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No1 can cuck Rory because he doesnt care who fuck his mom/sister. He is using them for his own gain.
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its more likely that "vanilla" players going to be screaming ntr because all the ppl on the island keep fucking around.
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Just occurred to me that pages 2&3 of ch11 could be PS own thoughts about Au Naturel and ch10. He thinks that (reaction to) ch10 was mess,but just like Brandi he doesnt see his fault. He is regreting writing incest story,but he is aware that other kind of story would be boring and way less income. Just like Brandi is tasted sex and want more,he is tasted money and want more. Both dont understand why ppl/Dylan are selfish and pissed because they didnt did anything wrong.
if that's the case - what's the point of him sticking with the "i have to get better in sex and do some training for Brandi" arc for Dylan though? could've cucked him and be done with it, or make them go their separate paths with occasional sharing and fucking
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Either of that routes will make some of subs leave. He is trying to please all subs,ch10 was rushed because he was trying to "give ppl action they need" and now he is trying to do damage control. Ppl who made AN big doesnt like what it become,story isnt logical at all and explanation at end of ch10 are lame.There is saying "Dont try to find sense in flight of confused bird"
no all the people on here think the author is there for them. ' i dont like the way the story is going ' another way of saying ' i dont have to listen your opinion but YOU BETTER LISTEN TO MINE OR ELSE ' he or she is the author. dont like the story. dont read. I know the next one who probably be childish and say i dont agree with you and give me an empty confusing post that is just someone talking to hear themselves talk. ' i hear words but nothing is coming out. lights are on but no one is home '
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PS is writing story for his own gain and i am OK with it. I dont like what AN (ch10+) become so i stop paying him. Some ppl cant/wont let go, but that is their problem. This is discussion forum, not PS fun club. Some ppl overreacting, but that is to be expected.
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If you don't like the art, then don't read it, and of course don't pay for it - but stop bitching about it not being "your cup of tea!"
The author has every right to do whatever he wants, as long as he didn't conn you into giving him money - e.g. promising "No Forced Entry" so you pay him, but then putting it in anyway (or vice versa).
Just like on another thread ("Saving Paula") the dev explained EXACTLY what he's going to do as far as NTR goes (or doesn't), but some guys still attacked him and his work BEFORE HE DID ANYTHING, accusing him of doing NTR (like it's an offence); some guys telling others who supported him that they're being lied to (which they definitely were not); and others just generally bitching that he doesn't do exactly what they want - on a site that you don't even pay for the content!
The artist owes you nothing, unless you're a paying customer - and even then, only if he took your money after he promised you a specific thing.
The author has every right to do whatever he wants, as long as he didn't conn you into giving him money - e.g. promising "No Forced Entry" so you pay him, but then putting it in anyway (or vice versa).
Just like on another thread ("Saving Paula") the dev explained EXACTLY what he's going to do as far as NTR goes (or doesn't), but some guys still attacked him and his work BEFORE HE DID ANYTHING, accusing him of doing NTR (like it's an offence); some guys telling others who supported him that they're being lied to (which they definitely were not); and others just generally bitching that he doesn't do exactly what they want - on a site that you don't even pay for the content!
The artist owes you nothing, unless you're a paying customer - and even then, only if he took your money after he promised you a specific thing.
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Thing is: PS said several times there will be no NTR to MC,but his definition of NTR is different than other people.
Not sure if missleading readers with false hashtags count as lying.
Author has every right to do whatever he wants, people have every right to criticize what they don't like. For example: chapter 10 - Brandi thinks to herself, that even though she may fuck anyone on the island, Dylan is the guy she can "settle down with and spend the rest of life", chapter 11 - Brandi thinks this was all a mistake. This writing is hilarious. This is a discussion, we discuss things. I doubt that PS is sitting here, reading comments and worrying that what he's making is dumb in people's eyes.
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Well, if he said there won't be any NTR, then it's a bit of a problem...Thing is: PS said several times there will be no NTR to MC,but his definition of NTR is different than other people.
Not sure if missleading readers with false hashtags count as lying.
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I don't think there should be a problem criticizing anything - especially on a forum. That's what it's for.
But while there are people who give valid criticism, and even give examples and explain their reasoning, there are others who seem to think that what they like is what everybody else should like, and what all devs should do - or else.
That was the case with the anti-NTR fanatics on the "Saving Paula" thread: some of them blew a gasket after the Dev explained that the NTR for Paula will be avoidable depending on the player's actions, and that there simply will be competition for her heart (she has a BEAUTIFUL "heart," by the way
).I mean, the guy told you EXACTLY (it was a LONG discussion...) what he's going to do, others just loved the game and the character design, so if you still don't like it - just leave that thread, and play another game.
I guess I thought the same happened here, and blew off.
I should have checked better before commenting.
I believe he has said in the past that there won’t be any NTR moments in Au Naturel.Well, if he said there won't be any NTR, then it's a bit of a problem...
Here’s a screen cap from one of PS’s replies on twitter. ”For there to be NTR, there has to be jealousy”.
IIRC Brandi did what she did in ch10 because of jealousy...so there’s the NTR.
"in Au Naturel everyone is happy and enjoying the sex" Main characters don't look happy to me at the beginning of ch 11
Main characters don't look happy to me at the beginning of ch 11
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A term used for a story theme that focuses on a particular type of cheating/unfaithfulness in a relationship in an adult-oriented real-life video, manga, or anime. The person that cheats is initially forced against their will (either physically, by being blackmailed, or by the influence of an ingested or injected mind-altering substance) by the instigator(s)/perpetrator(s) to participate in a sexual encounter but then is mind-bended to enjoy and/or accept the experience. Also, the cheater often is not fond of the instigator(s) before the encounter and may state that they love their significant other at any time in the story, but ends up deciding to continue the affair with the instigator(s) afterwards. The victim (the person being cheating on) is usually unaware of the betrayal by the cheater, and the instigator(s) if the victim knows him, her, or them.
so how many points from definition applies to Au naturel?
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Everyone has a different idea of what constitutes NTR and I don't think there will ever be an agreed upon consensus. Based on this definition you could probably apply quite a few of these points to the story.
- Forced against their will. Check
- Starts to enjoy it. Check
- Not fond of the instigator. Check
- Says they love the other person but continues. Check
4 out of the 6 points in this definition would apply to the story. I know they aren't in a relationship in the traditional couple sense but they do have a relationship and the points are still valid in terms of their relationship as mother/son. I mean there are many NTR anime/manga/VN/etc that show a guys mother being stolen/corrupted in the same way a married guy gets NTR'd.
Personally I find that tweet from PS hilarious. Writes a chapter where the MC is furious at the sex he witnesses but "everyone is happy and enjoying the sex!"
Lol
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Guys, you are crying like little girls, stop it pls