Actually I had planned to write something about the recent update here, and I did not do so far because of no reason. It was TOTALLY up to my alley, I liked it - and because of that it just was not enough. It was just great fun and I wanted more.
I really think, paperwork, this will be even more epic than it already is if you take your time and love for all the story lines and invent more, all the different story options should carry on for a while and get stretched out a lot, because they are real goooood (real life, fantasies and dreams - maybe you could even add drug and alcohol induced trips? You could go completely crazy with that and try out any stuff you want, aliens and monsters or MILO_MANARA-like surreal sequences.)
By the way, I already told my doubts, especially about the uncle story line
(and so far I also totally hate the college/university/whatever stuff with the nerd and the headmaster-or whatever, but I trust you to make it right. On the other hand I love what you do on the modelling and bar job - with the side story wih the workers and the selfies for her BF [let's get rid of him, please!!! But not on the cost of the selfie stuff. How are you gonna do that?] - just GREAT!!! [I really love how you handle that. The online-sexy-pictures versus the boyfriend-selfies, this is so amazing, you are a great guy. Beautifully put. I guess someday there won't be so much difference between boyfriend stuff and online-stuff if you play it right...] - and everythiung related to the beach and the bathroom at home is just great [I would love it if you gave a meaning to her watching herself in the mirror, e.g. arousal or something else, maybe more encouragement of showing her beauty to the world if she likes what she sees - this shoud be commented on when she scrutinizes herself in the mirror...]. In general I don't like the story with that neighbour, but it is so nicely developped that I am looking forward to what's going to happen next. And as I said many times before, I don't want her to stick to ONE guy in particular, but apart from that I would apreciate anyone getting their share - that's my life motto anyway. Maybe she should get a bit more careless about what kind of selfies she sends to whom?)
, but then again, it seems to offer options, and I really do appreciate that stuff with posting sexy and lewd pictures online, this can lead to so many great stuff (offers for modeling, escort jobs, sexual harrassment, stalkers - which she will overpower because she's our herione - and, well, pole dancing and prostitution stuff, of course...
I think you found an unique way, other than in your first approach. Stick to ridiculous funny sexy masturbation and people jerking off at the sight of our gorgeous sexy heroine as long as you can, than overdo it. It is so funny and hilarious. Someday, in twenty to fifty great updates, you still can make her fuck around like you did on your very nice first approach (everybody wants to see this in the end, but we've got way to go, I hope).
One of the greatest ideas ever is how you developed her feeling more comfortable wearing less at home. I have no words to thank you for that.
What's bothering at the moment is that there are so many story lines. So you have to decide whether to explore one story line to the end or to continue each of them step by step. So far it seems you do the latter which seems pretty fine to me.
So, what is this all about? I just want to spur you on, take your time, spread the story out, no rush, keep it nice, keep it simple, keep her a fun person and out of harm, because we love her.
To finish this post, one more thing that you could implement sooner or later into her path to depravity is GLORY HOLE stuff, unless you don't find it appropriate for a woman of her kind. Just mentioning it occasionally.
