORS equivalent of Kevin and Iris friend (forgot his name) from GGGB. Walking, talking dildos.

This is one of the aspects of Evas writing I don't like, her male characters get underdeveloped personalities. I think all the girls are getting some agenda and goals. Take Cherry, who get's a fraction of the screen time Jeremy does, has a much deeper personality, she has dreams and aspirations of modeling, she is a artist and she intertwine with Lenas story, she comes into Axels story etc. etc. While we are suposed to have this moral dilemma in the Wade/Cindy angle, but Wade is so underdeveloped, that I don't really care about him. etc.

At least it seems his player persona seems to be mostly just a facade. Decided to check the infamous Lena/Jeremy scene and the guy has pretty much zero stamina, he cums way too fast when trying to fuck Lena.

I am even more convinced now after having checked the scene that he is actually just a average sexual partner in bed who likes to act as if he is Eros reincarnated in front of his friends.

 

[scor099]

At least it seems his player persona seems to be mostly just a facade. Decided to check the infamous Lena/Jeremy scene and the guy has pretty much zero stamina, he cums way too fast when trying to fuck Lena.

I am even more convinced now after having checked the scene that he is actually just a average sexual partner in bed who likes to act as if he is Eros reincarnated in front of his friends.

tell that to those who still think that Ian having a smaller dick makes him a loser and a cuck who cant even satisfy women when in fact he satisfied every woman he had sex with, even Lena who made Jeremy nut in a second.

 

[Deleted member 3064965]

Speaking of repetition I hope jeremy isnt relegated to just wow I love his cock sex is good and that's all I care about much like tyrone was in gggb. A route were lena manages to convince him of monogamy and romance would be great perhaps it could happen on the route where lena doesn't tell louise of his cheating but lets ivy do the dare causing him to break up with louise he could then pursue lena without her being a big cock fetishist, hell you could have them develop feelings for each other on the bbc fetish route too I hope we are given choice for it.

I wrote something similar shortly before the release of the chapter 8 Alpha, but decided it was the right time to shut up about it for a while, considering the sex scene between Lena and Jeremy couldn't possibly have been more centered around Jeremy's cock and Lena's obsession about it.

At the moment it's difficult to argue that Lena's interest in Jeremy is about something else than the big cock fetish. But Jeremy actually seems more hesitant to Lena's straightforward advances, and seems to struggle slightly to uphold his player act in front of her. That, and the fact that he, even though he is a jerk, at least is a bit more complex as a character than for example Jerome, gives at least a slight hope that he'll play a more complex role further down the line.

Also I generally like the idea of having at least one romantic route that begins as purely sexual, and then later evolves into something more from that. Though after the latest chapter, Mike seems more likely to play that role, considering the new variable that indicates a romantic relationship between him and Lena.

At least it seems his player persona seems to be mostly just a facade. Decided to check the infamous Lena/Jeremy scene and the guy has pretty much zero stamina, he cums way too fast when trying to fuck Lena.

I am even more convinced now after having checked the scene that he is actually just a average sexual partner in bed who likes to act as if he is Eros reincarnated in front of his friends.

Yes, I also noticed his lack of stamina. Also, after the first two scenes between him and Lena, I don't think he's actually touched her with any other part of his body than his cock. I think that suggests a somewhat… limited knowledge about how to satisfy someone sexually. Having a big cock could help you a long way, but if you otherwise just stand there doing nothing, it doesn't exactly make you a sex god.

 

[Cabot]

Once but it's purely a vehicle to have him show you and thus send you nudes of his gf and also his dick. It's almost like when he's not got a girl to fuck or nudes to share he just morphs out of reality until its his time again

If we’re talking about the “It wasn’t me” scene (with Ian, Perry, Jeremy and Wade in chapter 4) personally I think it was pretty good, a nice example of male friendship dynamics that made their relationship believable, not only something that’s stated by the game and you gotta take it as revealed truth. In fact it is the sort of scene I wish we see more as it helps develop the male NPCs, but I guess the porn gets in the way (plus probably some bias on Eva’s part who seems to find it easier to write those kinds of scenes in the “only girls” side).

Btw, while Jeremy is undoubtedly bragging at the start of the scene (and the rest of the gang can half-kidding rip him a new one for it), he only sends the pics to Ian if he asks for them...

 

[lcvargas]

I would prefer older men to have sex with Lena,men like Seymour.

Me too. I'm here waiting for a Seymour or an Ed scene.

 

[lcvargas]

Jeremy This, Jeremy that. blah blah blah blah blahblah blahblah blahblahblah. I'm getting tired of all the Jeremy talks. Everytime i go here to read the latest it's all about him.

 

[Tarmogo]

At the moment it's difficult to argue that Lena's interest in Jeremy is about something else than the big cock fetish. But Jeremy actually seems more hesitant to Lena's straightforward advances, and seems to struggle slightly to uphold his player act in front of her. That, and the fact that he, even though he is a jerk, at least is a bit more complex as a character than for example Jerome, gives at least a slight hope that he'll play a more complex role further down the line.

I can definitely see him evolving slightly beyond just being a walking talking fetish, but I honestly can't see him becoming too much more of a complex character with the information we currently have about him now. If Eva adds some additional interesting revelations about him or delves more into his past before all the player shit, maybe he could grow into a fleshed out character that people seem to want.

 

[Tarmogo]

Jeremy This, Jeremy that. blah blah blah blah blahblah blahblah blahblahblah. I'm getting tired of all the Jeremy talks. Everytime i go here to read the latest it's all about him.

You can always start a conversation about something else yourself . Judging by your pic and signature, I'd say you have a particular preference you could talk about.

 

[BlandChili]

You can always start a conversation about something else yourself . Judging by your pic and signature, I'd say you have a particular preference you could talk about.

Cameras are awesome.

 

[Deleted member 3064965]

I can definitely see him evolving slightly beyond just being a walking talking fetish, but I honestly can't see him becoming too much more of a complex character with the information we currently have about him now. If Eva adds some additional interesting revelations about him or delves more into his past before all the player shit, maybe he could grow into a fleshed out character that people seem to want.

True. In some ways it also reminds me of how Ivy is developing at the moment. She's the character among Lena's friends that, like Jeremy for Ian, looks to be most heavily involved on both sides of the story. She's got a mix of sympathetic and not so sympathetic character traits (more so than Jeremy), and as a slightly more complex and fleshed out version of GGGB's Jessica, it initially seemed like player choices would make her into either a positive or a more corrupting influence. But in the latest chapters, especially with the Billy storyline and her involvement with Axel, and thus possibly also with Seymour, she seems more destined for the latter. One thing that sets them apart, though, is that Ivy hasn't really had any important interactions with Ian yet. That could possibly be a turning point for her.

 

[Reasoon]

One thing that sets them apart, though, is that Ivy hasn't really had any important interactions with Ian yet. That could possibly be a turning point for her.

IanxIvy is the only Thing I still want from the game which has no real development yet. I think Ian's Option are all really good but Ivy would be interesting and possibly depending the way it would be handled could also be one of the most interesting Routes of the Game. Like you said IanxIvy is kind of the parallel to LenaxJeremy and there is defintely a Route happening so I'm hoping for this one too.

Has Eva ever mentioned some Informations about IanxIvy or is this something that most likely will not happen at all?

 

[MyUserName1234]

IanxIvy is the only Thing I still want from the game which has no real development yet. I think Ian's Option are all really good but Ivy would be interesting and possibly depending the way it would be handled could also be one of the most interesting Routes of the Game. Like you said IanxIvy is kind of the parallel to LenaxJeremy and there is defintely a Route happening so I'm hoping for this one too.

Has Eva ever mentioned some Informations about IanxIvy or is this something that most likely will not happen at all?

If it does happen, in a twist I want to see Ivy “catch feelings” for Ian and struggle as to what to do. Could be interesting conflict with Lena.