Holy shit, this family is so fucked up (in a good way), I love it
Also, as someone who enjoys "watersports" content but isn't
obsessed with it, I love the way you've managed to include enough peeing to be noteworthy but without focusing on it - with so many authors it's either not present at all or taken way too far.
I was however quite disappointed that the twins did in fact shave after their first scene... not only did I love the way those suits showed off their hair, but it means that now
all the characters are totally smooth, which is just kinda boring IMO
This is a pretty weird criticism that is maybe proof that the tone that this game is working towards is succeeding but multiple times during the second day I kept thinking "Maybe I just want five minutes of not being blindsided by sex shit after all that happened yesterday", it just felt weird that it kept piling on and on and maybe that's the point but it made me oddly frustrated personally.
Yeah, I know what you mean, there's definitely points where (especially when trying to put myself in the PC's shoes) I kinda felt like "okay can we calm down a moment and try to figure out what the hell is
happening...?" I get the impression that's intentional though - that the player is supposed to feel overwhelmed in the same way the PC is