VN Ren'Py Completed Picture Perfect [v1.0] [SuperWriter]

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SumTingWong0420

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SuperWriter said:
Spokesperson? You mean voice actors? Yeah, man. Trust me, it's not cheap. And the music I'm adding is custom music also, not free. Check my other game, HUNGER FOR CHAOS to get an idea of the music and how I use it. No voice actors for that one yet, but has music



I have 4 different voice actors for the 4 girls, Miracle, Sasha, Paris, and Sabrina and they are all comfortable with moaning and I know the one that plays Sasha is completely ok with making blowjob sounds, etc. Actually have to ask the others
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My anticipation level is Soo high rn I may have just expirenced a willy wiggle, but honestly that's some of the best news I've heard in quite a while even considering how much faster content is being released in general due to the quarantine stuff, can't wait >;D
 
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SuperWriter said:
Spokesperson? You mean voice actors? Yeah, man. Trust me, it's not cheap. And the music I'm adding is custom music also, not free. Check my other game, HUNGER FOR CHAOS to get an idea of the music and how I use it. No voice actors for that one yet, but has music
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Yes, and please excuse my bad English (translation programs are my best friends, even if they lie to me sometimes...)
As you mentioned, I tested your other game because of the music: it goes in the same direction as what I've been trying to do here. So I'm sure I'm gonna like this one too.
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I have 4 different voice actors for the 4 girls, Miracle, Sasha, Paris, and Sabrina and they are all comfortable with moaning and I know the one that plays Sasha is completely ok with making blowjob sounds, etc. Actually have to ask the others
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Oh my goodness, that wouldn't work for me! I just imagine the audition of these female speakers: I'd have a hard-on all the time when they make their "sounds" - that would be terribly embarrassing...
 
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I like the story. It was pretty funny dialogue.
The script just needed a little proofreading here and there but otherwise passable.
Didn't even need a walthough. Choices were easy to follow.
Hope to see more soon and hope it's bigger.....peace.
 
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I like the game two big criticisms though. One is the broken eye lash renders that pop up frequently. Either with clipping or being double layered and secondly sometimes the render positions seem strange. The sleeve in the play for one and Sabrina in one of the bed scenes.
 
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Ok.. so I am trying the voice version as I have not seen any other "patreon-made" visual novel with acting so this was a new. Just one comment I think it was worth making.

Given that you can name your character and put nicknames is understandable that the voice cannot say those words, and Sometimes expression that are written simply as "Wake up, DADDY" are simply voiced "Wake up". Which is totally fine.

However, I found the first line that Sasha says "I know you are always on the lookout for your next sugar daddy and stuff, but could you maybe keep DADDY out of your search?" that is voice "I know you are always on the lookout for your next sugar daddy and stuff, but could you maybe keep _____ out of your search?". That is, there is a big silence. Wouldn't saying "him" here be a more natural solution?

Again, just making some small comment, trying to improve it a little.
 
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Ayhsel said:
Ok.. so I am trying the voice version as I have not seen any other "patreon-made" visual novel with acting so this was a new. Just one comment I think it was worth making.

Given that you can name your character and put nicknames is understandable that the voice cannot say those words, and Sometimes expression that are written simply as "Wake up, DADDY" are simply voiced "Wake up". Which is totally fine.

However, I found the first line that Sasha says "I know you are always on the lookout for your next sugar daddy and stuff, but could you maybe keep DADDY out of your search?" that is voice "I know you are always on the lookout for your next sugar daddy and stuff, but could you maybe keep _____ out of your search?". That is, there is a big silence. Wouldn't saying "him" here be a more natural solution?

Again, just making some small comment, trying to improve it a little.
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I will definitely keep that in mind for the future but going back to the entire script while I'm working on the next update would be pretty difficult right now. But definitely, it's something that I will look into. Thanks a lot for pointing that out.

But how did you like the voice acting so far? You can be totally honest
 
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here is my unofficial android port of Picture Perfect CH.6 (Voiced-CH1).
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from now on my android ports of Ren'Py games have a 2nd, persistent save location like windows. if you uninstall an app, the save files and persistent data remain intact.
therefore the app needs the permission to access the public external storage, because it has to read and write outside its own external storage directories.
you have to grant the permission or the app is shut down.

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Come on, man. I went through a lot of trouble searching for the best 4 voice actors I could afford, and they killed it. Gives the game a whole new feel. At least try it out, please!
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News version out !

Step 1 : read the changelog
Step 2 : disappointed that there is no breakthrough in history
Step 3 : re-launched the game just out of curiosity of the new voices.
Step 4 : yearn for more

I hope we'll soon have a suite :)
 
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Really good game. I find the renders, story, and characters well done. The voices added only make it better.
SuperWriter said:
Come on, man. I went through a lot of trouble searching for the best 4 voice actors I could afford, and they killed it. Gives the game a whole new feel. At least try it out, please!
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The voice acting is excellent and definitely adds to the overall quality. Great game so far. Really enjoy every one of the characters.

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Regardless, definitely one of the better games on this site, and definitely worth support.
 
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Picture Perfect [Ch. 6 (VA+M)] [SuperWriter] - Original Size: 1.68GB

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