Quick notes on how to get the test version working a bit better:
1) Images. Go into game/images and copy the contents of V5, V6, V7 and V8 into the images directory. If it asks for an overwrite, say 'No.'
2) If you're like me, half of the options in the game don't work. I'm not sure if it's complete or not, but take the script.rpy file I've uploaded and copy it into your game directory. You'll need to restart the game from scratch, but (most) of the game should be working at that point.
3)I tried making some changes to the game to give it a few more options. If you like, try copying bchore.rpy into your game directory. I'm not 100% sure it's all solid, but it was just a test to see if I could reduce some of the grind a bit. Feedback would be appreciated.