- Dec 4, 2016
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- Mar 18, 2019
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For any brave souls, has the writing improved at all or am i going to need to just pretend this is a slideshow instead ?
- May 10, 2018
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is it my imagination or do you hafta click 2-3 extra times to get the next dialogue to move..also..crashes alot..lol..but the extra clicking to move dialogue is annoying AF
- Apr 18, 2018
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The writing is surprisingly funny and interesting, this game's got good potential 
- Mar 18, 2019
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Great update
i am sure it will have a release for bugfix
i am sure it will have a release for bugfix
- Apr 25, 2018
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I don't know what to think of the story yet, is there a story at all? Some blah blah, stumble into a scene, jump somewhere else, next stumble into a scene... And the 2 to 3 extra clicks to get the next text/dialog or scene is annoying.
The pictures are pretty well done and the VN is in his early stages so maybe it will get better.^^
The pictures are pretty well done and the VN is in his early stages so maybe it will get better.^^
- Nov 30, 2018
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That was a short workday I went from dropping the keys off to lying in bed after the previous scene of just arriving to work And the ending was also a bit abrupt, Megan has got some nice booty on her and every scene with Lisa it looks like she wants to kill us
And the ending was also a bit abrupt, Megan has got some nice booty on her and every scene with Lisa it looks like she wants to kill us 
- Jan 3, 2019
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This fuck animation looks painfull
Where mc hands enters the ladies body.. in shots like this blender uses body collision so stuff like this dont happen other then that great update.
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Where mc hands enters the ladies body.. in shots like this blender uses body collision so stuff like this dont happen other then that great update.
- Sep 26, 2016
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A sequence of pics with some nonsensical dialogue attached.
This dev would be better suited rendering for someone else's writing.
This dev would be better suited rendering for someone else's writing.
- Nov 28, 2018
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Dude was right when he said I'd like the default name... that is if I'm not commenting on the wrong game again.
- Jun 16, 2018
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That dutch name... it made me laugh (moest lachen)
Great update. Models are top nodge. But the language/grammar..... sometimes it was really hard to read. (sorry I am one that reads instead of skipping stuff)
I can tell that dev of this dialogues is not a native english speaker. He is making wrong typo which is teached in early school. I knew the difference between YOU'RE and YOUR when i was FCKING 8y OLD, shame that adult's don't know that, as this is fcking simple.
As you pointed out, the dev is clearly not a native English speaker, which makes me confused by the rest of your comment, unless that is meant to be about native English speakers that constantly get those things wrong (along with the use of 'there' and 'their'). Don't get me wrong. I did find the dialogue rather painful to read.
Either way, it's usually best to ensure that your own use of the language is up to par before criticizing other peoples use of it, especially if they're not a native to the language and you are (the word is TAUGHT, not TEACHED).