- Aug 5, 2017
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I don't think there's another sister. I think the other member of the family that the mother was referring to is the aunt.
Some of the issues I have with this game are:
- Eliza's "freckles" look like they've been drawn on with a marker.
- The mothers face looks rather rough at best and just plain weird with some of the facial expressions.
- Eliza jerks his dick, but doesn't do it to completion. I don't understand.
- Alexa makes him get her off, but doesn't return the favor, yet she was talking about fairness in order to get his dick out. He should have mentioned that. Did she use a "Vulcan nerve pinch" to get him on the ground?
- He seems to adapt to things pretty damn quick. The mother makes out with him and he doesn't seem to have any real thoughts on the matter. Alexa dragged him to the toilets and had him do all that and there's very little in the way of resistance.
- It just feels like going straight into full blown perversion but also trying to build it up. It's disorienting.
- Numerous errors in the dialogues where the wrong person is speaking, the name of the speaker is missing, Brooke calling Hailey Brooke and probably other things I've forgotten.
- Overall it feels like a low quality product.
- May 17, 2017
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Nope. Just my honest opinion and critique of the game.
The game is lacking no matter what angle I look at it from. There's not enough smut for a smut game and there isn't decent enough story and progression for that type of game. Although I guess you could argue that it is only a single day so far.
The game size is also huge for the amount of content and quality that is actually there. I mean 1.5GB and it's only 1 day out of an implied 2 weeks...Also, 6 months for only the first day...Is it going to take 7 years to complete and be like 21GB?
Feel free to take what I say with a pinch of :test3: if you wish though. I'm not asking everyone to agree with me and the dev is free to completely ignore my critique if he so chooses (it's his game after all and there are clearly people that seem to enjoy it as it is).
- Aug 7, 2016
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@spooge_nugget Don't bother responding to an absolute shitpost that din't even bother to come up with anything more than emote. Current state of the game is garbo, all of your criticism was valid and on point.
- Jul 11, 2017
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Hey thanks for your feedback! I will try to address each of your issues with my game.
- The graphics I use for Eliza and Maddison cannot be changed haphazardly. The rigidity of the program I use doesn't allow me to do that. Other people seem to not have this complaint, and I don't have an issue with it.
- Eliza cleaning the MC not jerking his dick.
- Alexa's intention is not to abide by rules of fairness, but to see and take pictures of the MC. He got on the ground because he fell.
It seems that you have misinterpreted the intentions of the characters, I should look into displaying the information I want to unveil more clearly if others have the same issue.
- You are right in the fact that the MC seems to be adapting to things pretty quickly. My excuse is that the MC is passive and is just complying with the demands of others but it's a weak excuse at that.... I will look into making the MC's character more believable.
- I will happily fix any errors in dialogue. It is not my intention to overlook them. Please specify which areas are wrong so I can correct them.
- The game isn't finished and I am considering splitting the game into "episodes". This way, the size of the game will be easily manageable.
It was just one of those things that once I noticed it, I couldn't help but keep noticing it.
I understand that was the excuse, but to start rubbing an erect dick and then not finish the job is just plain wrong (other than in some kind of S&M/teasing play, which it didn't feel like). She was clearly interested in his dick ever since she got the photo, so it was strange that it ended as it did.
I understand that, but if you were in the MC's place, wouldn't you question her on the fairness/try to push for more/throw her words back at her. It doesn't have to actually lead to more, but just express the dissatisfaction/frustration of the MC.
Oh, he just fell? From her actions it looked like she performed a Vulcan nerve pinch on him. It made me laugh.
Even if he's extremely passive and going with the flow, he would likely be questioning things and what he should do internally.
Maybe he could be thinking stuff like "What the hell was that!?", "This is weird right!?", "Should I say something?", "What should I do?", "Am I the weird one?", "But what if I say something/don't do something and she/they end up hating me/ignoring me/shunning me/abandoning me?". Basically an emotional roller-coaster going on in his head due to confusion, fear of rejection and other feelings.
Episodes can be problematic when it comes to choice based games due to branching paths and recorded stats. It often ends up with choices and stats being meaningless and the story being linear.
I'm not sure if you intend to have branching paths and for the stats to have any real meaning, but I thought I'd mention it just in case.
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@spooge_nuget sorry man, but I think you are not right. Those "issues" you mention are mostly your biased (inexperienced) oppinions.
Have you really considered those situations you mention?
Example: that situation at toiler. You claim his reaction was inapropriate. In my oppinion, horny teenager will never refuse hot girl if he hopes he can get "some". And as for his inner conflict: thats a matter of perspective. Why do we have to listen to somebody's inner thought? One thing is playing the game, another thing is having somebody tell you, what you are supposed to think about it. I think that "let players decide what they think about it" is acceptable aproach.
Eliza bathing MC:
MC claimed he had injured arm and so she did exactly what she promised to do: she washed him. Even though she crossed a line a bit, it wasnt anything that should make MC angry at her. She just teased him and thats still acceptable.
Sorry, man, but your statement ('"to start rubbing an erect d*ck and then not finish the job is just plain wrong") proves you never had a girlfriend and thats why your oppinion is inexperienced. Dont make judgement about females based on porn. That stuff happens sometimes. Eliza said it herself, that she has to go, because she has another work.
Long story short: author did okay job. its believable. If you cant agree, its because you have unrealistic expectations. LOL
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- Jul 11, 2017
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This frankly isn't constructive or helping. I am not going to be
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People have complex personalities and I think cleaning the MC's cock without jerking him off is not strange behavior. She does have a professional relationship with the MC and so perhaps she doesn't want to break that, and that is a conflict for her.
approach I think is suitable for the encounter with Alexa. The fact that you understood if you were in the MC's place, wouldn't try to push for more is proving this approach valid.
I can agree with implementing internal thoughts like "Should I be doing this?" and confusion when the MC adopts the perverseness of his family... The fact that the players are just kinda roped in into taboo choices that are unexplained and unnatural is weird... Maybe it's inadvertent compliance at first...
I may use episodes in the same manner as Palmer and MrDots... Hopefully it works out.
I can kind of understand where you're coming from, but she has been flirting/teasing him for a while and did whip her tits out.
I just thought that the scene could have ended a few different ways
1. She gave him a happy ending under the pretext that he can't do it himself due to his sprained predominant hand.
2. She was more teasing about it. Something like "I guess I should leave you to deal with that", "I have to go, but you should hurry up and deal with that before you meet your family for dinner, don't you think?", "I have to go, but here's a little something to think about while you deal with that *whips tits out*".
3. She comes to her senses, acts a bit shy and hurries out of there (although that doesn't really seem to fit her character)
As it was it just felt like it was missing something (to me).
What I was thinking was that it was a perfect place for a dialog choice. Something like "bring up fairness", "push for more", "tease her about not knowing what to do with it", "say nothing" sort of thing.
- Mar 10, 2017
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Damn came to this thread to see whats up only to find this level shit going on. The genre tags tell you it's Honey Select, so your complaining to the customer about the product the company makes. Thats Illusions issue, and well Illusion doesn't go for realism in their 3D IMO.
The MC is obviously the typical pushover anime trope main character. He just goes along with whatever and still ends up in a harem. I like the fact that so far everyone is more or less nice to him. Its pretty much a staple in the harem genre so I don't get why its somehow foreign to you here.
@spooge_nugget you really seem to have issues being able to fap to the game proper, so maybe don't and find another game, I mean it seems pretty apparent that Honey select Images and the games story are too jarring, however if the Dev changed it to fit your tastes, those of us enjoying it would have to abandon it.
The MC is obviously the typical pushover anime trope main character. He just goes along with whatever and still ends up in a harem. I like the fact that so far everyone is more or less nice to him. Its pretty much a staple in the harem genre so I don't get why its somehow foreign to you here.
@spooge_nugget you really seem to have issues being able to fap to the game proper, so maybe don't and find another game, I mean it seems pretty apparent that Honey select Images and the games story are too jarring, however if the Dev changed it to fit your tastes, those of us enjoying it would have to abandon it.
I'm not actually asking/demanding the dev to change anything. Whether he does or not is completely up to him. What I'm doing is giving my honest opinion/feedback on the game and giving suggestions (i.e. constructive criticism), which has the potential to lead to improvements and spark new ideas from the dev. This is a forum after all. A place for discussion.
Constructive criticism is a lot more helpful than simply saying "this is great" or "this is shit" or simply saying nothing at all. Actually elaborating on the aspects you find good or bad is generally a lot more beneficial to development, as nothing is ever absolutely perfect (it's an impossibility).
- Jul 17, 2017
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Interesting idea, I just thought the spa lady was
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- Mar 10, 2017
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Yes I understand how criticism works, but your not really just giving it, your pushing it pretty hard. Also many of your criticisms are about things that cannot be readily changed without completely scrapping the games assets, or it's characters.
The HJ scene is one thing, but most of your complaints are to a point that you seem to need to look elswhere.
I'm not really pushing, I'm merely replying. As I have mentioned before, the dev is free to completely or partially ignore my criticisms, as it's his game and obviously people have differing opinions. "One man's trash is another man's treasure" if you will (just to avoid misunderstandings; I am simply using the phrase to emphasize how different peoples opinions can be).
I wasn't originally aware of just how rigid Honey Select was, but after that fact was pointed out by the dev I don't think I really mentioned it again. Maybe I should have acknowledged it previously.
Also, as far as I can recall, most of my criticisms were about dialog/dialog options or additions to existing scenes (especially after it was pointed out how rigid Honey Select is), so not requiring "completely scrapping the games assets, or its characters" at all, but merely additions and/or script edits (if anything).