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Avaron1974

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Aug 22, 2018
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Has Sofi's stort gone anywhere yet because last I left this game the MC was putting his dick in everything while Sofi was being raped and beaten on a daily basis.

If it hasn't been carried on maybe remove that and add it in later because it's making the MC look like a bit of a camels clitoris. Girl opens up to him and he just leaves her to it.
 

Vainglorious

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Has Sofi's stort gone anywhere yet because last I left this game the MC was putting his dick in everything while Sofi was being raped and beaten on a daily basis.

If it hasn't been carried on maybe remove that and add it in later because it's making the MC look like a bit of a camels clitoris. Girl opens up to him and he just leaves her to it.
They finished the faithful husband route and that's pretty much it. So if you don't feel like being faithful and hurting everyone elses feelings I'd skip it for a while still.
 

Corambis

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Jul 2, 2017
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To be fair it's hard to see where there's a right way that'll please everyone because you can't. It's about having different ways of telling a story?
It comes down to so many things. Personal preference. What the author wants to create. Maybe what I want has been done to death already and what's going on here is a fresh take on things.

Has Sofi's stort gone anywhere yet because last I left this game the MC was putting his dick in everything while Sofi was being raped and beaten on a daily basis.

If it hasn't been carried on maybe remove that and add it in later because it's making the MC look like a bit of a camels clitoris. Girl opens up to him and he just leaves her to it.
I kind of fast-forwarded through that sub-plot because it seemed kind of squicky to me and just left me feeling depressed from what little I did read. There's a couple of places in the game where things get dark in what to me is a boner-killer kind of way. But for others maybe they make for a great story or set the MC up for being the hero in the long-run. As a consumer of these games, I'm in the somewhat hypocritical position of wanting to save every girl from every one other than myself.
 

Munkey

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May 30, 2017
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Has Sofi's stort gone anywhere yet because last I left this game the MC was putting his dick in everything while Sofi was being raped and beaten on a daily basis.
Sofi had a scene with the MC in the last update, on the "Pure Husband" route.
She is supposed to be in at least 4 scenes in the next update(0.8 Harem route).
 

Avaron1974

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Aug 22, 2018
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I kind of fast-forwarded through that sub-plot because it seemed kind of squicky to me and just left me feeling depressed from what little I did read. There's a couple of places in the game where things get dark in what to me is a boner-killer kind of way. But for others maybe they make for a great story or set the MC up for being the hero in the long-run. As a consumer of these games, I'm in the somewhat hypocritical position of wanting to save every girl from every one other than myself.
I thought it was a good sub plot but it didn't go anywhere so it left me wondering why bother starting it because by now she should be dead.

It's been left too long for the MC to be the hero in that story. He's left her in that environment while he's dicking his sister, daughter and/or wife which means he's put that before the girl being raped and beaten on a daily basis. It should have been dealt with there and then, now it looks like an afterthought and the MC looks like a prick no matter what.

How would that go, sorry Sofi, I couldn't stop your junkie mother pimping you out to get abused because I was fucking my married sister ... no hard feelings.
 

Corambis

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I thought it was a good sub plot but it didn't go anywhere so it left me wondering why bother starting it because by now she should be dead.

It's been left too long for the MC to be the hero in that story. He's left her in that environment while he's dicking his sister, daughter and/or wife which means he's put that before the girl being raped and beaten on a daily basis. It should have been dealt with there and then, now it looks like an afterthought and the MC looks like a prick no matter what.

How would that go, sorry Sofi, I couldn't stop your junkie mother pimping you out to get abused because I was fucking my married sister ... no hard feelings.
It's not really a story-line you can leave on hold for a while. Although the stranger breaking into the house and cumming on Ada's face has kind of been forgotten too, I think. Both were kind of questionable decisions in my eyes. Sofi could have been the girl that had been doing soft-core at her mother's urging that was being pushed into doing actual porn, and the MC had to save her from that and give her a place to sleep. (Hint: It's right under him.) Instead, he's already late to the party, and in no hurry to show up for no good reason. Maybe Sofi's spirit isn't already broken enough for the MC?
 

Munkey

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I thought it was a good sub plot but it didn't go anywhere so it left me wondering why bother starting it because by now she should be dead.

It's been left too long for the MC to be the hero in that story. He's left her in that environment while he's dicking his sister, daughter and/or wife which means he's put that before the girl being raped and beaten on a daily basis. It should have been dealt with there and then, now it looks like an afterthought and the MC looks like a prick no matter what.

How would that go, sorry Sofi, I couldn't stop your junkie mother pimping you out to get abused because I was fucking my married sister ... no hard feelings.
In game only one day goes by from when MC finds out about Sofi's situation to the end of the story in 0.6. Also, Sofi literally begs the MC to not do anything. It's not that that subplot didn't go anywhere, it just that it has barely started.
 

Walg

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Oct 5, 2018
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Update yet ???
Seriously dude stop spamming. I get it if it's one thread but gee...

Next time, better to check the OP of your favorite games before posting.
 

JJsworld

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Jun 17, 2018
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Seriously dude stop spamming. I get it if it's one thread but gee...

Next time, better to check the OP of your favorite games before posting.
I have, dude... Sorry if you get upset cause I posted on 5 different games, that I play...
 

armion82

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Mar 28, 2017
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oh what an surprise,just as expected,even i with limited intelligence could see this coming...
just wrap up PL with next update or two and move on to a69,it's quite clear which game he wants to make
I'm not sure he wants that much to work only on A69.Not to mention that despite the positive reviews,I doubt that game will come near the success of PL,not to mention the potential problems with Patreon,that will be even bigger than with PL.
 

repuindy

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Jun 11, 2017
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I am a little disappointed... A69 should be some kind of compensation for a bad update of PL? If he begin split updates for 2 games we'll see an update every 5 months at least. :pensive:
 

atlas114

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May 4, 2017
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if he’s saying the render count is already exceeding v0.7 and only three scenes out of 22 created, it could potentially be the biggest PL update ever.

as long as Elly is prominently featured :FeelsGoodMan:

PL - 3/22 SCENES DONE - VERSION 0.8
 
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