VN Ren'Py Completed Picture Perfect [v1.0] [SuperWriter]

[ghjghjghj]

Um... well I'll give it a shot but my initial impressions based on the screenshots aren't great. #4 makes Paris look extremely masculine. Man in drag kind of masculine. The English not-daughter I'm blanking on the name of just looks unhealthy now too. I think it's the eyes look really sunken and dark. Did Miracle get her cheeks shaved? Maybe I just never looked that hard before.

I get why Paris has been changing. I've never been a fan of any Paris model, frankly. However I thought the other girls were pretty good. However this latest batch is not so great. Paris in particular seems to be the worst off.

Again. This is so far just based on the screenshots provided. Considering that people are using those images to decide to play or not though, I think it's fair to comment on them.

Edit: Alright, started it up. And yeah. All I can see is a dude in drag when I see Paris. Didn't like the old model but it was mostly just a little strange and I could move on with it. I don't think I can move on with this new model. It's a male face on a female body. I can't. I just can't.

 

[conscientious objector]

Is there a link to the old version, for posterity?

 

[TarikDB]

Guess i got hyped for nothing again, another change update instead of continued story :S

 

[unevenrm]

doesn't look like a 20 something year old to me at all

Now she looks like a mom at 30 (anyway its all in preferences, tastes, subjective opinions)

 

[FemdomN7]

I wish the revamp would just make graphics better. why change models though?!
Well even if i liked old Paris better there's nothing we can do now and Paris was my favorite

 

[3D Reaver]

Um... well I'll give it a shot but my initial impressions based on the screenshots aren't great. #4 makes Paris look extremely masculine. Man in drag kind of masculine.

she literally has no hard edges on her face how the hell is she masculine? if anything her old model was a lot more masculine

look at the sharp angles in the jaw, the hard shadow on her cheek and the eyes are smaller comparatively. there is nothing subjective about this.

im not too sure about the remake but saying that the new Paris looks like a tranny is ridiculous.

 

[zh]

I wish the revamp would just make graphics better. why change models though?!
Well even if i liked old Paris better there's nothing we can do now and Paris was my favorite

Well, before the revamp, Paris was my least favorite among the four girls (although I still liked her). So I understand why the Dev tried to change her model. I personally prefer her now. IMO she looks much better (less "skull-face" with hard angles, less fake). So the change was good imo.

But I understand your feelings : you get used to a girl and her face changes... not a good feeling. Maybe that would be a good idea to keep the old links alive, for those who are used to the old models.

 

[unevenrm]

She looks like aging Barbie after revamp

 

[Arigon]

SuperWriter!
Revamp is totally better graphically. I mean really great. Good job man, and hang in there!

 

[zh]

She looks like aging Barbie after revamp

well, imo it's the opposite. I was never fond of "hollow cheeks" models. The hard angles she had before the revamp made her look much older imo. So the revamp is good imo.

but to each his own I guess

 

[unevenrm]

well, imo it's the opposite. I was never found of "hollow cheeks" models. The are angles she had before the revamp made her look much older imo. So the revamp is good imo.

but to each his own I guess

"Fond" maybe?

 

[The ArcKnight]

Model revamps thoughts:

Miracle - I really like the new Model! She is super adorable still, only thing that is even slightly odd to me is the ears look a little strange and sometimes the reflection in the eyes give her an off putting vibe. Still my favorite though!

Spoiler: Adorable little vampire

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Paris - 100% better. Love her. So glad her hair looks like hair now instead of a deadass stringy weave. Even the finger/toe nail pant is great. She feels now like the spoiled little princess she was suppose to come off as at first.

Spoiler: Princess dressed for bed

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Though I feel the bright blue hair with the nearly complete lack of makeup can be startling and give a weird contrast for the model. I think she'd look better with makeup.

Spoiler: Princess needs some eyeshadow

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Sasha - I hella support the tattoo removal, she had way too many and I hate chest tats on women. Do not mar the marvelous tatas! If I'm going to lob any criticism its I feel like her face got rounder while the rest of her got flatter, which is the wrong move imo. Also, her left cheek looks disproportionately bigger then the right to me. Its probably the hairstyle that does that for my eyes though. Just needs to sharpen up those cheeks and give her a bit more round to the hips and you'd be solid.

Spoiler: Even lovelier with less tats.

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Sabrina - Love my little adopted daughter. Great job on her model, though I personally would prefer to darken up her eyebrows into a dark blonde so they don't disappear in the lighter lit scenes as they do now.

Spoiler: Magic disappearing eyebrows!

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Spoiler: Proof that lighting makes right. (So effing cute!)

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Overall I like the new models, Paris needs some makeup, Sasha needs some rounder hips, Bina needs a slightly darker brows in lighter scenes and Miracle just needs Daddy's love.

Good Job Superwriter. Hopefully this is just a start and we will see the models evolve as you're skill does because you've already done a great job converting existing ones to be more unique. Just don't forget the curves!

Spoiler: Daddy's Girls

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[ghjghjghj]

she literally has no hard edges on her face how the hell is she masculine? if anything her old model was a lot more masculine

look at the sharp angles in the jaw, the hard shadow on her cheek and the eyes are smaller comparatively. there is nothing subjective about this.

im not too sure about the remake but saying that the new Paris looks like a tranny is ridiculous.

That scene is certainly better.

And you're right about the face being softer - 100%. But my mind still sees a dude in those other images. The one you linked seems alright in that respect.

I'm pretty sure this isn't just a stupid reaction to change. I never really liked Paris to begin with, and I was seeing tranny even before I realized this game got another model revamp. Try looking at the #4 image on this thread or the very first scene of the game with Paris. I still can't help but see tranny. I can't pinpoint why, unfortunately.

 

[ringasure]

something bothered me how Sasha looked, something alien in her, and I found (and also the anatomy of the head by the way)

What's with Sasha's iris? is she a mutant? why are they so big?

 

[Deleted member 535893]

I honestly don't understand spending so much time to redesign the characters. They already looked good and you can only cause division and controversy among the fans to change them after such a long time unless it's a huge improvement by all standards. Sasha honestly looked so much better in the old version and she was my favorite character by far. Removing most of her tattoos just made her looks really bland by comparison. That's enough for me to not want to keep up with this new version.

Don't become too obsessed with "improving" old content. It will lose you a lot of fans.

 

[Patrickcsc]

Previously I had played until Ch. 8 but the recent downloaded only until Ch. 6.... Can I ask why? Am I missing something?

 

[unevenrm]

Previously I had played until Ch. 8 but the recent downloaded only until Ch. 6.... Can I ask why? Am I missing something?

Revamp

 

[IndigoHawk]

Revamp looks great. Paris took the most adjustment, mostly because she looks younger so her character feels a bit different now. I like her low makeup, and her new look is hot.

 

[Hysni]

Blue Haired Girl Looks Beter now its shortened old version had more sex scene Hope Next update adds Sex with all girls include voice acting

 

[Cooling Prob]

Game has been kind of ruined...why were the looks of the girls changed.?? The were so great before...Perfect.