VN Ren'Py Completed Picture Perfect [v1.0] [SuperWriter]

[Maviarab]

I know I'm a bit (a lot) annoying, but something has bothered me about the new Sasha. And then I noticed it - something is, at least for me, wrong with her eyes. Or rather with the make-up.

I did a little photoshop, and for me she suddenly looks way more like the old Sasha. Here the comparison with the new Sasha, but with the old eyes:


Shit - don't tell me I left that in the final version... (now I definitely get banned here...)

Nailed it (tat chages don't bother me). New eyes are just...flat...lifeless...no soul.

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

Fair enough SW, I can respect that. At the end of the day it`s your creation and work.
Yeah, she may have been a bit overloaded on tatts, the arm sleeve still looks cool!

After comparing the old and new Sash, I admit the new one looks more (hate to say it) dollish and less mature - although that would be understandable if you wanted to add the vulnerability, but hey that`s on me to learn to accept. Just a wee comparison:

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I know I'm a bit (a lot) annoying, but something has bothered me about the new Sasha. And then I noticed it - something is, at least for me, wrong with her eyes. Or rather with the make-up.

I did a little photoshop, and for me she suddenly looks way more like the old Sasha. Here the comparison with the new Sasha, but with the old eyes:


Shit - don't tell me I left that in the final version... (now I definitely get banned here...)

Nailed it (tat chages don't bother me). New eyes are just...flat...lifeless...no soul.

You know what, I went back to look at Sasha's eyes and I do agree with you all, so I have changed them to make them look less dollhouse. Thanks for all the feedback!

old new

 

[KoGa3]

You know what, I went back to look at Sasha's eyes and I do agree with you all, so I have changed them to make them look less dollhouse. Thanks for all the feedback!

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No, thanks to you for the great game - and the great new renders that are still waiting for us. And yes, now she is definitely Sasha again for me - with of course better picture/render quality than before.

 

[Demonius]

I, for one, am glad that Sasha's chest tattoo is gone, i never liked it. I'm not a fan of chest tattoos on women, and I made sure to tell SuperWriter this when i played the beta of chapter 1. So glad he finally removed it.

 

[Skode]

I, for one, am glad that Sasha's chest tattoo is gone, i never liked it. I'm not a fan of chest tattoos on women, and I made sure to tell SuperWriter this when i played the beta of chapter 1. So glad he finally removed it.

Im of the very opposite opinion on that matter but then im covered in tattoos myself so it was obviously gonna appeal more to me than the generic audience as im sure far more aint into it than are (still feel her being covered really accentuated her personality as the rebel of the family though and it hurts to know they will soon be gone outside of one arm sleeve)

 

[Maviarab]

You know what, I went back to look at Sasha's eyes and I do agree with you all, so I have changed them to make them look less dollhouse. Thanks for all the feedback!

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Out of reactions.... (again, personally fine with the new tat look..it always irks me that 18yo can have thousands of dollars worth of art at that age or legally underage...annoys the shit out of me heh. Just the sleeve is much better).

 

[Demonius]

Im of the very opposite opinion on that matter but then im covered in tattoos myself so it was obviously gonna appeal more to me than the generic audience as im sure far more aint into it than are (still feel her being covered really accentuated her personality as the rebel of the family though and it hurts to know they will soon be gone outside of one arm sleeve)

dont get me wrong, i have no problems with tattoos i just dont like them on a womans chest or face

 

[Haast]

dont get me wrong, i have no problems with tattoos i just dont like them on a womans chest or face

Yeah, Im kinda the same as another tattooed person, one of only 2-3 in my extended family, Tats on a woman can be downright hot, but sometimes they distract from their natural 'Artwork', sometimes less is more...

Anyway like SW said he only ever really wanted her to have a certain number, and we should trust his vision.

 

[punisher2099]

I kinda liked Paris Silvery blue hair color

 

[KoGa3]

I kinda liked Paris Silvery blue hair color

Because you mentioned her hair: they are actually ok, but unlike the other girls a bit..it's hard to describe, maybe looks a bit like a wig to me... The color I think is ok - but the old one was good, too (and I think both colors suits her in a way).

SuperWriter : this is definitely just a personal opinion/taste, probably it's even meant to be so. And once again: Paris looks MUCH better than before!

 

[BigDaddyDom]

You know what, I went back to look at Sasha's eyes and I do agree with you all, so I have changed them to make them look less dollhouse. Thanks for all the feedback!

Ya I agree with the others since so much of Sasha's essence is in her eyes. Definitely looks more like her now.

I feel the same about Miracles new eyes. Overall her new renders look great but something about her new eyes, don't know if it's the darker bottom lashes or what looks like lines/bags or something but her new eyes kind of makes her look like she's in her mid-late 20's now. Any openness to changing her eyes back too? Again though the changes to Paris and Sabrina have been

I, for one, am glad that Sasha's chest tattoo is gone, i never liked it. I'm not a fan of chest tattoos on women, and I made sure to tell SuperWriter this when i played the beta of chapter 1. So glad he finally removed it.

Yeah I'm not a fan of chest or face tats either. She looks better now with just the one sleeve in my opinion

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

Ya I agree with the others since so much of Sasha's essence is in her eyes. Definitely looks more like her now.

I feel the same about Miracles new eyes. Overall her new renders look great but something about her new eyes, don't know if it's the darker bottom lashes or what looks like lines/bags or something but her new eyes kind of makes her look like she's in her mid-late 20's now. Any openness to changing her eyes back too? Again though the changes to Paris and Sabrina have been



Yeah I'm not a fan of chest or face tats either. She looks better now with just the one sleeve in my opinion

Don't really see what you're talking about with Miracle. She looks 18 to me lol. Paris definitely looks older than her. But glad you like Sasha again =]

 

[Maviarab]

Don't really see what you're talking about with Miracle. She looks 18 to me lol. Paris definitely looks older than her. But glad you like Sasha again =]

Well....we never really stopped liking Sasha cos...well...Sasha! lol

 

[Caeir]

I'm going to miss Sasha's old tats... I liked the chest mural. Something that lets you know there's something that only select few will ever see entirely, unlike sleeve tats. Oh well, artistic preference. I still like the story and will look forward to updates. I thought the Miracle mod was awesome, a great shift into maturity. Well done.

 

[jhustrue]

Anyone else get creepy vibes when you see stuff like "*smiles*" in VNs? It's unnecessary and really makes me imagine the MC giving a creepy-ass smile. Weird that it makes me cringe when I see it.

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

Anyone else get creepy vibes when you see stuff like "*smiles*" in VNs? It's unnecessary and really makes me imagine the MC giving a creepy-ass smile. Weird that it makes me cringe when I see it.

It's how you explain actions in video games to not break immersion. "You smile." That makes it feel more like reading a book

 

[jhustrue]

It's how you explain actions in video games to not break immersion. "You smile." That makes it feel more like reading a book

Yeah, I get what it's for, but every time I see a developer use it in VNs I get the mental image of a creepy smile, especially when it's followed by a super cheesy dialogue haha

 

[Lost gamer]

next update?

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

next update?

October 2023

 

[Lost gamer]

October 2023

Just as long as it's getting worked on.