VN Ren'Py Abandoned Project SAGE [Act 1 v0.19d] [Paperwork]

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fjabbegreven

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BUsybat said:
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Sounds good, hopefully it'll reignite his passion.

Especially if it leads to an act1 enhanced edition, but might be a better idea to note them down and let them simmer for a bit, while working towards moving the story forward. There's some secret agent stuff we've only just scratched the surface on, but I'd be willing to trade that for another drinking game night with the boys :p

That's my personal favourite scene so far in the game - which is yours?
 
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btn2k3

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frozenfeet said:
The girl's body shape in this game looks a lot like my custom CBBE preset for SkyrimSE. Which I like, quite a lot.
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Yep, reminds me of Demonfet at 100 weight (my favorite shape in UUNP) or possibly Top Model at 100 weight.
Been a couple of years since I merged all those shapes into UUNP...
 
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Myster_E

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Longo McFap! said:
I don't think she made it exclusively for me, just didn't post it here. So I would say feel free to use it and spread the word about PS :)
Btw, is there anyone else waiting for the update like ...
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I swing back and forth between 'very excited and wanting to ask Paperwork for an update' to 'Give PW space, they just came back, dont spook them'.... it's exhausting lol.
 
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I rather liked the game but there is quite a lot of forced situations; while i can cope with some, others irk me. She is presented as smart and naive at the same time but it's only believable to a certain extent.

I wish we can ignore homeless Sam, he has no impact on the story, it would be the same without him. Well, shorter content then. You can even make her prostitute herself to buy him food, but at least you have the choice here.

But what disgusted me was the relation with the low beta nerd Simon (1/10 on the beta scale). I didn't want anything to do with him, rejected him but then she saved him from bullies by kissing him!? WTF man. And then you can't really stay away from him, she even quite like it... At least if we have to pretend to be a couple, give us the choice to put him in his place and avoid any physical contact, he wouldn't even dare say a word.

Also not enough lesbian content, just a little teasing from Kelly. Though there is room for it.
 
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Yeah there are some weird stuff, like her calling the guys "bro" and them "sis" when her brothers litterally died a few months (year ?) back, like wth that's really either insensitive to her, or like she didn't care that much about her brothers.
Also not being able to reject Matt for like 200 years.
 
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Myster_E

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dolfe67 said:
But what disgusted me was the relation with the low beta nerd Simon (1/10 on the beta scale). I didn't want anything to do with him, rejected him but then she saved him from bullies by kissing him!? WTF man. And then you can't really stay away from him, she even quite like it... At least if we have to pretend to be a couple, give us the choice to put him in his place and avoid any physical contact, he wouldn't even dare say a word.
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I believe its a little more complicated. Basically, from my understanding, Amy is getting blackmailed by the Principal (Miyagi). He tries to extorts her sexually and if not he makes it so she wont be able to pass highschool thus preventing her from attending College/University. Simon comes into play because Miyagi wants Amy to help Simon not be such a loser. so the choice to interact with him was never hers to make. She does get to choose how you deal with Simon. 1- She can reject him which causes Simon to get more angry/corrupt causing him to also extort Amy. He knows she has to do what his uncle says so he takes advantage of it. 2 - Amy can sympathize for Simon because of being bullied and having that type of uncle so she tries to boost his confidence by giving him some experience with a female. or 3 - Amy can be into nerd and form an actual relationship with the guy.
 
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baka

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remember that this is a porn game and PW is just a dude.
it need to have some "unbelievable" situations to speed things up and to allow a character to "get close" to Amy, otherwise we will never get anything. if the dev is trying too much to make it as close possible to reality it will became a boring novella that will be about real life shit that in the end is quite boring.
 
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Zangief86

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baka writes true words :p
It is a porngame, deal with it.

That said, there are, indeed, some unbelievable situations, but most of the writing has a solid base in reality. She is not just a stupid protagonist who has to endure what is happening with her but she can also be little bit slutty and explorative if she wants to. the progress is too fast for real life, but still you get why she is where she is.

That's what i love about the game at least ;-)
 
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Myster_E said:
I believe its a little more complicated. Basically, from my understanding, Amy is getting blackmailed by the Principal (Miyagi). He tries to extorts her sexually and if not he makes it so she wont be able to pass highschool thus preventing her from attending College/University. Simon comes into play because Miyagi wants Amy to help Simon not be such a loser. so the choice to interact with him was never hers to make. She does get to choose how you deal with Simon. 1- She can reject him which causes Simon to get more angry/corrupt causing him to also extort Amy. He knows she has to do what his uncle says so he takes advantage of it. 2 - Amy can sympathize for Simon because of being bullied and having that type of uncle so she tries to boost his confidence by giving him some experience with a female. or 3 - Amy can be into nerd and form an actual relationship with the guy.
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she can avoid anything sexual with both the principal and simon at least for now, but the catch is that you need too date the guy from the beginning matt´s friend i can´t remember his name.
 
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aristarh2007

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Come on, guys! Wanna real choises? You have it in real life!

Think, Paperwork have to cut some branches, because the game become more and more complicated in every version. This will make logical holes or errors, cause it impossible searching _every_ player's step! Don't want waiting each new version 4-6 months.
 
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Myster_E

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i doubt he will cut the branches completely. But each update is suppose to be one in game day. So its not like each day needs to have all the branches. if anything it seems like the branches are just expanding more, which i'm totally cool with and looking forward too.
 
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I can assume some cutting is gonna happen because of non-linear increase of needed content to provide. It's understandable, but could be done not by cutting the whole branches but by releasing some paths before another (may be even decided by polls).
My only wish for now regarding the plot - is to make transitions in and between paths a little bit more manageable, that's all.
 
atlas114

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would love to know the current progress on v.20. I know PW is slowly getting back into things given all he has gone through but it would be to see where he is at. i think i can speak for many as we want to see what adventures Amy gets herself into next
 
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