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I think she thinks about Axel and Jeremy too... Maybe dp heheheCindy & Holly ... the reasons for BlandChili's sleepless nights
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Gilf material soon hehehe... She probably wants Axel to fuck her...
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Agnes has only made a brief appearance in the story so far, and she's not directly involved with the main plot. And that's probably a good thing. This wicked woman is only trouble. Her zodiac sign is Sagittarius.
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Eh, not really. All I said was that physically they're appealing, but knowing their personalities turns me off of them.
I like you more and more. Glad to have you here!
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BlandChili is actually a TRUE men of culture he even has a CHYOA account at this point I actually thinks he must be a olympic and doing this full timeCindy & Holly ... the reasons for BlandChili's sleepless nights
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I'm not a man at all, otherwise you're pretty close. I work in games design and want to publish writing of my own, I quite like CHYOA even though it's got way too many stories with no endings...BlandChili is actually a TRUE men of culture he even has a CHYOA account at this point I actually thinks he must be a olympic and doing this full time
I've been into erotic content for a while and feel sad that much of the world is so stuck up about the human body and it's potential pleasures
The reason why I'm quite active here is because ORS is the best product on the market. (Also COVID shut-ins, plenty of time)
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Hey, that’s the same lust stat as Perry, the infamous "sitting at home masturbating to porn all day" seven. A bit surprised, Agnes, but I’m not judging.
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Agnes has only made a brief appearance in the story so far, and she's not directly involved with the main plot. And that's probably a good thing. This wicked woman is only trouble. Her zodiac sign is Sagittarius.
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Give the old cougar some space, she probably sits at home masturbating quite a lot too
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granny action for who Ian of lena
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Agnes has only made a brief appearance in the story so far, and she's not directly involved with the main plot. And that's probably a good thing. This wicked woman is only trouble. Her zodiac sign is Sagittarius.
.seymour found his match.Too old to be a cougar. She'd be a sabretooth.Give the old cougar some space, she probably sits at home masturbating quite a lot too
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I agree that it's not going to happen. Until the end-of-game wrap-up summary, any scenes we see where MCs aren't there in person for the start of it will either be shown through an unexpected walk-in or through text, photos and video. That's the way it's been throughout both this and GGGB and I just don't see Eva breaking that MC POV mechanic. I personally wouldn't want her to either. It's just the way narration works, where either a story jumps to multiple viewpoints throughout, sticks to one (or in this case two) viewpoints, or has a narrator throughout the story to fill in the parts the main-perspective characters don't. Changing styles up like that throughout a story is jarring to the viewer/reader and evidence of an inexperienced author, no matter the format. (Exceptions for creative geniuses who know the rules and break them successfully for an intended effect. Eva is very good at designing erotic games and creates some of the few that I don't lose interest in due to poor art or storytelling. But I don't think she, let alone any video-game writer, is close to that level).
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I have a better idea since you are so desperate you could try this at home on your pc and do it yourself
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Not really. There are scenes not involving the protagonist in GGGB that are shown through the narration of the other characters of said events. I'm sure this way of portrayal will also be used here. What I'm hoping is Eva to deviate a little bit with this formula on some major events, to show the events from the perspective of other characters. One way the author can do this is by having the protagonist be really worried of the current state of a particular individual and would be wondering what is happening to that individual right now. And, as if answering the protagonist, the game shows what is happening to that individual with the narrator maybe talking about the scene unfolding as well as talking about the protagonist and how this could affect them.
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When do those scenes happen? The only instances I remember dealing with material outside of Ashley's perspective is when people use their phones to show her videos of others without them being aware.
I don't dislike random perspective change as a concept but do when they occur in a narrative that have no history of containing them previously. Playing as, and viewing events through, only Lena and Ian for half a game but then suddenly being shown a scene between Wade and Perry, with neither protag present, would IMO feel like a really clumsy shift.
I also don't remember anything happening on GGGB where Ashley wasn't involved, there, or shown on someone's phone.
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But the narrators are Ian and Lena. It's a story with two first-person narrators, and there's no external third-person narrator to talk about a scene unfolding elsewhere. So that would involve completely changing the rules of how the story's told halfway through.
I also think Eva intentionally wants to tell the story through a more limited and subjective point of view, because she wants the players to experience it in a realistic way, the same way we have a limited and subjective understanding of the events that are playing out in our own lifes. As an example, we're seeing that when it comes to the events with Lena, Cherry and Axel. We've learned about it through Lena's viewpoint, but we're gradually understanding that that's not necessarily the whole or correct version of the story.
When you're writing stories you're always making these kinds of choices, and it gives a bunch of possibilities but also a set of limitations. And suddenly changing styles, as dontcarewhateverno pointed out, is jarring to the viewer/reader. It would probably also feel like a cheap narrative shortcut. A third-person narrator would've made it possible to tell stories without Ian or Lena present, but it would also create different limitations as to how the story can be told.
An example would be if you decide to corrupt Iris with his dad, Arthur. During sex, he tells Ashley how he slowly made Iris "open up" with him and how they are now fucking without constraints. And the scene didn't feel out of place because it connects with the current event of the game.
That's the thing, it's not a random shift in perspective because the change of perspective ties well with the narrative just like my example of "thinking about the individual" or Arthur narrating how he corrupted Iris.
I don't remember that happening in GGGB, except for in the summary at the end, which is Kosher to writing standards in some good film, books, games, ect. If it did happen at some other points, though I don't remember any, I'd chalk it up to Eva's inexperience as a writer at that point. Now where would this ORS narrator come from who hasn't said a word from Chapter 1 to Chapter 9 so far? If they were there the whole time, fine. As is, what you're suggesting doesn't sound like quality writing standards, which is what I explained in my post.