VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[dundun]

Holly's Editor(Forgot his name)? the homeless man(seems to be an important piece in Seymour's story)? Lena's Parents? The bouncer? Spike? Yuri(Is that his name? the kickboxing coach)?

You would only need to name Ian and Jeremy's kickboxing coach who if my memory serves me was Yuri, and there would be all the 25.

Na, Yuri is barely in the game. I actually forgot Jessica, she is more likely.

 

[bauman]

Axel would be the poster boy for what a successful, attractive man looks like. Smart, athletic and charismatic... But as Lena has sown us, he has a dark side to him. Will she be able to resist his influence on her life or will Axel's attributes be too much? His zodiac sign is Gemini.

 

[WatsonJohn]

Axel would be the poster boy for what a successful, attractive man looks like. Smart, athletic and charismatic... But as Lena has sown us, he has a dark side to him. Will she be able to resist his influence on her life or will Axel's attributes be too much? His zodiac sign is Gemini.

With those stats, kinda reminds of the meme "the guy she told you not to worry about"

 

[punisher33]

why is still no weekly update ?

 

[Deleted member 2128394]

Man poor Lou. Girl gets cheated on by her asshole boyfriend, fucked up by a stereotypical mean girl and then gets the same fucking wits score as said mean girl. Lou has a master's in literature, yo! She's smart, she's just insecure.

Getting dommed by Lena for a couple months should help with insecurity tho

 

[BlandChili]

Getting dommed by Lena for a couple months should help with insecurity tho

My kind of therapy!

 

[Deleted member 2128394]

With those stats, kinda reminds of the meme "the guy she told you not to worry about"

Axel is literally the character I would create on FIFA with 99 in every stat lmao

 

[knightoflisbon]

I'm waiting for the scene where Axel's eyes start glowing, he floats off the ground, and preaches:

"I AM ALPHA AND OMEGA, THE BEGINNING AND THE END"

Either way I wouldn't be worried since no one can compete with Ian and Lana when you have cheat stats on.

 

[godoff95]

Axel would be the poster boy for what a successful, attractive man looks like. Smart, athletic and charismatic... But as Lena has sown us, he has a dark side to him. Will she be able to resist his influence on her life or will Axel's attributes be too much? His zodiac sign is Gemini.

I knew he was Scandinavian.

 

[hotterthantacos]

Axel would be the poster boy for what a successful, attractive man looks like. Smart, athletic and charismatic... But as Lena has sown us, he has a dark side to him. Will she be able to resist his influence on her life or will Axel's attributes be too much? His zodiac sign is Gemini.

eghh, talk about being OP. ORS not balanced, please nerf.

 

[jaylop09]

It´s funny that most of the caracters fit in the "average white person" group but yet the ethnic variety in all of them is interesting.

 

[n0cn1l]

Chapter 9 weekly status report (6)

This status report will be brief: work on Chapter 9 keeps progressing bit by bit.
I'm still combining the writing with working on the art. All drawing have been completed and now I'm working over the base colors to get the final illustrations. I think I've finally come up with the optimal style to compliment Lenadai's colors and my linework, and some of these new pieces are amongst my new favourites so far.
Chapter 9 will have around 100 new illustrations, not counting the multiple outfit and pose variations.
In contrast, Chapter 1 only had around 20, and Chapter 6 around 75, so this is a new record.
I can't give a release date yet, but I would kick myself in the teeth so hard if I can't get this chapter out before the end of September.
In any case, I don't want to release something I'm not happy with, so it will be ready when it's ready (hopefully soon).
As always, thanks a ton for your patience, and I hope I'm working hard enough to deserve it.
I can't wait for you guys to play this next episode...

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

I wonder how many episodes EVA will write

I have it on a good source pulled from

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that it's going to be like 100,000.

 

[Badboll]

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Chapter 9 weekly status report (6)

This status report will be brief: work on Chapter 9 keeps progressing bit by bit.
I'm still combining the writing with working on the art. All drawing have been completed and now I'm working over the base colors to get the final illustrations. I think I've finally come up with the optimal style to compliment Lenadai's colors and my linework, and some of these new pieces are amongst my new favourites so far.
Chapter 9 will have around 100 new illustrations, not counting the multiple outfit and pose variations.
In contrast, Chapter 1 only had around 20, and Chapter 6 around 75, so this is a new record.
I can't give a release date yet, but I would kick myself in the teeth so hard if I can't get this chapter out before the end of September.
In any case, I don't want to release something I'm not happy with, so it will be ready when it's ready (hopefully soon).
As always, thanks a ton for your patience, and I hope I'm working hard enough to deserve it.
I can't wait for you guys to play this next episode...

Still a month or more to wait, yikes. Wish I knew the back end and how much work actually goes in to this and how much time a specific dev spends on their games. So I could be mad about slow devs with good reason instead of just being annoyed at them being slow.

Edit: More of a general statement, not specifically directed at this dev. More of a me thing with waiting so long for updates and getting disappointed so many times by many devs. The updates for this game are never disappointing.

 

[Clone002]

Eva definitely ain't a "slow dev"... Just look at how many illustrations she produces and branches she has to follow up at each update!
Of course I would love to get monthly updates, but in ORS, the wait is worth it!

 

[Badboll]

Eva definitely ain't a "slow dev"... Just look at how many illustrations she produces and branches she has to follow up at each update!
Of course I would love to get monthly updates, but in ORS, the wait is worth it!

oh I totally agree, it was more of a general statement. But updates do take a long time, you can't disagree with that.

 

[Rickster82]

Axel's character card is ridiculous, sorry! Lust on 7, charisma on 6, intelligence on 5-6 & it would be more realistic. I think athletics is OK.

 

[Tallyhoe]

Still a month or more to wait, yikes. Wish I knew the back end and how much work actually goes in to this and how much time a specific dev spends on their games. So I could be mad about slow devs with good reason instead of just being annoyed at them being slow.

Looking at all the variables in walkthrough should give you a general idea.

Axel's character card is ridiculous, sorry! Lust on 7, charisma on 6, intelligence on 5-6 & it would be more realistic. I think athletics is OK.

If he's being manipulative and cunning with how he's luring Lena back into his grasp like I think he is. I don't think his wit stat is unrealistic.

 

[punisher33]

Looks like a new chapter gonna be big update. Here is my expectations;
LenaxStan
LenaXAxel
LenaxEd
LenaxJeremy(at least sexting)
IanxAllison
IanxCindy
IanxIvy(maybe)
IvyxJeremy
But ım sure it won't be all, just expectation.

 

[dundun]

If he's being manipulative and cunning with how he's luring Lena back into his grasp like I think he is. I don't think his wit stat is unrealistic.

That of course assumes that he came up with this plan. When he confronted Lena in chapter 1 he wasn't exactly cunning.