Polyamory game? I may be rushing things here since the download hasn't even finished yet, but count me in.
EDIT:
Well, it seems I was rushing things a bit. By no means I wanna be a spoilsport, but... yeah, not exactly what I was expecting, even for a first release.
I simply do not feel the connection between the MC and his best friend. Well,they're roomies, and yes, they run a business together but... somehow, the connection is missing aaand... I don't feel either the build-up in that regard.
If the two of them were a couple, maybe fuckbuddies... AND IF they were sharing their mutual experiences, we could be talking about an open relationship/swinger, but by no means of polyamory. I know is early to say that but... I do not get the vibe, again because they don't feel to me like "best friends", I dunno, just sayin'.
I also have some complaints about the so-called dom, and I may be just whinning here, but this is a touchy subject for me. I feel that sadly, he behaves like a lot of so-called-by-themselves doms. What I mean by that, is I consider (Personally) he acts in a way a dom shouldn't. On top of that, A 200$ tip? And then he jumps to calling her 'pet'? When I was reading that I couldn't help but think "Another arrogant rich prick who thinks he can buy a girl he doesn't know".And the girl falls for it. It happens, I know it happens, but I lost any interest for her from that moment.
Also, not a fan of the nimphomaniac swimsuit girl. Neither of the MC who cannot even bring himself to ask her name at any point in their first meeting, but is ready to accept a BJ in the bathroom and a date, and sex without protection just to go home without even knowing her name after all that. Casual sex simulator with an easy anonymous girl and 0 connection between any character... sorry, I know is just a way to start a story, but is also the opposite of what I was expecting to find. :\
The good points: I like the characters appearances. Also, the overall premise has potential.
Way to solve the flaws? Raise the trust and chemistry between the MC and his friend, and tone down the not justified jealousy the MC feels or even better: replace it with real concern of her well-being, even if he actually has some romantic feeling for her. Let them be open about their respective dates. And, if swimsuit girl and the wealthy guy who thinks of himself as a dom but is buying a date for 400$ are going to be relevant characters in future updates, make them nicer, more human. If they're going to be just failed, short-term relationships, then leave them like they are right now. I would like to clarify these are just suggestions, and by no means I want to tell the devs which story they must tell. Just trying to be constructive from a very personal perspective of what I would do, so feel free to ignore me. In any case, I wish the devs good luck on their project.