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I wasn't talking about her working there, but about her accepting the position as August heir within the company. But even if we're talking about working there, it is still a line she has crossed. That doesn't make what she has done all black or anything, it's perfectly understandable given her situation, but she doesn't come out of it a pristine white either and it is a potential window for further corruption.Hana: To be fair to her if she did accept the Job at PC she would have to see her mom deteriorate in her home until she (Hana Mom) would die a very slow borderline torturous death from Huntingtons (when the person affected has little control over movement, is bedbound, unable to communicate, unable to eat and drink on his/her own and experiences severe chorea or extreme rigidity). She has shown NO signs that she would be there at all if her dad did not blackmail her with her mothers health. August even directly confirms this in his office while he is thinking and drinking in his office.
Jealousy is a feeling, it's not a contractual obligation. It doesn't matter what she and Edwin has agreed to, she could be jealous all the same based on her feelings.Her and MC are not dating and have only had a few possible sexual encounters it would be weird of her to say "Hey MC we arent dating but you still arent allowed to have any sexual encounters with anybody even if our job calls for it".
And while they haven't agreed to anything, I think it's quite clear that there is a budding romance growing between the two (if you played your cards right).
Which in turn isn't actually even neccessary for some people to be jealous. Some people don't want to share even their casual sexpartners with others. Just take this game and many other games as an example. Ever wondered why it's possible to play a whole playthrough without ever having to watch another dick even come close to any of the LIs? Probably because the anti-ntr crowd would go apeshit if they couldn't avoid having every LI be completely exlusive to the MC. And that's even though the LIs are computer pixels and not even real human beings. That's how fucking jealous people can be.
I haven't said anything about a harem route. I don't think there will be one and at this point I don't think it would be fitting given the present narrative. PC is a game with a very realistic vibe and if you want to introduce harem in such a game, it would take a lot of build-up to explain (why a number of LIs in the modern age would accept that kind of deal) and so far, there has been no such build-up at all.I really think you lean to far into the idea of her being super jealous if MC goes for the "Harem" (doubt this game will even end with a harem espically on the good boi route) if we go by in game right now you have the option to be "a partner in crime" a "friend" and a "sugar baby/fuck buddy".
But you don't need harem for jealousy. Hana have seen and will see Edwin fuck the carnations over and over again. The more enamoured Hana becomes with Edwin, the greater the "risk" for jealousy. Especially if Hana think Edwin is developing a more romantic relationship with any of the carnations (which, again, doesn't have to have anything to do with Edwin aquiring a harem). If anything, if she isn't jealous at all, despite the potential love of her life constantly fucking other women right in front of her, she would be a rather unusual woman and way closer to the actual harem dream.
As Hana is presented right now I agree (which I also said), my post wasn't about what I think will come, but a potential scenario I would appreciate.All in all while it is possible she will walk a path of corruption I think if we are dividing LI she falls into the low toughness ones (at least for now)
Well, then she should break up with him, not have an affair behind his back. But sure, I'm not saying she's Hitler for being unfaithful, I'm just saying that we already have an example of her going with lust/passion over morality. That in itself is of course nothing compared to the most depraved shit occuring in PC, so what she will think about that if/when she finds out, we do not know.Mina: I think Mina for sure has an option to fall into the high toughness ones but just want to say that she cheated on her boyfriend who had cheated on her for months, with potentially DOZENS of women both at work and non, not only behind her back but also in front of her for the sole purpose of "her trying harder in bed". On top of that from what we have seen and heard Ian is not even close to as skilled (regardless of toughness) at sexual stuff as MC is. Many of these references could just be MC bantering with Ian but lets be honest MC is MC so obviously they will be better at sex than the average scumbag. Even if Ian did not cheat from everything we have heard (mostly from Mina) indicates that he wasnt a very attentive or a very good match for Mina overall. Now when you look at MC he has the option to be way more caring, attentive, and sexually generous in a single scene than Ian had in a year.
Also, Edwin being better at sex and/or a more attentive lover than Ian, is, in my view, not in any way, shape or form relevant to the question of Minas morality. Cheating doesn't become morally ok just because the man you're cheating with has a bigger dick than your husband or any similar "but the sex is soooo good"-argument.
Why do you yourself think that she "for sure has an option to fall into the high toughness ones"?
No, this was pure speculation/thought experiment on my part.Do we know for sure how the LI will be divided at the end?
It has worked perfectly fine for quite som time.I agree with the idea that the game is nudging you towards low toughness but I argue that a long narrative as detailed and in depth as this would not work if the creators didnt focus towards one path.
No, it doesn't. You need to think a little bit more on how you structure your story, but you don't have to constantly put the MC in such situations where he/she would react very differently depending on his/her character. As I just stated, PC has managed this very well for quite some time.Focusing on both (while keeping the writing and characters as good as they are) requires huge dialogue additions as well as scene and story additions and alterations.
There can be numerous reasons for that. Here's a few examples:Why would a high toughness MC only eat mina out?
1. He actually cares about her (high toughness Edwin isn't a raving psycopath who is incapable of caring for others)
2. He is playing the long game, do something for her now, reap the benefits later.
3. He simply enjoys eating pussy for its own sake.
I don't even remember the details regarding that, but it wasn't anything that stood out to me. Also, isn't it possible to insist that she keep the gym open?Why would high toughness let Veronica close the gym? Etc etc.
I don't see why the game must "nudge" the player towards any particular route. Either you let the player choose or you don't. What you don't do is give the player choice and then half way through pull that choice away and force the player in another direction. That's not good game design.While the game could nudge you towards a high toughness route instead of low or both I again think that writing would present a challenge but this time in the opposite direction.
I have no idea what your talking about here. Harem is a very common and popular fetish/genre* and while it isn't (so far and probably won't be) in this game, I'd say PC has a shit ton of corruption already. Corruption of Edwin himself, corruption of the carnations (some more than others, but even Felicia is learning new tricks), corruption of Mina (cheating with her boyfriends best friend) and corruption of Hana (soon to be part of the leadership of the very criminal enterprise she loves to decry). I don't see why corruption would stand in the way of an interesting story, any more than any other fetish.It is much harder to write a story that is this compelling when the end goal is just corrupting/fucking whatever you want. Look no further than the 30 highest ranked games on the site, the vast majority of them dont focus directly on corruption/Harem and if they do nobody is arguing that they are as well written as PC (excluding Caribdis games). I personally think the easiest way for a game like this to be compelling is to have the world (the setting, characters etc) push the MC towards one thing while the narrative slightly pushes the opposite. My opinion is colored by the fact that I value an interesting story over every other factor in a game by a large margin so take this with a grain of salt. [/SPOILER]
Also, sidenote, Caribdis games are entertaining, but nowhere near as well written as PC.
* Example of a well written, high rated and popular harem game: Love of Magic.
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