VN Ren'Py Abandoned Our Secret [v1.0] [17MOONKEYS]

[feeling_blue]

What would you call this game at the moment?

1. It looks like you tend to make MC call someone "Mom", both this game and UFO. I don't know if it's for cnecorship or you just like it this way, however I personally don't like it. Make it incest (or provide some patch to do the work), or don't play with words. That's not the way incest fetish satified.
2. version 0.4 with a length this short? Dude if you don't want ppl play your game without paying, don't upload it to a pirate site in the first place
3. Back to the game, I think if you make it focus on horror you will get a smaller amout of target audience, though I find out the tricks are quite some cliches. And maybe you should consider the interval of horror and sex. You don't wanna some crazy shits pop out while you are having a having a good time.
After all, I do wanna continue playing after having played the beginning, but with a certain length of contents

 

[Deleted member 3994251]

1. It looks like you tend to make MC call someone "Mom", both this game and UFO. I don't know if it's for cnecorship or you just like it this way, however I personally don't like it. Make it incest (or provide some patch to do the work), or don't play with words. That's not the way incest fetish satified.
2. version 0.4 with a length this short? Dude if you don't want ppl play your game without paying, don't upload it to a pirate site in the first place
3. Back to the game, I think if you make it focus on horror you will get a smaller amout of target audience, though I find out the tricks are quite some cliches. And maybe you should consider the interval of horror and sex. You don't wanna some crazy shits pop out while you are having a having a good time.
After all, I do wanna continue playing after having played the beginning, but with a certain length of contents

Thank you, I'll think about it.

 

[Xazz]

Is there a no pube or armpit option?

 

[Deleted member 3994251]

Is there a no pube or armpit option?

Don't worry about it.

 

[Jack-ish]

Why you so toxic? What is your problem?

Was that "toxic"? That's pretty funny. It's ok with me if you take it that way, but it was a joke. And I really did have to look it up because I didn't get it, and that's what I found.

 

[elimac]

That's a good thing to show natural womans, with hairy bush
thx for that

 

[Xazz]

Don't worry about it.

What's that supposed to mean?

 

[Deleted member 3994251]

What's that supposed to mean?

No spoilers. Sorry

 

[Xazz]

No spoilers. Sorry

Pubes turn into fur or smthing?

 

[Deleted member 3994251]

Pubes turn into fur or smthing? View attachment 2231421

Yes.

 

[Xazz]

Yes.

Well if thats the case...

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[Vrijgeest]

The same old assets. The model is it from a different summer; the Spanish bird.

 

[Vrijgeest]

Not much and you want feedback?

 

[Deleted member 3994251]

Not much and you want feedback?

Yes please

 

[botc76]

Eh, she's probably a werewolf.
There you have your furry.

 

[RZ900]

oh its that model again but this time with
hairy armpit

 

[BubblesTheAllMighty]

JEEZ. NO

With the armpit hair and bush she's got going, i couldn't help but wonder.

 

[Vrijgeest]

Long dialogues are not great. What's with the blue light; very unclear. Assets are sparse.

 

[mad7max]

WOW !!! Love hairy armpits !

So do i, bro

 

[Jackpots]

here is my honest feedback

the characters are correct, deja vu but not unpleasant. What is currently missing is a more in-depth description of the atmosphere. Also, a more gradual transition from naming mother lady friend to mother would be better. Currently a little too fast. It would also have to come from her.