I have to praise the emoting in this, just look at Elly's face through the bathroom scene on day whatever, (after Emily and Elly had a 'private' talk about Elly falling for the MC, Jenna arrives and takes MC tot he bathroom to fuck, and Elly walks in - while Jenna's trying to talk Elly into staying to watch, her face goes through several emotions, smiling when the MC defends her)
Quality. Writing could have done some work in making the characters more likeable, less asshole, but honestly, as unrealistic as the plot is (MC ends up in harem with wife, sister and daughter), and, well, "just two days in and daughter is in love with daddy who left" blabla these points were gone over before. But point is, who plays this for the story?.
... well, other than myself right now.
Anyone want to take a crack at adapting it into a written story, that allows for "correcting" issues like OMFG Elly's sex scene is on day 6.? I'm thinking more of a "Over several months" in-story-time. Like.. The MC goes on dates, meets his kids a few times, and eventually moves back in (rather than immediately), some scares like the guy who jacked off over Ada when she was asleep occuring before the romance with Elly starts... one more thing for Elly to 'fall in love with daddy' over... And some backstory for Jenna and her relationship with the MC (and Sienna), including why she's rather gung-ho about the harem. (Current headcanon: Jenna knew Emily first, had a massive crush on her? Saw Emily was straight and gotten Emily and MC to meet and basically engineered that relationship, so... she was right to "claim half the responsibility" for creating Elly?)
No more discussing the origins and definition of DISCOMBOBULATE though. Um, was that the word under discussion?? I kinda ignored those posts in favor of just throwing out a silly rant. 
