VN Ren'Py Completed Picture Perfect [v1.0] [SuperWriter]

[ontach]

I'm not suggesting you completely change it, just tone it down a bit. Just less "I say, what splendid day!" and "jolly good lads" and "tally-ho" and "God save the Queen!"

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This game is not voiced, so we can't pick up on her accent, so it needs to be a little over the top IMHO. Would have loved it to have been like the English girl in Fraser.

Btw. we absolutely loved Lindsay Lohan's awful English accent in The Parent Trap. Had us laughing helplessly.

 

[Rythan25]

Don't worry about that at all, you can have your cake and eat it too. You can experience ALL the routes without consequence, and at the end, and depending on options, you can choose to be with a single girl or have a harem.

I want you to have fun playing my games! Not stress over who to choose =]

You... I like you..

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

I'm not suggesting you completely change it, just tone it down a bit. Just less "I say, what splendid day!" and "jolly good lads" and "tally-ho" and "God save the Queen!"

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Haha, I'll take what you say into consideration. Thank you for the suggestions!

You... I like you..
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Haha, appreciate the kind words

 

[alominus]

I lost it during the rehearsal scene with Sasha. I like how they rationalize jerking it off in front of her is better than walking to the bathroom with an erection.

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

I lost it during the rehearsal scene with Sasha. I like how they rationalize jerking it off in front of her is better than walking to the bathroom with an erection.

He goes to the bathroom then jerk off. He doesn't do it in front of her. Unless you're playing an older version

 

[Cyndallan]

He goes to the bathroom then jerk off. He doesn't do it in front of her. Unless you're playing an older version

I thought he went to a closet room

But I also remember reading about Sasha jerking him off. That might have been the e-book version though

 

[Thunderman213213]

I also wanted to ask all the you something very important!

Once I finish Picture Perfect, I will start working on my other game Secret Summer. And along side it, I want to create a science fiction with aliens or medieval type of game or just something completely different from the norm.

So I would like to create a separate account on here and patreon for those type of games because they will be so so different from the slice of life, and so I can gauge how much interest and support those games and if they are even worth the effort that goes into making it.

Would you guys be okay with that? Each and every one of your opinions is important to me because I make the game for YOU

Sounds like a great idea, any idea what you would do though?

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

Sounds like a great idea, any idea what you would do though?

I do actually! I don't want to give too much away, but it deals with psychic powers and science fiction =]

 

[Draon79]

SuperWriter I would suggest possibly redoing the original renders if you are going to change up the characters like the author and maybe give Paris a scene for the hair change explaining that it was like temp hair dye and she was tired of always straightening her hair every day so decided to go back to natural. Also the posing of Sabrina on the pillow made my neck hurt LOL, other then that awesome as always. Thanks for all the work you put into this.


As for new games or settings maybe a dystopian setting would work, part real world and part sci-fi. Or a high fantasy would work as well.

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

SuperWriter I would suggest possibly redoing the original renders if you are going to change up the characters like the author and maybe give Paris a scene for the hair change explaining that it was like temp hair dye and she was tired of always straightening her hair every day so decided to go back to natural. Also the posing of Sabrina on the pillow made my neck hurt LOL, other then that awesome as always. Thanks for all the work you put into this.


As for new games or settings maybe a dystopian setting would work, part real world and part sci-fi. Or a high fantasy would work as well.

Thank you for the suggestions and I'm glad you liked the update!

The first game I do will possibly be set a bit in the future, but it's going to be more modern day, for sure.

 

[Pestilence]

Dude, Sasha is awesome! I dare not have our bro's relationship any other way. I hope you keep any sexual routes completely optional or at the very least don't change her. Shes by far my favorite character out of all VN's I've played and that's quite a feat considering the vast amount. Great job, looking to support soon.

 

[Yuri L]

When you use the relationship definer for twisted purposes

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

Dude, Sasha is awesome! I dare not have our bro's relationship any other way. I hope you keep any sexual routes completely optional or at the very least don't change her. Shes by far my favorite character out of all VN's I've played and that's quite a feat considering the vast amount. Great job, looking to support soon.

Wow, that's some high praise, man. Thank you! The sexual/romance route with every girl will be optional. But if you decide not to go on a girl's route, you're going to miss 90% of her content going forward. Just a warning!

When you use the relationship definer for twisted purposes

Haha, whatever your perv heart desires. Glad you're having fun

 

[Yuri L]

Haha, whatever your perv heart desires. Glad you're having fun

Actually I got that idea just for making this post when I came across the scene lol. Otherwise I'm playing the game by making Brandon the guardian and the girls his wards... boring but believable haha.

 

[Hermit76]

I really like Paris' new look! But she definitely needs some lashes on her own - something between the size of her fake lashes and none at all would be fine. But without her fake ones she almost looks a bit like an alien.
And generally there seems to be a rendering problem with the lashes. Sometimes it looks like the girl has two lines of lashes at the same time. I spotted this at Paris in the batthroom scene, but also, a bit less visible, at miracle in the last scene of the actual version.

 

[repuindy]

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Hey, my fellow pervs. As promised, PICTURE PERFECT updates are going to be quicker 2-3 weeks instead of 4-6 weeks.

I realize there hasn't been much Sasha content last couple of updates, but that definitely changes this upcoming Ch. 5. Though Paris gets a decent amount.

This update will also feature Sasha's first sexual content with you! >=D

Stay tuned, Guys! Writing the script now!

 

[varkatzas666]

I like the way this graphic novel has taken, my rating up to this version (Chapter 4) is 8/10
PS: It's a shame that you had to change the look of Paris

 

[N7Shepard]

I'm curious if there are plans to go back to previous chapters and remaster models such as Paris or the Author that were changed in the latest chapter to maintain consistency.

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

I like the way this graphic novel has taken, my rating up to this version (Chapter 4) is 8/10

I'm curious if there are plans to go back to previous chapters and remaster models such as Paris or the Author that were changed in the latest chapter to maintain consistency.

I've really been reading the comments and I went back to see if I can manage Paris' hair better and HAVE found a much easier way. so Paris will be getting her old hair back!! I will do this latest update again with her old hair when the next version comes out.

 

[assman1337]

i'm on the paris route but didn't get the spank paris option !
although paris's new hair is great i'm a bit disappointed it isn't blue anymore