VN Ren'Py Pale Carnations [Ch. 4 Up 4 Public] [Mutt & Jeff]

[SPeRMoToXiC]

top 1 erotic game is a cut from Honey Select....
A day after my review it was deleted..... And the 5 star two line reviews are still hanging there.... That's fucking awesome... This "game" is garbage...

 

[Seithr63]

No one who decide to work in a brothel can be marriage material.

For traditional marriage maybe, but that sucks anyway.

 

[Gorainu]

I couldn't really figure out from the reviews so hopefully someone can answer. What is the main plot about? Or the main genre? Is it drama? Mystery? Romance?
(I wish we had separate tags for story content)

I d say romance/psychological drama depending on your choices.

basically the main character get hired in a high end bordello and gets to interract with the girls there as well as 2 other girls not involved (for now at least) in prostitution.

Depending on your choices, you ll interract more or less with these girls and your psychological profile will reflect that. either you can act as a full on horny sociopath or an empathic guy trying to be helpfull in a poor situation.

It s well written in the sense that all character are multidimmensionnal. none of them is just one caricatural thing especially if you play in a way that let s you dig up a bit around them.

I hope this was helpfull. Give it a shot, it is worth it if you like well crafted stories, not even taking in the sex side of the game (which has well done animations)

 

[Turret]

Jeeeezuz. No one among these chicks is wife material. And Edwin definitely isn't husband material.

Edwin being marriage material hinges very much on how we play him. If you play him as a fullblown a... as some players here do, then he is not. But if you play him like a nice guy, which seemingly the majoriy of players do, he is.

No one who decide to work in a brothel can be marriage material.

Here I answer for both quotes, so I do not have to write it twice. It is rather shortsighted to base marriage potential solely on the work or meetingplace. Personality and circumstances (the why) are more important. You can burn your fingers easily no matter if the woman in question is an alley cat, from the clean up company, office worker, high society or even nobility, if your personalities and outlooks do not fit together!
A sage advice which I got decades ago, but was worthy of gold: (translated into English) Marry not because his/her high points, but despite his/her flaws! Meaning make sure you can live with the flaws of your partner in the long run. The good sides are not what will saw at the fundaments of a good marriage, it is some life events and the flaws, large and small, of both partners.

Coming back to PC: From all the female cast, be it the major characters or the side characters we know a bit better, I´d say there are 5, up to 7 (with some complications) possible fitting LI/wifes for variants of a goodish Edwin. From the main cast: Hana, Felicia and Mina definitely, with a grumbling stomach, Rosi. From the side cast: Sophia definitely. Dalia and Andrea possibly, but for that we would need a bit more insight into them.

 

[Ozymandias037]

Richard Gere has entered the chat and he's laughing his ass off at this.

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[The Senior Perv]

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"Heah! I'll have to remember that! Who said that, a president?"

 

[Bill Temple]

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"Heah! I'll have to remember that! Who said that, a president?"

Andrea best girl!

 

[Bill Temple]

Who is this girl? I don't recognize her if she's made of carnations.

She's not a Carnation. Andrea's a house girl, and she's awesome.

 

[Turret]

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"Heah! I'll have to remember that! Who said that, a president?"

What a chance posting! We earlier had a discussion about possible love interests/wifes for Edwin. My absolute favourites are Hana, Felicia and Sophia, but when it comes to the house girls it´s Dalia and Andrea! And what happens? We get a preview with Andrea in it. Shamed be he who thinks evil of it!

 

[Ottoeight]

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"Heah! I'll have to remember that! Who said that, a president?"

Yeah, baby.



And now... staying faithful to Hana is getting really hard.

 

[BubbaJubbs]

Are there any serious repercussions to dating Hana and screwing Mina? I'm hoping to have a polygamous relationship but wanna be open about stuff rather than sneaking around like Killian. Basically, can I be with multiple chicks and be honest about it?

 

[Machete]

Are there any serious repercussions to dating Hana and screwing Mina? I'm hoping to have a polygamous relationship but wanna be open about stuff rather than sneaking around like Killian. Basically, can I be with multiple chicks and be honest about it?

I believe it depends if your MC started a committal relationship with any of the two or kept it casual. So far so good, until the final release, all games are full Harem.

 

[Elduriel]

Are there any serious repercussions to dating Hana and screwing Mina? I'm hoping to have a polygamous relationship but wanna be open about stuff rather than sneaking around like Killian. Basically, can I be with multiple chicks and be honest about it?

this ain't really a harem game, so I expect if you do choose the Hana GF path, and you cheat on her it will have consequences. So far that's the only hard commitment I'm aware of. So if you wanna screw around just go with the FWB path.

 

[Guz007]

Love the game,
Love the story line,
Love the renders and animations,
Love the individual characters,
What i dont like is the dev's obsession with making a point of showing us old men's dicks and their tubby tummies , like can he add an option which turns off old dude with their dicks from the game or use some subtly ,
I dont know about you guys but thats such a turn off and pukey moment .

 

[lnppo]

Love the game,
Love the story line,
Love the renders and animations,
Love the individual characters,
What i dont like is the dev's obsession with making a point of showing us old men's dicks and their tubby tummies , like can he add an option which turns off old dude with their dicks from the game or use some subtly ,
I dont know about you guys but thats such a turn off and pukey moment .

I'm not sure these scenes are intended to be fapped to, same as the Mom porn scenes.
At least to me they seem purposely crafted to be offputting and disturbing to reflect how the women are being forced into such situations and juxtapose how the MC himself acts (whether you choose to be like them or try and be a decent person).

 

[sakosux]

So because I can organize my thoughts better here's my "review" of the prologue :
AFAIK, I managed to get every scene according to the "Memories" menu. (I looked at the walkthrough to get the alternative scenes) I only found Mina & Felicia likable characters so far. I really wanted to like Killian but he reminds me too much of a shitty friend I had. I don't have an opinion on the Mum, Hana or Jacob yet. There really isn't anything in the story (apart from vague mentions) that grabbed me so far. No real reason for me to care about the "heroines". The MC doesn't have a goal either (other than money really). Also I was bored during the

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. So that made the whole end of the prologue disappointing. If not for the reviews or the tags on this site, I would have thought the main genre for this game was "cuckold" or "voyeur". The protagonist gets blue balled (depending on choices) twice and doesn't take part at all in the end event of the prologue which left me baffled tbh. I think I'll give Week 1 an hour and if nothing grabs me I'll probably drop it. Maybe my expectations were too high from all the praise in the review and the forums.

 

[Turret]

So because I can organize my thoughts better here's my "review" of the prologue :
AFAIK, I managed to get every scene according to the "Memories" menu. (I looked at the walkthrough to get the alternative scenes) I only found Mina & Felicia likable characters so far. I really wanted to like Killian but he reminds me too much of a shitty friend I had. I don't have an opinion on the Mum, Hana or Jacob yet. There really isn't anything in the story (apart from vague mentions) that grabbed me so far. No real reason for me to care about the "heroines". The MC doesn't have a goal either (other than money really). Also I was bored during the

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. So that made the whole end of the prologue disappointing. If not for the reviews or the tags on this site, I would have thought the main genre for this game was "cuckold" or "voyeur". The protagonist gets blue balled (depending on choices) twice and doesn't take part at all in the end event of the prologue which left me baffled tbh. I think I'll give Week 1 an hour and if nothing grabs me I'll probably drop it. Maybe my expectations were too high from all the praise in the review and the forums.

Pardon me to tell you, but your review sounds rather like "I am miffed because the game denies me insta-gratification"! PC is a long game with many decisions which have impact sooner or later depending on your path. The prologue is what it says on the tin can, just the start. Even the side characters get some development and the main cast a lot. You need to give Pale Carnations a bit of time to get into it. There is a reason why so many players give top reviews!
If you just decide by playing the prologue, that is like reading 4 sentences of a novel and then saying I do not like it.

 

[dolfe67]

Even the most acclaimed game or movie has people not liking them. Nothing makes every single person see eye to eye

 

[Turret]

Even the most acclaimed game or movie has people not liking them. Nothing makes every single person see eye to eye

Yes, that is correct. For instance, I like the original cinema version of Blade Runner more than the "Director´s cut" and the tacked on, latecomer importance of it. The cinema version tells the story from the view of the Blade Runner as it should be. Deckart is already the stand in for humanity. The director´s cut is mostly delusion of grandeur, more documentary style coupled with wannabe double meanings. But that is my view on it.

Coming back to PC., naturally there will be people not liking it, tastes are different. But going by the way the review above was written, I felt that the poster judges too early in the game.
When I started playing PC I was not sure if it was for me, either. Some scenes/characters disgust me and normally I find girls tattooed to the degree Hana is a turn off. But Pale Carnations writing and art conviced me. And from all the games here on F95 it certainly is in my top 3, maybe even top position.

 

[sakosux]

If you just decide by playing the prologue, that is like reading 4 sentences of a novel and then saying I do not like it.

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The prologue took me (getting all scenes) 3 hours to read. That's more than steam refund window for reference. I cleared most Destiny's new expansion story missions in 3 hours. I am not saying the game is "bad" or that it's "badly written". However nothing in the story really made me want to spend another 3 hours reading it.
As others said, this is probably just not for me. I did play another 40 minutes of the game, and didn't enjoy how short / way the

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, I did enjoy Mina's scenes once again though.

Anyways, I probably won't return to the game unless I get way more free time on my hands. I hope you and the other's enjoy the game and I hope all the best to the creator!