Yeah I know that. but what I mean is that turning Ophelia or the sisters into a sinister character and going against one family member looks a little contradictory, of course you can expect anything from corruption, but so that their own family wants to humiliate their own boyfriend or get rid of They under some kind of influence, then if you look into in these stories in the future and they found out what they had done, how would they react? I think it would sound like a horror movie or some kind of psychological drama
But that's the thing with NTR evolution. We have already seen Hunter corrupting the girl into becoming his mistress. Him having their way with them is nothing new, while WWG is good at writing, it will become repititive if there is nothing new to the table.
Hunter corrupting the girls bodies by impregnating them is one thing, but the next step would be to corrupt their minds. That is where the corruption is total. Yes it might be nightmarish but that is kind of what the NTR needs to do, it needs to scale up.
At first it was just hunter getting more "touching" with the girls in chapter 1, then it escalated with them giving him blowjob, then he manage to fuck them and made them addicted to pleasure, then he manage to impregnate them while Sterling was in a coma.
Then Sterling was eaten by a bear while Hunter took over Ophelia and Aliza. AND THEN, Sterling was genderbend against his will, had a chip in his brain to make him docile, where he was forced to watch his family member become living sex doll for hunter and be fucked himself by hunter for the rest of his life.
How is THAT not the equivalent of a horror movie? PLZ answer that question. How the bad ends of chapter 11 is not a horror film?
There is always an escalation to the NTR. What would be better is specifically is that the corruption is no longer just with the body, it goes further than that. The complete corruption and humiliation would be that the girl turn against Sterling of their own will and are fully willing to manipulate in order to torture Sterling psychologically.
THAT is the nature escalation of the NTR, it needs to be more than the body, it needs to be the minds of the girls that are twisted to become as bad as Hunter.
