disimulated

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I never enjoyed the first version, too rushed, too fast with everything.
Too much anal.

Anal fetish is a big part of these games, but the first version by the end seemed non-stop anal. It broke immersion because I felt that she would have been too raw and sore to perform or enjoy.
 
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baka

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exactly disimulated, that part is very important for the character development, to feel that she is alive, not just a doll made to please men.
 

Wutzel

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I´m a bit frustrated about the mc girl, at the beginning she is smart and so. But now later in the game she acts so dumb and let her blackmailing and then the scene with andrew with paul she acts so dumb again. She does have never been accept any shit from them two assholes, the whole thing anger me really! I hope that dumbness from her are go away again...
 
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BUsybat

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I´m a bit frustrated about the mc girl, at the beginning she is smart and so. But now later in the game she acts so dumb and let her blackmailing and then the scene with andrew with paul she acts so dumb again. She does have never been accept any shit from them two assholes, the whole thing anger me really! I hope that dumbness from her are go away again...
To be fair, it will always be hard in mixing a believable " blackmail " plot while mixing in porn and common sense. At least she "tried" to voice record which failed. One could argue there could have been another choice where it succeeded but there are already a lot of variables in other plots already such as Wilson/Hank BF, complication with beach boys and beachman, Miyagi/Simon training/love.

So yea, lets give PW a break. It cant always go our way.
 
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ray3dave

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I´m a bit frustrated about the mc girl, at the beginning she is smart and so. But now later in the game she acts so dumb and let her blackmailing and then the scene with andrew with paul she acts so dumb again. She does have never been accept any shit from them two assholes, the whole thing anger me really! I hope that dumbness from her are go away again...
I totally get your point. What I totally like about the game is that our MC is no victim, she just opens up more and more.

But I also agree with BUsybat. In order to have a vast variety of exhibition it makes sense to implement blackmail and tell the stories in way that she finds out it is a kink of her to be forced to do the things she wants to try out anyway but would not dare to do it without being forced - and that's what Paperwork is trying to achieve for her.

This way she kind of stays in control - and is not a victim at all. And that should be the main reason for her sometimes deciding in a "dumb" way. She should be aware of that, but against better judgement opt for the naughty path, simply out of curiosity.

So, in the end I disagree with you, because I think all in all Paperwork does a great job to keep her dancing on the thin line of taking unreasonable turns out of good reasons - feeling empowered, liberated, enjoying it. That's what makes the MC and Paperworks game so unique.

Still I understand that in some situatuations one could say Paperwork goes a bit over the edge. Hey, it's a porn game! And most probably the best out here (especially for the lack of grind and repetitous [EDIT: repetitive!] stuff. The reoccuring events evolve smoothly and are not repeticious [EDIT: repetetive] at all [note: I don't know how to write repetitios / repeticious].
 
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meanguy

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I never enjoyed the first version, too rushed, too fast with everything.
the pace of this version is much better and I hope it will be kept like that,
now we are very close to get into all that crazy fuck-feast like the first version has.
so, I hope Paperwork can make wonders and make it hot, while still keep the integrity of Amy in a way that will not destroy her personality.
also, Im not much for random fucks with strangers, and I would like emotions and feelings to be involved as well.
like if Amy "cares" about someone its very hot if she let that dude touch her, that is why I would love, taboo moments with Stephen, Amy is concerned about his "problems". I also could enjoy the homeless dude, she cares about him, and that could lead to something hot.
while, if Amy is in a situation where "dudes" that she actually dont know much about, is having their way, sure, its hot in that moment, but after, I will feel that Amy lost a bit of her integrity and that will affect later encounters.

I tried the first version but dropped it immediately, too fast, too soon, no tension build. The new version on the other hand, I simply find it amazing. One of the best games I have come across.
 

fjabbegreven

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repetitous stuff. The reoccuring events evolve smoothly and are not repeticious at all [note: I don't know how to write repetitios / repeticious].
You were pretty close: : P - I'd go with repetitive instead as it's a synonym and the spelling is easier to sound ; )

Otherwise I completely agree with your post.
 
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Wutzel

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I totally get your point. What I totally like about the game is that our MC is no victim, she just opens up more and more.

But I also agree with BUsybat. In order to have a vast variety of exhibition it makes sense to implement blackmail and tell the stories in way that she finds out it is a kink of her to be forced to do the things she wants to try out anyway but would not dare to do it without being forced - and that's what Paperwork is trying to achieve for her.

This way she kind of stays in control - and is not a victim at all. And that should be the main reason for her sometimes deciding in a "dumb" way. She should be aware of that, but against better judgement opt for the naughty path, simply out of curiosity.

So, in the end I disagree with you, because I think all in all Paperwork does a great job to keep her dancing on the thin line of taking unreasonable turns out of good reasons - feeling empowered, liberated, enjoying it. That's what makes the MC and Paperworks game so unique.

Still I understand that in some situatuations one could say Paperwork goes a bit over the edge. Hey, it's a porn game! And most probably the best out here (especially for the lack of grind and repetitous [EDIT: repetitive!] stuff. The reoccuring events evolve smoothly and are not repeticious [EDIT: repetetive] at all [note: I don't know how to write repetitios / repeticious].
Thx 4 the answer, I get what you mean and see it in an other light. Thank you four info and feedback!
 
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Kalenz123

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But I also agree with BUsybat. In order to have a vast variety of exhibition it makes sense to implement blackmail and tell the stories in way that she finds out it is a kink of her to be forced to do the things she wants to try out anyway but would not dare to do it without being forced - and that's what Paperwork is trying to achieve for her.
I disagree. You don't need to be forced into exhibitionism. Some are just born like that. ;)
 

secretcador

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Alright I already play countless of hours, keep repeating over and over again, are there no vaginal sex scene for simon consensual path? it seems the oral is as far as it goes.
 
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