VN Ren'Py Pale Carnations [Ch.4 Up.6 Public] [Mutt & Jeff]

[Simpgor]

Naaa, it will definitively happens: Edwin, Hana and Mina will become a truple and they will live their love for the rest of their lives. Which means a month since Ian will discover that, he will not accept what he will think it is a betrayal from his dearest friend, so he will solve the situation killing them all and then committing suicide.

Guys you must stop to question about the future of the characters, when I am around: I have a talent to turn their brightest future in a nightmare.

Uh.... nightmare as in it ignores large details that would make it not work?

Dont even need to engage beyond: reflective Ian

 

[lustforsex]

Naaa, it will definitively happens: Edwin, Hana and Mina will become a truple and they will live their love for the rest of their lives. Which means a month since Ian will discover that, he will not accept what he will think it is a betrayal from his dearest friend, so he will solve the situation killing them all and then committing suicide.

Guys you must stop to question about the future of the characters, when I am around: I have a talent to turn their brightest future in a nightmare.

Ian will consider this Edwin's betrayal and with Chuck's help, at the next summer exhibition the three carnations will be Victoria, Hana and Mina, while Edwin will sit on the cuck chair and enjoy his "happy ending."

Sounds quite realistic and fits well with the game, doesn't it?

 

[Nulldev]

Ian will consider this Edwin's betrayal and with Chuck's help, at the next summer exhibition the three carnations will be Victoria, Hana and Mina, while Edwin will sit on the cuck chair and enjoy his "happy ending."

Sounds quite realistic and fits well with the game, doesn't it?

You really want some heads to explode in this thread?

 

[Simpgor]

Ian will consider this Edwin's betrayal and with Chuck's help, at the next summer exhibition the three carnations will be Victoria, Hana and Mina, while Edwin will sit on the cuck chair and enjoy his "happy ending."

Sounds quite realistic and fits well with the game, doesn't it?

but chuck is ousted after kathleen wins (shes hotter so she wins)? and Edwin gets points with kathleen every time he shit talks Ian, so it would sadly for ian his name is being carved into the cuck chair with the next competitors being mina, grace, his maid, and the guy that edwin hit with the brick as a kid

 

[lustforsex]

but chuck is ousted after kathleen wins (shes hotter so she wins)? and Edwin gets points with kathleen every time he shit talks Ian, so it would sadly for ian his name is being carved into the cuck chair with the next competitors being mina, grace, his maid, and the guy that edwin hit with the brick as a kid

It seems like every ending for Mina is a happy one

 

[Idontplay]

Uh.... nightmare as in it ignores large details that would make it not work?

Dont even need to engage beyond: reflective Ian

Are you sure? Ian has taken some heavy blow in the last times: he lost Mina, he has found out that his maternal figure was a pornostar and in the future he might find out that his actual was using Edwin to manipulate him… Well actually the last part isn't true, but who know who will report this news to Ian and how… There are things able to destroy every mind.

 

[Simpgor]

Are you sure? Ian has taken some heavy blow in the last times: he lost Mina, he has found out that his maternal figure was a pornostar and in the future he might find out that his actual was using Edwin to manipulate him… Well actually the last part isn't true, but who know who will report this news to Ian and how… There are things able to destroy every mind.

He is already reflecting about mina (since most of your stuff requires him being reflective ill assume he is), and having him be pissed about her POTENTIALLY cheating on him with his best friend (while he was openly cheating on her just to see what she did) would basically undo the idea that he is growing as a character at all and honestly makes him worse than he was at the start.

He does know that Victoria did porn but he does not shut down completely over it, he is able to work at the sex club that very night at least and he doesnt seem to just be going through the motions (see next part)

He does know beyond a shadow of a doubt that Grace did blackmail Victoria? And assuming you are going relfective with him i assume Edwin also told him (earlier) that Grace wanted Edwin to convince him to work with his dad? I mean Ian literally talks to Edwin about "what" to do in relation to Grace...its clear that he is taking this in stride and did not blow up over it (being able to make a plan instead of going off the deep end with a "destoryed mind"

Finally you ignored a huuuuuuge aspect that Edwin is already questioning: How did grace get the info to blackmail Victoria? How does learning that his degenerate "unrepentant pervert" uncle who was like a father to him has been lying (by omission) for years was not only heavily involved in the production of Victoria's porn, but also (likely due to that) has a negative relationship with Victoria, and then shared that porn (did grace even ask for it?) with his mom?

 

[Idontplay]

He is already reflecting about mina (since most of your stuff requires him being reflective ill assume he is)

You are wrong.
Anyway don't take too seriously a joke, since they aren't made to be taken seriously.

 

[Meabe37]

She can nibble on me anytime with those fangs

 

[Draim]

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How about fingering your anus?

 

[Meabe37]

How about fingering your anus?

We already have been over this dear friend Draim lol. Not much into anal even more so when it's for me^^.

 

[Draim]

We already have been over this dear friend Draim lol. Not much into anal even more so when it's for me^^.

Isn't it nice to feel the warmth of a loved one inside your stomach?

 

[The Senior Perv]

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Don't forget about the animated pic.

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[torresm]

Don't forget about the animated pic.

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New V Rising update looking fine.

 

[Meabe37]

Don't forget about the animated pic.

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Sorry was a bit selfish there. Didn't shared it because i don't care much about that tbh^^

 

[Nulldev]

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Maybe I should use a name changer mod and rename her Elvira, Mistress of Darkness

 

[UmbralKnight]

can't believe it took me this long to figure this out about Veronica:

she checks off all the "LITERALLY ME" character traits
>lonely and depressed

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>very strong willed but also has a very bleak view of life

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>can bust out great dance moves

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>has trouble flirting with the "opposite" sex
>listens to peak "white girl music"

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>very physically active - loves doing daily exercises/workouts
>still trying to get over "that one" ex
>tries unconventional methods/ideas to "make" it big

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>desperately tries to project herself as "hard" but deep down still a very yearning romantic at heart

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that's right, Veronica is DEFINITELY on her "Literally Me" arc

 

[ruby_rubicon]

can't believe it took me this long to figure this out about Veronica:

she checks off all the "LITERALLY ME" character traits
>lonely and depressed

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>very strong willed but also has a very bleak view of life

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>can bust out great dance moves

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>has trouble flirting with the "opposite" sex
>listens to peak "white girl music"

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>very physically active - loves doing daily exercises/workouts
>still trying to get over "that one" ex
>tries unconventional methods/ideas to "make" it big

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>desperately tries to project herself as "hard" but deep down still a very yearning romantic at heart

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that's right, Veronica is DEFINITELY on her "Literally Me" arc

But do you think she knows she's an android?

 

[UmbralKnight]

As I mentioned in an earlier post, the house girls are "August´s territory" and he runs it like a business. He doesn´t care what the girls are up to in their freetime as long as they deliver when on the clock. And those house girls who do not work off debts, they can leave employ in the club when they want. That is a non-issue. Darius and Isla are a special case, since he tried to blackmail Kathleen. And we know how Kath is.

It's a yes AND a no type situation
while August doesn't play mind games like kathleen
he does run the entire operation like the typical "pimp" he would definitely be bothered if the girls are messing with eachother on "his" time
so jacob and Emma being a thing would definitely bother august but kathleen doesn't care

infact she doesn't care as long as it doesn't pique her curiosity or messes with her games/schemes
same reason she turns a blind eye to whatever warren is upto on "company time"
even though she is aware of everything she doesn't care most of the time
for example she knows that Emma and Jacob are a thing yet she hasn't acted on it yet
meanwhile she has been involved in pushing harper and lucy together so that she could keep lucy around and firmly under her control
and that's why I said kathy is trying to angle the MC towards Hana/Sophie

But do you think she knows she's an android?

she would know and she would definitely try pretending as if it wouldn't bother her

 

[Turret]

But there is nothing in Hana's presented personality that would imply she is incapable of having romantic feelings for more than one person (something people often don't even consider as an option, having been raised on the stock idea how you are only supposed to have feelings for one partner. Until it happens to them.) And having feelings for more than one person is not "corruption", but something that simply happens to regular people, ones who never placed a foot in a secret sex club.

Hi again!
I see your push direction and I never said that people are incapable of having feelings for several people, as you seem to think. It is simply that the whole complex of the game hints towards no longterm throuples.

It's a yes AND a no type situation
while August doesn't play mind games like kathleen
he does run the entire operation like the typical "pimp" he would definitely be bothered if the girls are messing with eachother on "his" time
so jacob and Emma being a thing would definitely bother august but kathleen doesn't care

Agreed on August being a typical pimp, but I doubt him being bothered by the Emma/Jacob relationship. We know from Hana that August regularly checks the security recordings. Emma and Jacob appear together in those quite often. Even Edwin, who rarely looks at the security feed, already saw the two couplely together in it.
August does not come across like an idiot, so he must know about their thing, since he watches the security recordings far more often than e.g. Edwin does.
I think August is not bothered by this relationship because Emma and Jacob are always there at work, unlike Kimber or Darius and Isla were.

meanwhile she has been involved in pushing harper and lucy together so that she could keep lucy around and firmly under her control
and that's why I said kathy is trying to angle the MC towards Hana/Sophie

Yes, we already know that Kath is pushing our hero towards Hana. I doubt she is pushing us towards Sophia as much, since she is clearly a rival for Kath