SuperWriter , please stay with us here! As I wrote before, I am a hobby writer myself and have several stories of mine posted on various fora. From personal experience, the feedback you get will always be interesting, in the good and bad sense of the word. Sometimes you get headscratchers, where you have to think the commenter is in the wrong thread, because their rants have zero connnections with the story at hand, sometimes you get critic from persons who think you violated their own vision how to do the story. That is something we have to life with, that will never change on any board.
Likewise praise and positive critic can come from the strangest places on a forum, you will never know before. Take the best from the feedback and critic and do not let get toxic stuff close to your heart. It takes time to find an equilibrum on this.
But most of all keep to your own vision of how you make the game, no matter what we say unless you feel some critic has a point. It is your vision and revamp. I understand all to clearly that revamps are problematic, since I rewrite one of my stories, too. It cannot be feeling nice to many readers, especially since for several important reasons I could not update for months, due to nearly no free writing time. But since History plays a big role in it and I learned new things about the topics over the years, a rewrite is/was necessary. I am a history buff, nearly became a historian, but some knowledge simply was not available when I started that specific story. So I put it in, even if it goes very slowly for now.
As for your revamp, let me state again that I really like the graphical changes! You get better! While it is clearly personal taste, Paris is a BIG upgrade! I always liked Paris character, the motherly, unfinished potential, Electra-complexed young woman. But I hated her old look. Her lips screamed "fake" and I was always reminded of the funny old song from the "knallrote Gummiboot" and not in good way in this case. I like new Paris much more even if she looks not really the eldest one. One thing to remark, I liked the old pink sleepshirt more than her new top and shorts.
Sasha, as I wrote before, is another better version. Less tattoos are better for her, but she needs some for her looks to be in tune with her character. I like her tough girl, "Ladette" character too.
Miracle´s older look I find better fitting in with her sisters. (And we hopefully see her eye teeth in revamped ch.8
) But as said before, I never really clicked with this character, despite liking her.
Sabrina´s new look is vastly better, still I do not really care if this character is in the game or not.
